#2 - AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 28 - Page 130 - 31/01/18! A/N Pg 132! - Page 89

Nice update.

Amazing update as always..!! But this time i was crying through the update. Wow, it was such an emotional and dark update. I let myself sink in it and sink I did. I'm fotunate not to have gone through anything remotely close to what zoya went through but I felt her pain as my own. Good work with describing the emotions of both zoya and asad. Even asads turmoil was so heartfelt and he's tears made y heart bleed.
They really hit rock bottom in this part, now the only way has to be up!! I hope they find their way back to each other very soon as the feelings they were discovering were so beautiful.

Will be waiting excitedly for part 29 and the big revelation.

Superb update ... 👏
This was so sad and emotional... Both had to go through so much... I just hope they find their way to each other soon... I don't like them not talking and hiding their feelings..

Waiting for the next one eagerly... 😛

I'm feeling Zoya's pain and cried with her as I read the update! Asad feels helpless understandably! The Farooqui Brothers are amazing! I love them!

I can't wait for the next update...want my Asya to talk to each other and share everything...

Both sisters will marry the brothers! 😃

I don't have words to describe how heart wrenching it was. I could not stop crying. It was sad. I wish no one has to go through this. Those bas***ds needs to be punished. It was written so beautifully that I felt every pain, agony and emotional.

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

To be honest initially I wasn't going to highlight it or make it graphic because every reader different so I didn't want controversy but then I thought about all those who go through something like this on the daily and rape victims and me not writing it unfortunately won't prevent it from happening..I wanted to give a proper feel of wat someone who unfortunately has to go through something like this fue to such animals feels like..their emotional state and so I went ahead with the full thing because we owe it to such people..not talking about it won't make it go away but this way we as humans will feel more empathy and a sense of remorse and humanity..it will cause us to think about this cruel world we live in and moreover it will do justice to those who have to go through something like this.

Beautifully written as usual.wonderful piece of writing must say.the way u portrayed a dark scenes and events of major social crime is beyond words. Its like feeling the pain of all characters in real. U started wd asad pain and end wd zoya pain showed beautiful connection of ur skills wd these characters and story. Love every bit of it.no words to define each scene individually as its persona of perfection for me. I m not the judge here and even hav no writing skills but for me ds part is the bestest of all till now as it contains complete picture of art of writing content. Heads off Daisy for such an amazing part. Now more eager for early updates(sorry become greedy to read more frm u even though i understand its not an easy thing to write and present these long updates).keep writing more and fast.my waiting for next update is already started:)

One question for you daisy
If maha was like a sister to Asad then why he hates her so much

Originally posted by: Always_asya

One question for you daisy
If maha was like a sister to Asad then why he hates her so much