The one night stand (AsYa FF) update p28 - Page 18

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raspi thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
nyc asad came to take his kids n update soon n tnxxx fr pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally caught up on the last 5 updates
And the story had indeed progressed so much
In love with the progressing plot and how the things finally seem to be settling in peace
Finally asad knows about his children and has come to rescue them from gafoor
Felt really bad for zoya
She deserves all the happiness in the world and not such a torture from her own father
Hoping the things would get well soon for asya too
Would want to know what happened to Dave after he threatened zoya
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please try to continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently
Thanks for the pms😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
please update soon.
don't let anything happen to zoya and thank good the kids will be out of that crazy house.
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow read the full story in one go loved it
do continue soon and pm me
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Originally posted by: latanzia

please update soon.

don't let anything happen to zoya and thank good the kids will be out of that crazy house.

Thank you, don't worry nothing will happen to Zoya 😛

Thanks 😆

Originally posted by: aleenaansari

Lovely...
Plzzz update soon...

Thank you, will do so

Originally posted by: raspi

nyc asad came to take his kids n update soon n tnxxx fr pm

Thank you

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Loved it
Asad dream about zoya & rashid calm him down. Zoya was in critical condition. Hope she will better soon. Asad arrived at Siddiqui house for claiming his family. Waiting for next update soon.
Thanks for pm

Thank you, the dream won't happen

Originally posted by: Jasleenkaur01

I just hope asad dream does nt come true

Thank god asad got the call frm maryam n he went to get his zoya n his children bck
Just hope zoya is fine and mot in any critical condition
Finally asad met his son and will put that gaffur behind the bars for his sins
Hooe for some asya moments in the next update
Thanks for the pm for a superb update
~JAZ~

It will not come true😉

Originally posted by: anopama

nice update
aww asad's dream and zoya falls ill and unconcious
so maryham called him for his kids
but he said he is coming for his zoya and their children
but zoya never learn this she is ill
plz make her better
so asad arrive heavily armored for his family
love how he had the cops and the doctor ready with him
cont soon

Asad will make everything good don't worry 😉




Originally posted by: preetiasya

oh my god

wat happen to zoya
dont let anything happen to her
feeling bad fr zoya
asad came
now children will be freee
bt wat about zoya
update sooonnn
hey iam first
yipeee

Don't worry, everything will be okay 😉

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Finally caught up on the last 5 updates
And the story had indeed progressed so much
In love with the progressing plot and how the things finally seem to be settling in peace
Finally asad knows about his children and has come to rescue them from gafoor
Felt really bad for zoya
She deserves all the happiness in the world and not such a torture from her own father
Hoping the things would get well soon for asya too
Would want to know what happened to Dave after he threatened zoya
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please try to continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently
Thanks for the pms😊


I'm happy to have you back here yaar, I will probably write something about Dave soon 😆

Originally posted by: jazz2010

wow read the full story in one go loved it
do continue soon and pm me

THank you hope to you there soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

~14 ~


He smiled and walked near M. Siddiqui and whispered in his ear.

"You better tell me where is Zoya if you don't want me to destroy your f**king reputation." Asad then walked to his son and picked him up.

"You know who am I? I'm your Daddy!" Asad said and hugged him.

"Daddy?" Ahsan asked.

"Haan, and this man.." He pointed at Rashid.

"He's your grandfather." Asad added.

"Where is Mahira?" Asad said and Maryam came with the little girl.

"Mahira? Come with daddy my princess!" Asad said and Mahira smiled then walked to her father.

"Daddy?" She whispered and he hugged her tightly.

"I'm here. Daddy is here." He kissed her forehead and they were going to walk out the house but..

"Aren't you going to bring their things?"

"I can provide them with everything. I will buy them everything they need." Asad spat and walked away with his children.

"Wait! At least let me hold..Let me hold Ahsan in my arms." Siddiqui pleaded.

"You're such a bas***d! How can you ignore Mahira?" Asad inquired. "Let go dad. I don't want to do such things that will be bad for the children to see." Asad said and only to provoke M. Siddiqui, he walked away while carrying Mahira and Ahsan was walking next to him.

Mahira looked at the man who was holding her and smiled. For the first time, she was considered as an innocent child. Not a boy, nor a girl, but a child. A human being who needed love.

Before going home, the little family went to shopping. Asad brought a lot of toys and two soft toys for each of them.

"We'll have to rescue Zoya sooner than I thought. Now that this man knows about Ayaan, Zoya is useless." Asad said while looking at his children. They were having some ice cream.

"Maryam sent me a message a while back. Zoya is in hospital and she said that her state is critical." Asad announced. "I will go there with a doctor tonight. Your niece will be free dad. I promise you in my life that tonight you will meet your niece and tonight Mahira and Ahsan will also meet their mother." Asad assured.

They walked back home at peace. They stopped by a park and Ahsan and Mahira could play. Asad had noticed that Mahira was most submissive to her brother and he told it to his father.

"Look, each time Ahsan wants to do something, Mahira is following him without a word. Each time he wants to play the same game as her, she steps aside and let him play without a word."

"It must be this bas***d who turned her like this! But don't worry, they're still young, with the education you and Zoya will provide them, they will definitely respect each other." Rashid said. "Don't be scared, you will definitely be a good father for Ahsan and Mahira." Rashid said reassuringly. "I'm proud of you my son." Rashid added and patted Asad's back.

At night, when the children were sleeping, Asad called the police officer and the doctor. Both were having his back after they read the letter from Zoya. The police officer knew the family Siddiqui like the palm of his hand and even though he couldn't prove it, he knew that M. Siddiqui wasn't a honest man.

"Khuda hafiz." Asad said as he hugged his father.

"Be cautious Asad." Rashid said and kissed his forehead. Asad nodded and left.

He joined the police officer and the doctor in front of the hospital.

"What do you want us to do exactly?" The police officer asked.

"I jut want you to help in taking Zoya out of this hospital."

"You know that's illegal right?"

"Then find a legal way for me to take my Zoya back. From now, I will just see her." Asad replied.

They walked into the hospital and went to Zoya's room after they asked a nurse where it was. Asad saw Raziya standing in front of the door as if she was waiting something.

They waited as she turned away and walked behind her to surprise her. The doctor cupped her mouth to make her quiet while the officer and Asad were looking inside and what they saw shocked them to the core. There he was, M.Siddiqui, trying to kill Zoya by putting a pillow on her face. They entered the room immediately.

"Die you little cheater. How could you call this Asad! How could you betray me? How could you take away my heir from me! You must have died just like your mother! I should have killed you just like her!" he shouted.

"M.Siddiqui!" The police officer said. "Say hi to jail, you little bas***d." He said and arrested him. Asad removed the pillow from Zoya's face and kissed her forehead.

"It's over Zoya, your nightmare is over my baby." He said and slightly pecked her lips.

A small tear fell from Zoya's eye as she had now broke free.


~16~

Edited by Asyawriting - 8 years ago
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It was soo nyc nd finally they united update soon n tnxxx fr pm
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Nice update
Finally zoya is in save hands
N the children will also get love from their parents

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Nice update dear
Finally ghafoor accepted his crime in front of police officer
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm

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