AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 13

Awesome update
i really loved it
i like the length of your updates bcs they were long
loved asya scene
finally they faced each other
loved all scenes from farmhouse
asad did not know zoya is sister of ayaan
zoya did mistakes again and again
loved the scene where zoya throw a pillow which hit dadi and poor asad becomes the victim
i can easily guess the expression on ksg's face
i just hate zoya's dadi
she is too much
i wish asad had seen how she behaved with zoya and could stand for her
and when in bus zeenat said to zoya that it was not her wedding and in braces' little did she know'
what is mean by it?
loved azlan and asad scene too
asad was shocked to see the chain in zoya's neck why?
did not he see her face earier?
but after he reliefed
my doubt was right the stranger who put a chain around zoya's neck is none other than asad
it is yet to reveal what happened between them
lovely update dear
thanks for pm
update soon

omg i just loved your update and at the speed you are keeping this ff alive!!

it is written so well!!
Loved all the scenes but why do I feel that asad was not the one that put the chain on her and there is more to that mystery?

also cant wait to see more ASYA scenes!

loved all the masti and madness! i love the brohters scene and would love to see asads jealousy more as he is not aware all the boys are zoyas brothers!

i am being greedy so pls pls pls UPDATE next part soon before the weekend is over if possible!

Pretty pls!

Superb update/updates
really njoyed da twists in da story...
Asya moments r really cute n funny
asad is really angry young man in ur story...matlab itnaa gussa baapre!!!!!
N i m loving zoya-anwer's bonding too...
N azlan asad dont really hate each other...inside they r caring towards 1 another
nd da family moments r also endearing
totally loved it
finally amazing story dear
waiting 4 da nxt part eagerly
update soon...

First of all, hats of to u for this super-duper long update!!
It was an amazing update. Lots of asya and lots of asad! I absolutely loved it. I haven't figured out Malik's relation to the khans yet, have I missed it or it hasn't been reviled yet?
The asya bits where Awsome, the anger, frustration and bitterness was so real.
Who is this Pari?! Dying to know.
Who's is the mansion ppl even tolerating raziya and gaffour is beyond my beliefs. So evil and always putting fires everywhere and sticking their noses in matters that don't concern them.
Azlan and asad...it was a sweet and endearing meeting they had. They seem to have with some sort of protectiveness towards each other.
I'm loving zoya a bubbliness and positiv spirit in this story. She's so adorable!
Very very nice update!

Beautiful Read it in one go. Amazing portrait of every character. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

I know it is very early to ask
but still update soon

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written..

Originally posted by: sally111

Okkk so this was the longest update and yess not to forget the best one till date with soo many asya scenes😛😛 really loved reading it.. and already getting addicted to this ff😆 and waiting for more...😛

Originally posted by: anuv6

hai daisy...
what to say...its amazing, wonderful, awesome, marvellous nd out of the world
its just... I LOVD IT dear so so much
trust me, when i start to read i felt longed to knw when will ASYA met bt its worth wait yaar...u just killed it
if i hav to pick my fav , i just cant bz after asya met i just cant bring myself out of the stry nd though u gave a long update, i felt its short nd tortured bz i cant stopping myself imagining that wat all happen nxt, u can understand my situation by this long comment... nd what an apt song.
i felt i'm watching KaBhi movie... how much i miss them. u fulfilled my wish,.
luvd the story to the core, as the story growing i'm totally becoming mad fr the story.
honestly.concept is wow bt before that u r an amazing writer dear, the way u desc ASYA...out of words,
like someone said. the way u desc ur feelings exactly when the silence interferes
cute nd innocent zoya nd angry nd intense asad... its a knwn combination bt this update shows ASYA like more new... like i'm reading them first time.
i just wanna nxt update... when will u update??
waiting very very much eager.
i cant believe, i made a very long comment... anywy anythng fr amazing ASYA writer
update sooon dear.

Originally posted by: addicted_93

Amazing part!
Loved all the Asya scenes. Even though I knew Asad was the "brother" who put the chain around Zoya's neck, it's a relief you confirmed it. Lol
The Ae Dil Hai Mushkil title track was on loop in my head the entire time I was reading the Asya scenes. I feel like the lyrics will fit them perfectly once they really fall in love and reveal their pasts.
I can't wait for the time Asad actually falls in love with zoya and defends her against her witch for a grandmother.
I wish Asad warms up to zeenat and can have a cute relationship with her too. Not as close as Anwar and Zoya cause that would probably go against Asads basic character, but a deep connection none the less.
Aahil and Aisha?!! Azlan is going to go ballistic when the engagement breaks, if it does.
Want to know more about azlan, Asad and Pari.

All in all, I loved how the scenes played out and the length of the update.
Looking forward to reading the rest!