AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: preetiasya
very well written yaar😉👏
its all asyalicious😃👏
i am happy its very long update 😉😃
i loved the bonding b/w dilshad &zoya😉
i love them😆
it is full of asya but its more akdu😲
u can show some hidden feelings asad had fr zoya & zoya hd abt asad?😳
in next update show some slight change in thir relation😳
bcoz i wanted tem to know eachothers pain atleast somewat, so tat eventually thir equation abt eachother change😳
bcoz i wanted to read it fast😉😳
wat i enjoyed most is zoyas care free nature & smiling even tough tere r many sorrows😳😃😉 i love her to core❤️👍🏼
i have a doubt tat-" asya marries eachother ten also tere is any story or thier marriage is the end of story?"😭😆
pls clarify it😭
i want to know abt pari more yaaar😉
wat is chain asad wore to zoya?pls clarify it fr me! i didnt understand?😆
cont ssooon👏👏👍🏼
update fast plsss👏

Thank You! I'm happy finally everyone is content with the AsYa quotient and length of the update. I alway's loved Dilshad & Zoya's bond in the show too so I hope I can do it justice in my story too. The updates will be Akdu because Asad himself is Akdu. They have hidden feelings but they will not be realizing them or accepting them anytime soon. Trust me their relationship will change many times in many ways but I think their is a LONG way to go before they get to the point where they share their pain and be there for each other..please bear with me. Zoya's spirit is just like in the show very commendable. Smiling through sorrows is strength not many possess.

No, No nothing like that don't worry. A major chunk of the story takes place after they are married so don't worry about that. I'm not going to get them married and end it. Like I said the ff is LONG and there are many aspects to explore. Their love story is not simple or conventional and there is a bigger picture here so don't worry.

The chain someone 😉 put on Zoya (I never confirmed Asad's name) is a chain which the brothers from the brotherhood (biggest gang of Kasauli) wear. If they put it around someones neck it means that he/she is under their protection and enemies or other criminals of Kasauli cannot touch that person without waging war with the brotherhood. In this case Zoya is now under the protection of someone named "S". Hope that clarifies.

Most probably updating tomorrow. Hope you enjoy.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav
Thx fr long update
This is the best part ..so many asya moments
But asad ka gussa baap re baap..n zoya being zoya always bindass
Ab ye dono ek roof ke niche kaise rahege ..bechare dilshad
Cn't w8 to read nxt part ..so dnt take much time n updae soon..
I m.waiting

You're welcome for the long update! Lol everyone is finally satisfied with the # of AsYa scenes..I'm happy. Yes, Asad ka ghussa is legendary par abhi to uska ghussa shuru bhi nahin hua. I can promise you them living under one roof is going to be disastrous to say the least. Bechari DIlshad. Next part is hopefully up tomorrow.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: allwaysasya
Awesome update
i really loved it
i like the length of your updates bcs they were long
loved asya scene
finally they faced each other
loved all scenes from farmhouse
asad did not know zoya is sister of ayaan
zoya did mistakes again and again
loved the scene where zoya throw a pillow which hit dadi and poor asad becomes the victim
i can easily guess the expression on ksg's face
i just hate zoya's dadi
she is too much
i wish asad had seen how she behaved with zoya and could stand for her
and when in bus zeenat said to zoya that it was not her wedding and in braces' little did she know'
what is mean by it?
loved azlan and asad scene too
asad was shocked to see the chain in zoya's neck why?
did not he see her face earier?
but after he reliefed
my doubt was right the stranger who put a chain around zoya's neck is none other than asad
it is yet to reveal what happened between them
lovely update dear
thanks for pm
update soon

Thank you for the kind words! Happy you enjoyed all the AsYa and farmhouse scenes! Hoping to put the remaining farmhouse scenes in one part (the next part even though it will probably be even longer than the last part). Zoya is just starting to make mistakes and poor Asad is just starting to bear the brunt of it. I know even when I was writing it I imagined KSG's reaction and was laughing. Don't worry I hate her too. Trust me when more details about her come out you will hate her more but in the end she will get what she deserves. "Little did she know" was a comment I added myself. Zeenat did not actually say it..I was laughing at the irony when Zeenat said "you aren't going to your saajan's hpuse" when infact unknowingly Zoya was in fact going to her future "Sajaan" Asads house.

