AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 38

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Posted: 8 years ago
very well written dais
so coming to the update
first only we had glimpse (sorry always it will be) of angry young man asad ahmed khan and a scared zoya seeing him
the first scene only fight
as i said she regreted hr behaviour
so brotherhood member of "s" had given zoya a glimpse
he warned hr not to come outside
so she is feeling secure now because of them
hey i have a doubt -if this brotherhood fellows r tere to zoya ten why is zoya is facing trouble&fers fr this nasty sammer anand
i really wanna know
i loved the bonding between dildhad &zoya yaar
dilshad is so pure she loves even an unknown person like zoya treats hr as her own child hats off to her yaaar
thedialouge dilshad said-" i would rather risk his safety if there was a chace he would bring you back home safe" she is a marvellous mother asad,anwar,aisha is lucky to have hr as mother & ha yes zoya also in some way
i dont understand one thing why will not asad eat properly yaar is he a child tat dilshad has to scold & make him eat rediculous yaar
wow zoya wore chains again nice oh my god asad has so many bad qualities like smoking etc he should change them otherwise it would spoil his image
zoya making cake fr dilshad remind me show fortunately tere was no c.d in tat otherwise tere would be another war
tere was achild in asad who want to come out he is masking him in the name of arrogance i want it to come infront of zoya atleast
asya encounter abt yoyo wasreally nice
ayaan pushed zoya by saying asad tat she had come to rogue fr concert
WHY ASAD DONT KNOW TAT ZOYA IS AYAAN SISTER YAAR he is misunderstanding so much!
hey u said tere was so many dance dance sequennces asya would share on rogue
hey pls want one in chap 15 pls pls pls pls ...yaar pls...
i dont like thier fights so i wont talk
wow zoya made cupcake fr asad nice but he throwed it in dust bin
why cant he accept hr apology
why man he left his dreams yaar he sings really well
zoya knew tat voice is asad which was haunting her ten wen will asad knew abt her
asad sppech in ima was really nice
so zoya knows his past some wat its nice
i want asad also to knoe adt her past soon
asad only want attention of zoya wow
but she will never show it up until he says his feelings to her
omg again this sameer came
i dont want him to come
i want it to end sooon
so zoyas jeeju died becuse of her
tat damn sameer anand poor zoya hr past was horrible
hey make zoya share hr past with anyone yaar she hides hr pain
one day it will be unbearable fr hr to bear atlest make hr to share it with asad or dilsad
so this was ur long comment
read it and enjoy
update chap 14 soon
hey pls do my request of asya dance in rogue pls pls pls ...
again pictures were really nice
it was worth watching them
i want zoya pictures also not only asad
cont sooonnn

Edited by preetiasya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
so are we getting update tomorrow Daisy?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Always_asya

so are we getting update tomorrow Daisy?



Hopefully today!
Edited by DailyDaisy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
oh my godtoday only
updte it fast daisy
Edited by preetiasya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful story dear
You read each & every part in detail & beautifully. I simply loved it. In start I was confused by many characters but as I started reading, now I know. Asad life was not easy as well as zoya life. They bear so much in life. Liked their fighting scene. His speech wanted her to know more about him. On the other hand zoya past came out as well why his BIL was killed. Asad was restless to see her quite. Hope he will get to know about that man soon. Liked the chemistry between both brothers. Pari & asad relation was nice. Ayaan & his antics was cherry on top. Waiting for the moment when asad got to know that Ayaan is zoya brother. Curious to know about his reaction. Song sequence in the wedding was wonderful. Update soon plz. Do pm me if possible. Thanks & all the best for exam.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yey cannot wait to read now 😊 update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yr kehtni dy wait krna pre gaa

Edited by PrincessSumbal - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Update will be up later today - still have 20+ pages to edit and It's 4:45 am now..I'm seeing stars! Sorry guys, guests had me swamped! Have a busy day tomorrow so if I don't sleep now I won't sleep at all. But it'll be up within 24 hours!!

xo - DailyDaisy!
Edited by DailyDaisy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

Update will be up later today - still have 20+ pages to edit and It's 4:45 am now..I'm seeing stars! Sorry guys, guests had me swamped! Have a busy day tomorrow so if I don't sleep now I won't sleep at all. But it'll be up within 24 hours!! xo - DailyDaisy!

Its ok update when you are free
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Its ok update when you are free

s update wen u get time
bt try to update fast

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