AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 40

Originally posted by: anuv6

LUVD IT...its awesome
beautifully written especially the way u described the ASYA pasts and their pains, asad's overprotectiveness...wow its truly amazing.
no words to describe dear., still want to read more
,zoya cuts her wrist due to the pain past...when i read the part its lukd like i can feel her pain and as i'm seeing the QH movie...not only the part bt evry thng u described ,.its felt like so connected each other within them even the update is long nd honestly i felt irritated when i read completely ( why even it hav to complete)
bt as u promised, i'm happy ... waiting very eager fr ur nxt update
update sooonish

Originally posted by: Asyalover

omg..with the pic my impatience level is going high with eagerness to read the next chapter...update asap

Originally posted by: mummyoftwo

As usual. An amazing update. Now we get a scope on zoyas misery as well. My heart goes out to the poor girl. So she is the "reason" her jeeju got killed. And she has to live with that sorrow! Poor girl!! And the cutting part was so beautifully written. I know ppl who have done that to themselves and they say exactly the same thing. It's like releasing the pain out of ur body. I'm loathing sameer right now. What an evil character
Loved the whole part. Asad a speech felt heartfelt and genuine. And zoya got what she desired, a background for asads behavior.
Zoya ignoring her grandparents was just what they deserved!! They don't deserve her in their life.
Asad ayaan talk was so warm and if feels like that's the most Asad has spoken aloud about his feelings.
A darker update, but it was absolutely brilliant. And lengthy for us readers who can't seem to get enough of ur story.

Originally posted by: mummyoftwo

Wiiieee. Loved the pics. Will help with imagining the scenarios better.

Originally posted by: addicted_93

What a long and lovely update Daisy!
Poor Zoya! This sameer is such an asshole. Typical MCP with zero respect for women. Hope he gets the thrashing he deserves. Can you please make Asad castrate him? And he killed Faizan too :(
Can't imagine the kind of guilt Zoya has to live with

Speaking of guilt, I am so mad at Dilshad for playing a part in stealing Asads dream. But I love that it made her character so human. My heart broke when I heard his story. It did clear up a lot of things though. So I'm guessing Asad and ayaan met in London and probably got trained or something to be part of the brotherhood.

Okay another thing I'm guessing is that Zoya is Zainabs daughter. I think zainab, gafoor and Malik were in college together when this might have happened and zainab is maliks unrequited live interest.

Akrams reentered too :( why are all these weird men after Zoyas life. I'd be worried for her but I know her knight in shining armour is ALWAYS around her.

Asad has blood on his hands?!? :O I guess azlan is taking about pari's mother. I heart broke right along with Asad and azlan when they had their brawl. Poor things. They really need to hug it out and get over this once and for all

Naina is playing with fire. She's going to destroy ayaans heart. Never thought humeira would be so negative. Guess she does have some of her mothers genes.

LOVED the ayaan and Asad scene at the end "too soon? Too soon"

Itching to read more. The pictures you put up were fantastic. Can't wait for Asya to spend some moments in asya's corner

Please please please update super soon. I'm obsessed with your FF

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Awesome Update
Loved it totally
finally asad's patience broke and he took out his anger on zoya
the criminals attacked on the place where the king went for dinner
zoya also reached there and second time she met the stranger
she obeyed his order and run from there
Dilshaad is such a sweetheart who can take risk of her son's safty for a girl whom she know from small time
loved their bonding
so 's' guy saved the king
zoya wore the chain again
she tried to apolosised but he did even hear her
zoya's cake making scene was so funny
Malik give azlan to guard asad intentally
zoya will never change
she danced infront of the couple to make them more angry
why zoya's nani and nanaboo came towards her
and why the great shazia now regertful
Zoya and her love for ps4
poor asad cannot even sleep peacefully in his own home
but zoya is not going to change
love their bickering but now i want understanding between them as friends
zoya went to concert against asad's wish
asad's another painful memory from past
ayaan put zoya in trouble after telling asad truth
azlan and ayaan fought again
asad's anger toward zoya was so high that he ruined the cup cake made by her
loved the update

Originally posted by: preetiasya

very well written dais

so coming to the update

first only we had glimpse (sorry always it will be) of angry young man asad ahmed khan and a scared zoya seeing him

the first scene only fight

as i said she regreted hr behaviour

so brotherhood member of "s" had given zoya a glimpse

he warned hr not to come outside

so she is feeling secure now because of them

hey i have a doubt -if this brotherhood fellows r tere to zoya ten why is zoya is facing trouble&fers fr this nasty sammer anand

i really wanna know

i loved the bonding between dildhad &zoya yaar

dilshad is so pure she loves even an unknown person like zoya treats hr as her own child hats off to her yaaar

thedialouge dilshad said-" i would rather risk his safety if there was a chace he would bring you back home safe" she is a marvellous mother asad,anwar,aisha is lucky to have hr as mother & ha yes zoya also in some way

i dont understand one thing why will not asad eat properly yaar is he a child tat dilshad has to scold & make him eat rediculous yaar

wow zoya wore chains again nice oh my god asad has so many bad qualities like smoking etc he should change them otherwise it would spoil his image

zoya making cake fr dilshad remind me show fortunately tere was no c.d in tat otherwise tere would be another war

tere was achild in asad who want to come out he is masking him in the name of arrogance i want it to come infront of zoya atleast

asya encounter abt yoyo wasreally nice

ayaan pushed zoya by saying asad tat she had come to rogue fr concert

WHY ASAD DONT KNOW TAT ZOYA IS AYAAN SISTER YAAR he is misunderstanding so much!

hey u said tere was so many dance dance sequennces asya would share on rogue

hey pls want one in chap 15 pls pls pls pls ...yaar pls...

i dont like thier fights so i wont talk

wow zoya made cupcake fr asad nice but he throwed it in dust bin

why cant he accept hr apology

why man he left his dreams yaar he sings really well

zoya knew tat voice is asad which was haunting her ten wen will asad knew abt her

asad sppech in ima was really nice

so zoya knows his past some wat its nice

i want asad also to knoe adt her past soon

asad only want attention of zoya wow

but she will never show it up until he says his feelings to her

omg again this sameer came

i dont want him to come

i want it to end sooon

so zoyas jeeju died becuse of her

tat damn sameer anand poor zoya hr past was horrible

hey make zoya share hr past with anyone yaar she hides hr pain

one day it will be unbearable fr hr to bear atlest make hr to share it with asad or dilsad

so this was ur long comment

read it and enjoy

update chap 14 soon

hey pls do my request of asya dance in rogue pls pls pls ...

again pictures were really nice

it was worth watching them

i want zoya pictures also not only asad

cont sooonnn

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Wonderful story dear
You read each & every part in detail & beautifully. I simply loved it. In start I was confused by many characters but as I started reading, now I know. Asad life was not easy as well as zoya life. They bear so much in life. Liked their fighting scene. His speech wanted her to know more about him. On the other hand zoya past came out as well why his BIL was killed. Asad was restless to see her quite. Hope he will get to know about that man soon. Liked the chemistry between both brothers. Pari & asad relation was nice. Ayaan & his antics was cherry on top. Waiting for the moment when asad got to know that Ayaan is zoya brother. Curious to know about his reaction. Song sequence in the wedding was wonderful. Update soon plz. Do pm me if possible. Thanks & all the best for exam.