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aanchal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav
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Waht a beautiful update Anchal 🤗... Luv ur writing styles Archu
So zoya rejected his proposal ..Bechara itana bhi kya straight forward bane ko bola tha asad ko ..ek din hua nahi or ye janab sidha propose he krne lage😆
But v know she rejected him due to her insecurities only...
Again this raiza can't she be little polite with zoya 😡 so hate her I wish zoya ne chai me red chilli daal hote instead of salt ..

So nw ayaan is all ready to play cuipid smart boy
But jash ne baahar that 2 6 months earlier ..Ye kuch jayada ni ho gaya 😆
Asad talking about zoya n her over acting 😆 ..
Nw zoya be ready fr humeira rapid fire ..
But but but ye kya kr dia..Zoya is her n asad going to London kyu kyu kyu ?? Hope in his absence she will realise her heart

Nw what will ayaan do bechare ka plan ke kharab kr dia tumhe anchal..

Bring asad back n want asya moments bahut Sara in next update ..

mera sweetu ka comment🤗

thank you so so soo much dear for your overwhelming comment😊

I'm so glad u liked it😃

i know asad was straightforward he should have realised being a girl she needs time but his character only is like that we say na jo baat dil pe vo zubaan pe, issliye toh Zoya usse emotionally challenged bhulati hai😆

and about zoya missing asad I'm not sure about this track dear

I'm confused and worried that it wont look real if i make her miss him...for missing someone they have to spend time with each other and they have hardly spend time with each other

tu ek din mein kisiko miss kar sakti hai kya...even if she has feelings she could wait but 1 month miss karna muje hajam nahi ho raha

kuch soachti hu iss bareme

im wandering how to make his absence felt

kuch toh karna padega

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aanchal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: Nik03
Wonderful update dear... 👏
Zoya rejected Asad due to her insecurity... 😕
Poor Asad...!!

Ayaan is so cute... 😆
Playing a catalyst in Asya love story... 😳
But plan flopped.. 😕
Asad went to London that too for a month...ohh!!
Zoya didnt know about it...!!

Exited to see what happens next...!!
Thanks for the pm n plz update soonish..!!
Love
Nik

thank you so much Nik for the overwhelming comment😊

yeah that cute guys plan flopped miserably😆

yeah asad is going to london lets c what happens after that

will try to update ASAP😃

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aanchal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: suganti
nice chapter.
asad proposed but zoya rejects.
ayaan made a plan but it flopped.
now asad is going to london for a month.
waiting to know what happens next.

thank u so much dear for the overwhelming comment😊

yeah ayaans plan failed miserably 😆

asad is going to london lets c what happens after that

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aanchal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: ridhi95
Wonderful update buddy
Well written
Continue soon
Excited for next part
Thanks Buddy for the pm
😊

thank you so much dear😊

I'm glad you liked it😃

will try to update ASAP

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aanchal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: Natalya_bedi
Asad is so straight forward...confessed his love in one take ...poor baby got rejected too...
But we all know...there is more to it...

thank you so much 😊

I'm glad you liked it😃

definitely, there is more to it😛😛

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aanchal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: Always_asya
Beautiful update Anchal
zoya rejected Asad
Ab yeh toh hona hi tha bcs Asad miya was super fast
zoya has her reason for rejecting him but he thinks other wise
ayaan made plan but failed miserably
and his excuse was really funny yr
loved the whole update
update soon
thanks for pm

finally dillu ka comment🤗

thank you so much dear for your overwhelming comment

yeah he was too super fast but aise harkate nahi karega toh usse emotionally challenged kaise bolegi zoya😆

haan yaar becharene itna aacha plan banaya tha but asad ne sab fail kar diya😆

will try to update ASAP😃

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aanchal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Are don't mention
U deserve it
Totally
I haven't still been able to express how it felt reading ur story
Its beautiful

Hehehe I know how it feels
Even k used to go all mushy when someone used to comment such thing on my stories
I know that feeling
I am glad if u feel motivated
Yaar I am talking too formal kya?
Hehee I love ur story
Jaldi se likho and you write amazing!

thanks yaar..I'm happy you liked it... I'm just an average writer

oh my god! you're a writer , i doubted it when i read your signature and i was above to check your posts also but that thing slipped from my mind, im foolish at times u know

now its too late but tommorow, I'm gonno stalk your posts and going to read your stories...I'm crazy about asya stories and seeing the how beautifully you have used the words in your signature ,i'm more exicted about it now😃

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aanchal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: riddhi1206
Hey just a. Req if u don't mind
Can u make an index and upate the title.of the story as well with the new parts
Its easier to find them

i understand sorry for the inconvenience dear

i always forget to do that

but as soon as i read this, i made the index below my 1st ch and also updated the tittle😊

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aanchal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: riddhi1206
Oh I just loved the next part!!
It was again amazing!
Haaye dil tut gaya
But yes she or anybody at her place would once think if they are even deserving that person because of their challenges!
So yes very natural and very beautiful
Asad and his emotions were well done
Short me in a.few.words u did.convey the emotions in an amazing way!
Lovely!
And ayaan is again the adorable creature
I loved the family moments... Really!
Amazing
Ayaan hired a choreographer for a function that has an unknown date
And the bride herself is confused
Hehehhe
Poor ayaan uska plan fail hogaya
Koi na...ayaan miya kuch toh hoga
Oh! Both are somewhere hurt during that convo of knowing each other
And if we say ayan is adorable then Humi is totally giving him takkar for this tag
She is damn adorable!
Let's see how the story shapes up
Loved it totally!!!!!
U write amazing!
Keep the good work!
Excited, really very excited for this one
The title itself captivates u saying bhai, aage aage dekho hota hai kya
Amazing!
Update soon

And a very very big thanks for the res!
Thank u so much!!
Take care!

thank you so much for such an overwhelming comment riddhi!😃

i can call you that right?

how come everytime your comment make me fall in love with this story more? thank you so much for doing that😊

and comming to the update

yes dil tutt gaya bechare ka aur vo bhi itna zyada ki he is leaving the country😆

on a serious note his character is only like that straightforward but this was too much

even i felt very bad for ayaan buri tarah se plan fail hogaya😆

thanks again for this lovely comment

you too take care dear😃

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shweta_yadav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: -loving_life-

mera sweetu ka comment🤗
thank you so so soo much dear for your overwhelming comment😊
I'm so glad u liked it😃
i know asad was straightforward he should have realised being a girl she needs time but his character only is like that we say na jo baat dil pe vo zubaan pe, issliye toh Zoya usse emotionally challenged bhulati hai😆

and about zoya missing asad I'm not sure about this track dear
I'm confused and worried that it wont look real if i make her miss him...for missing someone they have to spend time with each other and they have hardly spend time with each other
tu ek din mein kisiko miss kar sakti hai kya...even if she has feelings she could wait but 1 month miss karna muje hajam nahi ho raha
kuch soachti hu iss bareme
im wandering how to make his absence felt
kuch toh karna padega

U hv a point y she miss him that 2 bas two days ke mulakat me ..

Sab prbm ka solution cancel asad's trip 😆