The one night stand (AsYa FF) update p28 - Page 17

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww such an emotional update...
Jst wishing asad to reach dere fast to save his beautiful family from such an absurd father.
How can a father be soo much cruel..
I hate him...
Waiting 4 ur nxt update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
plz give one more update before school
plzzz
such a sad update
gaffur is a monster
glad zoya wasnt scared of him and give it to him good
she was shocked to lean she has a twin
gaffur still believes zoya has a twin sister but if he only knew
so ashan is spoiled rotten and mahira is neglected
glad maryham took mahira to zoya
she finally got to hold her baby girl for the first time
hope asad arrives soon with ammunition and get his family away safe
cont soon plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update
Hope asad come soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

awesome update

Zoya met one of her babies...
excited for Khan to reach here..
continue soon

Thank you, he will definitely go there on the next chapter.


Originally posted by: raspi

Good update nd plzzz give a long update soon waitin fr asad to come to rescue n tnxxx fr pm

Thank you, I can't update long I'm sorry, School is eating up my life yaar.







Originally posted by: Jasleenkaur01

Awesome update

Poor zoya is suffering a lottt
That gaffor is soo devil.. he can't love his daughter
Want asad to come.back soon and rescue zoya n his children
Continue soon
~JAZ~

Thank you, I know that she's suffering but the sun is going to come soon

Originally posted by: preetiasya

Nice update
Zoya is suffering so much
Cont soon

Thank you Will do



Thanks

Originally posted by: aleenaansari

Awww such an emotional update...
Jst wishing asad to reach dere fast to save his beautiful family from such an absurd father.
How can a father be soo much cruel..
I hate him...
Waiting 4 ur nxt update...

I know, Asad will save his family don't worry


Originally posted by: anopama

plz give one more update before school
plzzz
such a sad update
gaffur is a monster
glad zoya wasnt scared of him and give it to him good
she was shocked to lean she has a twin
gaffur still believes zoya has a twin sister but if he only knew
so ashan is spoiled rotten and mahira is neglected
glad maryham took mahira to zoya
she finally got to hold her baby girl for the first time
hope asad arrives soon with ammunition and get his family away safe
cont soon plz

Thank you I know that he's bad but the end is coming soon, don't worry, with a lot of secrets to come.


Thank you

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Lovely update

Hope asad come soon

He will come, don't worry..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Well guys, here's an update but unfortunately I can't write a long update because school is eating up my life, I got no time to write 😭😭


~13 ~


Asad woke up screaming 'Zoya'. Rashid entered his room worried for his son.

"Asad! What's wrong?" He asked and Asad hugged his father tightly.

"I had a dream that Zoya..I had a dream that Zoya was dead.. I had a dream that this man killed her.."

Rashid hugged his son tightly.

"He won't do anything. It's already written in all the papers that Ghafoor's elder daughter is back after two years away from India. His fame we'll be her saviour. He can't do anything because it will be not good for his image."

Asad was going to wash his face when he got a call.

"Allo.." He said as he picked the phone.

"Are you Asad Ahmed Khan?" The woman asked.

"Yes it's me, who are you?"

"I'm Maryam. Zoya's friend." Maryam answered.

Asad was happy because he thought that he would be able to save his girl.

"Zoya's friend? Where is she? Is she okay?" He inquired.

"I can't talk to you for too long M. Khan but Zoya told me to tell you something. She wants you to come and take your children away from her father's clutches." Maryam revealed.

Asad had a blank face.

"Where is Zoya?"

"She has been locked here but she said that you have every rights on your children so you have to set them free. At least, you have to save them."

"Tell Zoya not to worry. I will never leave her alone. Tell her that her Asad will save her and their children." Asad said.

"I will but come fast, please." Maryam replied and hung up as she saw M. Siddiqui coming towards her.

"Maryam!" M.Siddiqui said as he walked to her.

"Yes, M. Siddiqui?" She answered looking down.

"Go take care of Zoya, she's sick." He spat. Maryam gasped and rushed upstairs to take care of her friend. She must have caught a cold. Given the fact that her so called father didn't take care of her, she was more vulnerable.

She saw Zoya laying on the floor and coughing.

"Zoya!" She shouted and checked her temperature. She was burning with fever.

"Maryam!" Zoya whispered.

