#2 - AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 28 - Page 130 - 31/01/18! A/N Pg 132! - Page 92

Originally posted by: hatelove2012

I don't have words to describe how heart wrenching it was. I could not stop crying. It was sad. I wish no one has to go through this. Those bas***ds needs to be punished. It was written so beautifully that I felt every pain, agony and emotional.

Originally posted by: Cancerian111

Beautifully written as usual.wonderful piece of writing must say.the way u portrayed a dark scenes and events of major social crime is beyond words. Its like feeling the pain of all characters in real. U started wd asad pain and end wd zoya pain showed beautiful connection of ur skills wd these characters and story. Love every bit of it.no words to define each scene individually as its persona of perfection for me. I m not the judge here and even hav no writing skills but for me ds part is the bestest of all till now as it contains complete picture of art of writing content. Heads off Daisy for such an amazing part. Now more eager for early updates(sorry become greedy to read more frm u even though i understand its not an easy thing to write and present these long updates).keep writing more and fast.my waiting for next update is already started:)

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

It was awesome update
Loved it
Azlan scene when he saw Asad in cell was emotional. He felt his brother pain. He took all the punches from ayaan.
Rally scene was wonderful. Asad won the heart of kasuli people. Now nobody can stop him for taking part in election.
Time for face off between dilshad and Haveli people. She is a lioness & she showed everyone their place. Azlan felt guilty & he got the punishment from mother. All were shocked but one turn from dilshad & they were quite.
Zoya tried to treat Asad's wounds but it's not easy for her. Finally she cried hugging him. Aahil treated him. Opening for festival was blast. Asad sincere confession was beautifully written with song selection. Sameer saw asya interaction and not happy at all.
Asad azlan meeting was nice. He showed mirror to azlan. Both were devastated.
No girl/women/ child deserves to be treated like what sameer did to zoya. She was totally broken. It's very hard to read the consequences but it is more difficult to write & I appreciate your efforts. I just pray that no one will face this type of situation but the society we live in, is full of these type of animals who think that they owned everyone. It was very emotional. Arsalan & aahil gave some piece of mind to Asad & ayaan. They felt guilty as they thought they failed in protecting zoya.
I want zoya to stand for herself now & it's time for people like sameer that we all stand together for getting justice.
Arsalan ask Anaya to marry him & he wants the life partner like her & she agreed finally.
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Finally I am here to comment..

Daisy what did u do this???

This was the most emotional part of the entire story...

Right from the start till the end...

though in between we did get a little bit soothing of Asad performing and Zoya present there...

But that was last of the bubbly Zoya in the update...

Felt so sad and so bad Zoya... but yes Assad was there to save her as always...

Loved the way Asad gave open challenge to gafoor...

just the way A sher gives a challenge ..

The song chosen was good too...

The sequence at the college it was nice and good and magical for Asya. But personally I felt that part stretched a bit more with so many songs in a sequence...

Personally I am not a fan of song sequences in a story but u weave it well... but somehow I felt that sequence was a bit more and not really taking the story forward so much..

Azlan what to say about him...

At one point I feel sad for him and the other I'm so angry...

This time what Dilshad did even I can't forgive her for that...

I hope Malik uncle takes good revenge from Feroz..

Why did Arsalan suddenly come up with marrying Anaya...

That definitely was like pity and also mmm what do I say like kuch galat his hai to uske badle mein much acha karna..

But I hope Anaya does get the happiness she deserves

Aahil was also good..

Ayaan the stupid boy along with a stupider Asad hehe...

Inko koi samjhao bewakoofo...

All in all a very very heart touching part.

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">LOL don't get used to such long updates it took me an entire day to edit and update this!😆 But I'm happy you enjoyed it..I love writing AsYa falling in love scenes so much I almost don't want to reach the part where they are already in love. I know Azlan can be an idiot MAJORITY of the times but I still have a soft spot for him...Asad ka beloved bhai hai woh yaar...😆even though he doesn't even have 1% of Asad's brain and intelligence..I hate Sameer more than you trust me. You have NO idea how hard it was for me to write all that..but I had to..I had to voice all those women who unfortunately have to go through this and I had to state just a fraction of what they go through emotionally, physically and mentally in the aftermath.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">So I'm thinking I might do the update every 3 weeks or maybe 2 per month but make them shorter so like approximately half of what it is now. That way tum logon ko bhi saans ayega and it won't be a burden on me either. HOWEVER, that excludes if something is going on in my personal life i.e. exams, family events, holidays etc., then I'm sure you can understand if there is some distance between updates but other than that I might do this.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">xoxo!! I LOVE the next part😳</font>

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

Glad you liked the part! Sorry if you felt the arts festival performance was a bit stretched but it was one of the most integral ones because it is what set Sameer off. But you are entitled to your opinion and I'm sorry if it wasn't up to the mark. Dilshad I can understand your sentiments towards I too have mixed feelings for that 😆. Malik uncle is not done punishing them yet. Actually it wasn't sudden. I always had the intention of marrying Anaya and Arsalan, right from the start. I wanted to dwell on it further and show how Arsalan always thought of this after Aahil said he wants to marry Aisha, because Arsalan was already not happy with his own arranged engagement but people here are obsessed with AsYa so others scenes have to be minimum which is why it might feel a little out of the blue or forced but it was always going to be this way...Arsalan too will say the same in the next part..and they will both be very happy together because they deserve it.

xoxo - Hope you enjoy the next part!

Originally posted by: PrincessSumbal

Daisy yr aj surprise update dy do na