I love Asad and Azlan and can't wait to write about their bromance. Remember though that I never once confirmed it was Asad and also remember that the person just told Zoya not to take them off. She could easily remove the chain but didn't so I'll let you conclude whatever you think happened until I actually reveal it. Updating tomorrow hopefully..hope you enjoy!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: poonam75
omg i just loved your update and at the speed you are keeping this ff alive!!

it is written so well!!
Loved all the scenes but why do I feel that asad was not the one that put the chain on her and there is more to that mystery?

also cant wait to see more ASYA scenes!

loved all the masti and madness! i love the brohters scene and would love to see asads jealousy more as he is not aware all the boys are zoyas brothers!

i am being greedy so pls pls pls UPDATE next part soon before the weekend is over if possible!

Pretty pls!

Thank you for all the kind words! I hope to continue to keep it alive and not let the suspense or interest die down! Lol I will confirm who it was in due time but trust me there are a LOT of hints in that scene and other parts of the fanfic that lead to enough confirmation regarding who it was that put the chain in her neck! AsYa scenes will continue to increase and hopefully get better! I'm happy you're enjoying the masti and madness before the darkness comes in. A jealous Asad is a comical Asad.

Lol, the weekend is over but I'll try to get an update by tomorrow.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: blueberry02
Superb update/updates
really njoyed da twists in da story...
Asya moments r really cute n funny
asad is really angry young man in ur story...matlab itnaa gussa baapre!!!!!
N i m loving zoya-anwer's bonding too...
N azlan asad dont really hate each other...inside they r caring towards 1 another
nd da family moments r also endearing
totally loved it
finally amazing story dear
waiting 4 da nxt part eagerly
update soon...

Thank You! Hope you enjoy the coming twists too! Happy you're enjoying the AsYa scenes. Yes Asad is QUITE angry and dark in my story. Azlan and Asads relationship has many dynamics. But yes they can claim to hate each other all they want their actions speak louder than words. When you will read their background story you'll get more of an idea about them. Happy you like the family moments. Hope you enjoy the coming parts too!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: sisgeo
Very nice

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Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: mummyoftwo
First of all, hats of to u for this super-duper long update!!
It was an amazing update. Lots of asya and lots of asad! I absolutely loved it. I haven't figured out Malik's relation to the khans yet, have I missed it or it hasn't been reviled yet?
The asya bits where Awsome, the anger, frustration and bitterness was so real.
Who is this Pari?! Dying to know.
Who's is the mansion ppl even tolerating raziya and gaffour is beyond my beliefs. So evil and always putting fires everywhere and sticking their noses in matters that don't concern them.
Azlan and asad...it was a sweet and endearing meeting they had. They seem to have with some sort of protectiveness towards each other.
I'm loving zoya a bubbliness and positiv spirit in this story. She's so adorable!
Very very nice update!

Thank You..nearly broke my fingers in the process but I wanted to post as much as I could! Malik as Asad mentioned is his Godfather. He is a close friend and you can say the only well wisher who was there for them in very dark times. That is all I can say for now. Remember in one scene with Farida Bi Asad says something along the lines that someone saved him but unfortunately it was already too late..😉! But I will clear the relationship completely later on. Happy you're liking the AsYa dynamic. They are both infatuated but "hate" each other. How is one to deal with that!

Lol, Pari has a lot of people confused. Just hang on a little longer you will find out who she belongs to but HOW you'll have to wait a little longer.

The Haveli and royal status belongs to the Khans. The Siddiquis exert power over them because they have something to hold over them (which will also be revealed later) and the Khans are spineless so they take all the B.S. Happy you're liking the Asad and Azlan dynamic I can't wait to write more on their bromance..and I too love Zoya! Hope you enjoy the next part!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: hatelove2012
Beautiful Read it in one go. Amazing portrait of every character. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Thank You! I'm happy you're reading and enjoying..Next part coming soon!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: allwaysasya
I know it is very early to ask
but still update soon

Hopefully updating tomorrow..hope you enjoy!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#140

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Guy's I will be updating soon but I want to update it altogether so I will wait till we get 3 more comments on this page to go onto the next page. Hopefully some silent readers will comment or as I understand there is a history of lack of responses on this forum so I will make 3 random comments to move onto the next page 😆😆😆!

xo - DailyDaisy!

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