"Zoya, don't say anything, I'm taking care of you."

"Maryam..my children..Don't let them with my fahter...You have to flee with them. If Asad doesn't come, go away with them, please."Zoya pleaded as she closed her eyes. Maryam cried on seeing her friend like that. Zoya had never been the weak one.

"Zoya don't talk like that. You'll all will be free, don't worry. You will be okay. Because you are strong."

Zoya began coughing and then she slipped in a unconscious state.

"Zoya!" Maryam screamed but Zoya didn't respond. She looked as if she was dead.

Hence, Maryam rushed outside to look for help.

It didn't take a lot for M.Siddiqui to bring his daughter at the hospital. She was in a critical situation and doctors didn't even know why she was like this. They couldn't tell at the moment if she would make it or not.


Next day, Siddiqui mansion.

M.Siddiqui was having breakfast with Ahsan when he had been interrupted by Asad, Rashid and cops.

"Good morning M. Siddiqui." Asad said casually.

"M.Khan? What are you doing here so early? What's this?" M.Siddiqui asked. He didn't about Shireen's brother but that didn't mean that Rashid didn't know anything about him.

"Actually, M.Siddiqui, I'm here to take back what's mine." Asad said sternly.

"What are you talking about? I'm confused M.Khan." Ghafoor said and Asad turned to his father.

"Dad, can you please show him the letter?" Asad asked and Rashid walked to M.Siddiqui and show him the letter Zoya wrote.

"That's nonsense! Zoya is crazy, you can't believe her!"

"Why shouldn't I M.Siddiqui? Anyways, the test will prove that what Zoya said is true. And if it's the case, I have every rights on my children Ahsan and Mahira." Asad said and a doctor came in front of them. As Ahsan was already here, Asad did the test with him, while M.Siddiqui was just looking at them, powerless.

But, to be honest, this test was useless. It was easy to see that this little boy was Asad's. He was the copy carbon of his father.

"Well M.Khan, I'll be back in a few." The doctor said. Asad looked at M.Siddiqui disgusted.

"Tell me, why did you do such a cheap thing to your daughter?" Asad asked.

"I don't know what you're talking about." Ghafoor said.

"Please, don't tell me that you're suffering from Alzheimer already. It would be sad. You know what I'm talking about. How can you hate such a sweet girl like Zoya? She just wants to spread love everywhere..and you..you're such a beast!" Asad said.

"Watch your language!" Siddiqui warned them.

"Or what? Will you kill him like you killed Shireen?" Rashid asked. "I know your secret Ghafoor. You burnt my sister alive!" Rashid spat. "It was for her children right?!" He added. "You're such a jerk! Snatching away a child from her mother! But luckily you were wrong, because I don't know what would happen if Ayaan had been in your clutches! Yeah, you heard it right. Shireen had twins, a boy, and a girl. Ayaan and Mahdiya. Even though you got Mahdiya, you couldn't spoil her to be a beast like you, because she is innocent just like my sister, and even though you took my sister's innocence, you weren't strong enough to turn my niece into a beast like you and that what I will be always grateful for."

Ghafoor just glared at him and he couldn't say anything because the doctor came.

"The results came and it's proved that Mahira and Ahsan Siddiqui are M.Asad Ahmed Khan's childen."

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Posted: 8 years ago
oh my god
wat happen to zoya
dont let anything happen to her
feeling bad fr zoya
asad came
now children will be freee
bt wat about zoya
update sooonnn
hey iam first
yipeee
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Posted: 8 years ago
anopama thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update
aww asad's dream and zoya falls ill and unconcious
so maryham called him for his kids
but he said he is coming for his zoya and their children
but zoya never learn this she is ill
plz make her better
so asad arrive heavily armored for his family
love how he had the cops and the doctor ready with him
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
I just hope asad dream does nt come true
Thank god asad got the call frm maryam n he went to get his zoya n his children bck
Just hope zoya is fine and mot in any critical condition
Finally asad met his son and will put that gaffur behind the bars for his sins
Hooe for some asya moments in the next update
Thanks for the pm for a superb update
~JAZ~

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Asad dream about zoya & rashid calm him down. Zoya was in critical condition. Hope she will better soon. Asad arrived at Siddiqui house for claiming his family. Waiting for next update soon.
Thanks for pm

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