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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Finally I am here to comment..

Daisy what did u do this???

This was the most emotional part of the entire story...
Right from the start till the end...
though in between we did get a little bit soothing of Asad performing and Zoya present there...
But that was last of the bubbly Zoya in the update...

Felt so sad and so bad Zoya... but yes Assad was there to save her as always...

Loved the way Asad gave open challenge to gafoor...
just the way A sher gives a challenge ..
The song chosen was good too...

The sequence at the college it was nice and good and magical for Asya. But personally I felt that part stretched a bit more with so many songs in a sequence...
Personally I am not a fan of song sequences in a story but u weave it well... but somehow I felt that sequence was a bit more and not really taking the story forward so much..

Azlan what to say about him...
At one point I feel sad for him and the other I'm so angry...

This time what Dilshad did even I can't forgive her for that...
I hope Malik uncle takes good revenge from Feroz..

Why did Arsalan suddenly come up with marrying Anaya...
That definitely was like pity and also mmm what do I say like kuch galat his hai to uske badle mein much acha karna..

But I hope Anaya does get the happiness she deserves

Aahil was also good..

Ayaan the stupid boy along with a stupider Asad hehe...
Inko koi samjhao bewakoofo...

All in all a very very heart touching part.

me too felt the same
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Always_asya

OMG OMG
What an update Daisy?
Just can't get over the update still
And this is the first time I couldn't able to read whole update in one go 😆
i wanted each and every detail sink in my mind
I was ecstatic to see that even the last post was filled with update instead the note
Seriously I never want the update to end...sigh
Update was truly awesome
Asad was beaten mercilessly by that feroz due to azlan's stupidity
He never used his brain. .seriously how can he take asad's step father's advice knowing everything
Ayaan gave him good lesson
Loved the way asad came where gaffour was going on and on about his works
I really like that Asad revealed what he did for kasauli's people
Asad took zoya with him somewhere far from everyone and shared the grave secret of his painful past
Zoya couldn't able to see him in pain and ran away when others came there
Loved first asya hug
Asad showed zoya what she meant to him in his own way
Loved their developing relationship
But as happy moments comes to end so was their
I loathe that sameer who damaged zoya's soul more than herbody
He made her believe that she doesn't deserve grace and love of anyone
On the other hand asad had to behave like that disgusting sameer to get zoya out of shock
Both avoid each other especially asad and Zoya took it wrong way but her turmoil was right according what she went through
So asad's both sisters going to get married to farooqi brothers
I am happy that malik suspended both azlan and zain
Overall beautiful emotional update
Can't wait for next update
But I know it will take time
But please try to update soon this time atlest do not take whole month
Thanks for full fledged update


LOL don't get used to such long updates it took me an entire day to edit and update this! 😆 But I'm happy you enjoyed it..I love writing AsYa falling in love scenes so much I almost don't want to reach the part where they are already in love. I know Azlan can be an idiot MAJORITY of the times but I still have a soft spot for him...Asad ka beloved bhai hai woh yaar...😆 even though he doesn't even have 1% of Asad's brain and intelligence..I hate Sameer more than you trust me. You have NO idea how hard it was for me to write all that..but I had to..I had to voice all those women who unfortunately have to go through this and I had to state just a fraction of what they go through emotionally, physically and mentally in the aftermath.

So I'm thinking I might do the update every 3 weeks or maybe 2 per month but make them shorter so like approximately half of what it is now. That way tum logon ko bhi saans ayega and it won't be a burden on me either. HOWEVER, that excludes if something is going on in my personal life i.e. exams, family events, holidays etc., then I'm sure you can understand if there is some distance between updates but other than that I might do this.

xoxo!! I LOVE the next part 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Res

