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Ashii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: --Mirage--
A Great update
A rushed one nevertheless interesting
So much happened..
I had to read it twice as so much happened...
AsYa met...
Excited for the next part

thank you arpita

yeah it was lil bit rushed one but jitni jaldi zoya gayi thi us se bhi jaldi aa gayi

acha hua na 😆

actually i wanted to concentrate on main thing like AsYa face 😳

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Monali5
Amaaazing update. Update soon waiting for Asad's reaction

thank you

will update tomorrow In Sha Allah

stay tuned

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Ajuzangel
Omg this was something can't explain in words
Really love it
It was absolutely brilliant fabulous
Every word of update was well written and wait worthy
Love every bit of it
Finally the most awaited moment is there asya face off
It was mind blowing
Very impatient to know how asad is going to react to zoya's pregnancy
Thanks for pm
Update sooonnn

thank you so much dear

I'm glad u like it and hope you like the future updates too

thanks again and stay tuned...

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Always_asya
Wonderful update though it was short
zoya called rohan and being good friend he did not said anything to anyone against her wish
after knowing about zoya zeenat and anwer was coming but got dead
poor zoya will held herself responsible for it
finally asya face to face
cannot wait for next update
update soon
and please tsb ka update long dena

thank you so much dear

BTW it was not short theek toh tha 😆

but i'm glad you enjoyed reading it

and TSB ka long hi dia tha is baar, haan next mai i can't say much

thanks again

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: anuv6
LUVD IT LUVD IT SOOO MUCH.
specially ASYA's part, its just...damn good.
i read it, then again i read it nd then i started to read from the beginning of the story..
i luv the way that asad's intense part in this update... he is a passionate lover as u beautifully described,when he asked rohan aboyt zoya nd when he just like ordered her to come back nd when they finally met...awesome, fantabulous.
i can pictorised the update when i read specially when ASYA met,
amazing writing skills dear, U are damn gud.
nd i dnt thnk the faceoff could be better than ths...freaking awesome.
nd nw i cant wait...just update li'l earlier na or else i'll become crazy by thnkng ng thnkng about waht'll happen nxt

you know what you made my day

being a writer i always writer something in my updates with all my heart like woh scene mene apne samney hote huway dekha ho

the way asad was adamant and order and then his intense gaze and reaction was something i wanted to write from the day i planned this FF

and you noticed that thing

so thank youuu sooo much for pointing out that scene

i should have updated earlier but TSB also needs time so you have to wait a week for WHT update

hope u won't mind

thanks again and keep reviewing like this

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Ashii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: MayurChan

First of all Congratulations for the New Thread Ashii...👏

Coming to the update...

This was an interesting part with so many things happening in one update...

Continue soonish...

thank you mayur

hope you like future updates too...

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Ashii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: MOnkEy_rAngEr
Awsm update
Emotions r portrayed beautifully
Very well written
Continue soon :-))

thank you dear

i'm glad u like it

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Ashii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Amin21khpul-wal
Very beautiful and specially the last part was really emotional
Love it
Beautifully written 👏

thank you dear

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
pyar ki dukaan 🤗
.
I ne padhi ❤️
aur bohat pasand aayi update.
meko ek kosten puchna h ... zeenat anwar ko kyu maar giraya tune 😔
unka marna inna zaroori tha kya...bichaare zoya pehle hi esi haalat me was coming bck ye sochte hue ki kese face karegi unko and u dropped the bomb...abhi aur kharaab hogyi na uski halat...
aur ese me usko asad ki bhi sunna padi ye behosh hi hogai ...
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I ko rohan kaafi acha lga 😃
and this update was good and to me it wasn't rushed but short 😆
.
abhi next sunday tk fir wait 😔
uske pehle any chances of update??????

mehmaan 🤗

kabhi online bhi mila kar hamesha mere peeche aati hai

tera kosten mai khud se already pooch chuki and answer is YES after all prologue mai AnZee plane crash mai mar chuke the ab mai or kya karti 😭

abhi asad ne sunaya hi kahan hai

baby just read kla wala update or tu meko zalim kahegi 😈

rohan toh hai darling... teko pata hai Rohan is KW 😳

tum sabko hamesha short hi lagta hai 😕 kabhi khush na hona

na shukry logo 🤣

TSB dia na woh padh ab WHT kal ayega

love u ❤️

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Ashii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
Congratulations!! for New Thread..👏
It was so Happy to see this,Keep it up.😊
It was so Emotional😭 but Interesting Part.
Zoya called his Friend Rohan said where she is?It is so Interesting.😊
Rohan was so Nice,he was so Concerned about ASYA(KABHI).😊
Zoya wanted to meet Zeenat and Anwar but they met with Plane Crush.😭
Asad(KSG) conversation with Rohan's Parents were so Interesting.😊
Asad(KSG) angry was justified on Zoya in his Condition.😭
ASYA(KABHI) face to face was Awesome,The Feelings of ASYA(KABHI) was so Emotional.😭
I hope everything will be fine soon.😊
Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu