#2 - AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 28 - Page 130 - 31/01/18! A/N Pg 132!

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@ridhi95

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Posted: 8 years ago

#411

Wonderful update 😊

loved it😊

thanks buddy for pm😊

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@Always_asya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

Full update hogaya Behen! Jaldi se parho and tell me how it is!

Haha Shukriya
I have read it and commented 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

#413

Nice update
Liked zoya way to blackmail him & Asad has to do what she said. Dilshad asked him to not meet Azlan & he thought its zoya who told her but it was Ayesha. Zoya was heartbroken by different reasons. She was scared by Asad reaction & it's hurt him as well. Dance sequence was wonderful. Both lost in each other. I hope zoya brothers come & talk to her as it's hurting her badly. Ayesha zoya scene was good. The way she assured zoya that she was part of her family, overwhelmed her. She was ready to fight for her. Asad respect increased after heard abt his past. He agreed for go to mangalpur. Waiting for next update soon or I say mid of may soon. Thanks for pm

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@hatelove2012

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Posted: 8 years ago

#414

Beautifully written dance sequence...I can totally picture them dancing...feel so bad for Zoya..her brothers are not able to face her and therefore not inviting to the engagement...so not good..for Ayaan I can totally understand..he is hurt cause he loves her and care about her.

Asad and Zoya are two broken pieces to make one whole...hope they find love and peace.

Can't wait for mangalpur.

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#415

Awesome awesome part..

Just loved reading it.

First that it was total asyaliscious

And second it was so full of entertainment

The dance part was written very well.

Your hard work did pay off..

And thanks for updating dear..

But what I enjoyed more was the shart part😆

Totally hilarious and loved Asad there..

Cutie pie he is.

The dilshad Asad convo was heart breaking

But totally sad for zoya

Wait for another 15 days is difficult but please try to write quickly and update quickly.

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#416

And the realization of love for them was so nicely written and explained.

Hope they get together soon which I think will not happen that soon.

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Mummyoftwo2012

@Mummyoftwo2012

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Posted: 8 years ago

#417

Another wa wa woom update. Loved it!!
The best part was the deal between asad and zoya. Omg, I could feel the mirth in zoyas behavior. So funny. And the coffe on her was just hilarious.
But what followed was heartbreaking. Asad and dilshaad convo was just so sad! And asads anger towards zoya was a bit scary. But zoya knows it in her heart, he would never physically hurt her.
Poor zoya, her brothers are cowards for not facing her. She is a destroyed soul and here the only ones she consideres family are breaking her even more. I hope asad finds out about her cutting herself and puts a stop to it.
The dance was awesome!!! So intense and so filled with tender love and wanting. Loved it.

Very good job in written. Your efforts really shine through.
Can't wait for the next update, but I will, patiantly. Because ur updates are worth all the wait in the world!!

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#418

One week passed and one remain
how much update done Daisy?

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DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: Always_asya
One week passed and one remain
how much update done Daisy?

Not a lot...I hvn't had much time to write so no update this coming weekend..probably have to say the weekend after that instead..

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#420

Chapter 19

As you said both of them are coming to know more details about each other!

Asad was truly jealous and insecure while questioning back Ayaan about his relation with Zoya

The answer anyways lead to more questions in his mind but relief to his heart

Glad the brotherhood served Akram for his actions.

Asad-Azlan are little by little sorting their difference with their baby steps.

Asad's love story has become the topic of discussion among the girls of Haveli and Rashid.

Hopefully he will sing happy love songs too..lekin raasta bahut lamba haina?

And then the blooing love of Aahil and Aisha.As Dilshad said,the girl is in trouble!

Now with his approaching engagement their love story i bound to take some twist

Hope her heart wont be shattered much and Ahil would realise what he actually wanted before its too late.

Dilshad and Aisha's convo about love and Zoya's response were all penned nice

The graveyard scene was great. Ayaan- Zoya convo was really moving.

Ayaan was totally hanging on her words from childhood all through this years. Their relation is one of the best-thing in this story for me (ofcourse after AsYa)

Zoya actually covered up for Asad as she didnt want the beautiful bond between the duo be harmed in anyway.

Guess the boys didnt know about the dead daughter of their grandparents as they didnt notice the pain look on their face during Ayaan's outburst.

Ayaan wanted some time for himself and also other brothers of Zoya couldnt find the courage to face her. They are being cowards as the poor girl is suffering all alone.

Asad is highly confused with all the different shades of Zoya that he came across. Poor guy!

Will Asad come to know about the relation between Zoya and Farooquis anytime soon?

And the muibat Zoya Farooqui actually came up with the idea of Asad in love with a girl(even though it is correct but the girl she thought is wrong)

So except the two obliviious fools everyone is noticing he changes in their demeanour towards each other!

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