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wow wow wow wow wow👏
that one definitely pull at my heartstrings my emotions and hit really really close to home😭
it took me a entire day to get through the update.
my comment i dont know how it may be...it may be all jumbled.
it must have taken alot out of you to write this update
i totally understands how it feels of getting the of victims out because over 75% are silent because they are afraid they will be blamed for the incident.
so getting to the update
ouch asad was beaten so severely and just left hanging there
it was a good view for his beloved brother and the haveli people
I was so happy he used his injured self to his advantage
pep rally oh yeah gaffur got speechless with asad presence and he reach to the people in his best way
sadda haq definitely his city his kingdom his people and he is the only one who care for them and not himself.
zoya couldnt be more proud of him and more in love with him he took her breath away
aww her knight in shining armour dont matter where he is what he is doing he will always be there to save her
will you save me will you come with me ...yes yes yes yes always
and then the bedroom at the cabin scene so intense so emotional she cant see him so hurt
she fell apart knowing she cant do anything to help him and ease his pain
aww the first hug,,, zoya are you ok and she just breakdown in his arms then she spent the night watching over him and comforting him and thinking of the possibilities
and the morning after she just ran and dont look back
asad search for her in his early morning wake up
so aahil got lucky asad sees the care and love he has towards aisha and gives his blessing
he is damn right they need to look out for themselves and their happiness and not bother about other people who dont even consider them a part of their circle.
omg omg the performance at the art festival he has to let her know what she means to him his eyes search for her
the performance was all for her every song every verse and a great political campaign presentation
and when she heard him she just ran forgetting all else but the wolf lurk
asad calls her out well he didnt name names and feelings but he made her dance his favourite dancer and the wolf watches
and so she sends him home all jolly to go take care of him an hour later but the time never came
asad confrontation with azlan wa too easy he let him go easy he cut all strings but not before telling him abt the painful past of when his father beat him nearly to death for eating his prince birthday cake
omg and tht is the incident where azlan and asad met and became friends
so rashid the spineless creature has alot of blood on his hand
aahil and azlan confrontation was like really can i slap azlan in his face he is sorry asadis born he is sorry aisha is born but aahil,told him and told him right
there is a huge difference between asad and azlan asad care and love both his sisters equally but azlan only thinks of his onw sister and his royal pain in the ass family
he was shocked to know what asad gave haseena to not cancel the wedding.of aahil and anaya
so finally azlan decides to stand up for both his sisters and face off with his despicable family especially his heartless and cold of a bitch mother shireen.
the arsalan and anaya idea was that always a part of your story or did I plant that seed
but what a beautiful seed and thought it was and I am glad to see it comes to light
if any man presented himself like arsalan did even I would have said yes tht is if I wa single.
so anaya may have some happiness love and respect in her future with an amazing man away from her family
love arsalan seeking asad blessing before all else for anaya.
someone really needs to put azlan in his place he needs to stop with his temper tantrum but arsalan told him too did you stand up to your mother when she told u to put ur brother in jail and cant believe he got tht idea from asad step father and he took it and use it really azlan you are a carbon copy of your parents heartless and spineless.
and now we come to the hardest part of the update
the incident to zoya was so graphic but it was needed for tht climax for the update
sameer need to be hung by his b**ls when asad do find him and abused the same way after they beat him black and blue leaving not a single part of his body free from torture
and zoya my poor poor zoya i could understand the taunts the blame the depession that is all happening to her i have experience it and live with it for my entire life.
but I want my cheery zoya back I want asad angel back I want asya back to their frenemies self
when asad realizes she was his angel in the snow wow but he couldnt dwell on that he had to save her
or else his world will be shattered the thing he had to do to get her out of there he had to become shaan and not be the gentleman asad and also what he had to do to get her out of shock he cant even live with himself and he cant even face her .
and now she is thinking she is too disgraceful and believing all the names she was called make her favourite brother and the man of her dreams cant face her
I love her reaction on seeing asad and getting up to get his coffee he is her healer he is her medicine but they have to find that time to have that face to face to move forward
omg plz asad find tht secret soon after she lets u back into her life of her cutting herself she is so much hurting herself.
the torture and the blame the men in zoya life went through was heart felt
loved arsalan putting his grandmother in her place it was deja vu and history repeating itself
so she had put her daughter out of her life and family too.
so finally some good things a proposal and maybe a double wedding that would be so nice but how is it possible will it be azlan giving anaya away without his family approval because we see the old weasels razia is finding for the beautiful girl.
so asad and zoya comes face to face but he cant look at her his guilt is too strong for what he had to do to get her out of shock but I think zoya has no recollection of tht she just found comfort peace and solace in his arm and she knew without a doubt that asad can never and will never hurt her
so he told her she is very beautiful after ayaan compliment ...ayaan knows she loves asad and seeing that he will have to be the one to make her realize it because she is in love with a clueless idiot too
asad said her he is sorry for what he did and she said thank you for saving me with a kiss on his cheek but why does it feel like zoya is kissing him goodbye
plz plz dont do tht no separation of asya let them find there way back to each other and truly become asya.
so so waiting for more
plz dont let it be another month because at this rate we will get asya marriage till in October if it is one update a month
cont soon plz pretty plz


First of all I am sorry that this world is such a cruel place where you unfortunately can say that "I can relate" to what Zoya has been through or that it hits really close to him. Trust me, I know..I've been there too unfortunately even if it wasn't AS bad as what Zoya went through or maybe unfortunately what you went through but assault is still assault no matter how big or small or even if you don't realize it at first. So yes, it too a lot out of me to write this update.

Now unto the update - YES! Watch out for Mayor Asad (I mean I'm not even going to pretend that there is suspense here because we all know Asad will win 😆) & as far as haveli folks torturing Asad goes, unfortunately their pagalpan doesn't end here and there is more grief for Asad. I love that you loved the update so much 😆! LOL no I always had the intention of marrying Anaya and Arsalan, right from the start. I wanted to dwell on it further and show how Arsalan always thought of this after Aahil said he wants to marry Aisha, because Arsalan was already not happy with his own arranged engagement but people here are obsessed with AsYa so others scenes have to be minimum which is why it might feel a little out of the blue or forced but it was always going to be this way. You are just a very sharp reader who catches on very quick 😆. For the Farooqui's Asad is not just a friend but their family so he will always come before Haveli folks. Don't worry when Asad gets his hands on Sameer he will be ONE sorry bas***d. For now though unfortunately Zoya will take time to get over this. Asad is going to find out about her cutting in the next part. Arre October mein kaise wedding hogi part 35 tak AsYA will be married..so this summer. But I will try for smaller but more frequent updates and yes it is going to be a double wedding and it is going to be soon!

xoxo - hope you enjoy the next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: piyalijpr

Very very emotional part..i was crying while reading whatever from pain zoya had to go through..hw can be someone sooo cruel..i hope asad us sameer ko kutte ki maut mar dale jaan se..ek time to mujhe laga ki tumko itna highlight nhi karna chahiye tha harrasing wala matter or asad zoya bina kuch jyada harm hue time pe bacha leta..it was heart breaking imagining zoya covered with bites and all..bt nw i can feel the pain woman had to go through when they got harrassed or raped..kutte ki maut marna chahiye har rapist..

Nw coming to the story Hatts off to you!!!!ek ek emotion bohot ache se describe kiya hai tumne daisy..i just want ki zoya jald hi pehle jesi ho jaye..or asad or zoya ko realise ho jaye they love each other


Unfortunately a LOT of cruel dogs like Sameer live in this world and there a lot of Zoya's who have to go through something like this. Don't worry kutte se bhi worse maare ga Asad usse. I wanted to highlight it because otherwise you would never HATE sameer ENOUGH and not highlighting it would not allow you to empathize with Zoya on this level, it wouldn't accurately describe what girls like Zoya go through and it wouldn't be fair or just. Since I did, you were able to feel what women who are assaulted go through.

Thank You Thank You Thank You 😆 when I started the story I never thought I myself would enjoy writing it or reading it this much either. The two idiots will realize soon but thats not to say they won't be more annoying and not admit to each other. Also, Zoya will take time pehle jaisi hone mein

xoxo - Hope you enjoy the next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AsadZoyaILU

Part 28 was awesome I loved it. Can't wait for part 29 plz update every asap. Wen will u updateat next part


Few weeks at least but sometime in Feb!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: piyalijpr

Tell me one thing when will zoya become normal coz i can't see her like this..n when will asad n zoya will realise their love..ab or wait nhi hota😊please try to update ASAP..n yeahh one more thing i want ki asad us sameer ko buri tarah maare😛😛


Yaar 😆 first you all wanted Asad to find out about Sameer and now you want Zoya to become normal so quick again...waqt lagta hai to get over something this big..but don't worry she will become normal eventually. Asad and Zoya will realize their love in a few parts but they will still be annoying and not tell one another...it will take a lot of mehnat from Ayaan and everyone for that miracle to take place.

xoxo - hope you enjoy the next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessSumbal

Nice update.

Zoya ko jaldi normal kar do.
Aur us sameer ki asad wo halat kare k wo mafiya mage zoya sy.us sameer ka b rape karwao


Don't worry Asad bauhat maare ga but it will take time for Zoya to become 100% normal again yaar...it takes time to get over something like this unfortunately.

xoxo - Hope you enjoy next part!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Mummyoftwo2012

Amazing update as always..!! But this time i was crying through the update. Wow, it was such an emotional and dark update. I let myself sink in it and sink I did. I'm fotunate not to have gone through anything remotely close to what zoya went through but I felt her pain as my own. Good work with describing the emotions of both zoya and asad. Even asads turmoil was so heartfelt and he's tears made y heart bleed.
They really hit rock bottom in this part, now the only way has to be up!! I hope they find their way back to each other very soon as the feelings they were discovering were so beautiful.

Will be waiting excitedly for part 29 and the big revelation.


Thank You!! Trust me I know the feeling, I had a really hard time to write it and do it justice and for that I too had to feel Zoya's pain as my own and Asad's too. Yup! FOR NOW, this is rock bottom and now they will be going up, TOGETHER (for some time). I am such an excited fangirl when I write their feelings and love story trust me. 😆. Yup! I feel like everyone has just been waiting for this revelation since Part 1.

xoxo - Hope you enjoy the next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: tanvi_mittal29

Superb update ... 👏
This was so sad and emotional... Both had to go through so much... I just hope they find their way to each other soon... I don't like them not talking and hiding their feelings..

Waiting for the next one eagerly... 😛


It will be up sometime this month. Trust me 29 is FULL of Asya talking and sharing a lot of feelings and emotions, Ya'll will LOVE it.

xoxo - hope you enjoy the next part!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima30

I'm feeling Zoya's pain and cried with her as I read the update! Asad feels helpless understandably! The Farooqui Brothers are amazing! I love them!

I can't wait for the next update...want my Asya to talk to each other and share everything...

Both sisters will marry the brothers! 😃


I too LOVE the Farooqui Brothers. AsYa will talk a lot in the next part so you'll definitly enjoy that and yes both sisters will marry both brothers and it will be a grand and very enjpyable wedding..I believe you'll love it.

xoxo - Hope you enjoy the next part.


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