The one night stand (AsYa FF) update p28 - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hot update nd a nyc one tooo...
Excited to see asya together in india...
Nd nw a new twist...
Who is madiha...may be a look like zoya...
Anyways waiting 4 d nxt update...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
it was hot and awesome update ...
its a short one bt yess as u said its worth one with more confessions,
ASYA children confession , the bas***d dave's truth and here a mahdiya, may be its zoya.
bt zoya ran, while najma and dil are here and nw they are going to help zoya with a bang , i mean whole family with rashid...that "ll be more interestng nd exciting.
poor asad had to bear the pain, bt happy finally ASYA's luv 'll be more so !!!!
ASYA confront after the truth with their children and zoya's family...WOW more impressive turns are going to come , i thnk
nd dave nd tanveer, well wat'll happen to them ??...more secrets nd surprises !!!!
waiting eager fr the nxt long update ...
cont sooon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: raspi

Nyc n will miss u update soon n tnxxx fr pm

Ow I will miss you too :😳

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

Loving the story...

Interesting work
Excited for AsYa in India
Do continue soon

Thank you thank you 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Jasleenkaur01

very hot and superb update...

Finally zoya told the truth abt their children to asad
I didnt expect her to write a letter and tell
But the good thing is that asad knows abt his children
I hope zoya is fine and asad saves her frm her wicked father..
I wondee who is Mahdiya. Is it zoya? N how come asad knw her frm childhood
Waiting to see this interesting track
Thanks for the pm n continue soon
~JAZ~

Ow Thank you 😳 Mahdiya is Zoya indeed, but I have never said that asad knows her from childhood.

Originally posted by: anopama

Absolutely love the update

So zoyq relive her first night with asad
He saw her stretch marks but didnt question
Love tht he trust her to tell when she is ready
Love his promise to trust her forever
But he woke up to an empty bed and empty house
It was all deja vu
She was gone and a letter was left to tell himt he truth
So she is gone to get her kids
Omg asad detroy everything wonder of dave was in the mix too
Lol
So najma told him everything
Dilshad told himt to go get her bahu
And called her husband to let him know his son has found his niece
So asad off to india with rashid joining him
Face off with Gaffur Amhed Siddiqui
Waiting for more
Cont soon

Lol
Not mad
See u r following ksg to Australia
Have fun

Thank you!
Two souls finally becoming one ❤️
Trust is the base of a relationship, without trust there is no relationship 😉
Dave is definitely in the mix haha 😆😆😆 I didn't know that KSG was in Australia *make a kidnap plan* *with an evil smirk* 😉

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Finally she told Asad the truth of their children. She also told abt Dave. She left him to rescue her kids. Now ghafoor Siddiqui has to face Asad as well. So zoya is madhiya. Waiting for next update when u get chance. Have a nice & safe journey. Thanks for pm

I know it has been a long time since you're waiting for that and the truth is finally out. If Ghafoor manages to get out of this alive, it means that he's not an human which is true 😲

Originally posted by: aleenaansari

Hot update nd a nyc one tooo...
Excited to see asya together in india...
Nd nw a new twist...
Who is madiha...may be a look like zoya...
Anyways waiting 4 d nxt update...
Continue soon...

Thank you 😉 Mahdiya is Zoya 😆😆

Originally posted by: anuv6

it was hot and awesome update ...
its a short one bt yess as u said its worth one with more confessions,
ASYA children confession , the bas***d dave's truth and here a mahdiya, may be its zoya.
bt zoya ran, while najma and dil are here and nw they are going to help zoya with a bang , i mean whole family with rashid...that "ll be more interestng nd exciting.
poor asad had to bear the pain, bt happy finally ASYA's luv 'll be more so !!!!
ASYA confront after the truth with their children and zoya's family...WOW more impressive turns are going to come , i thnk
nd dave nd tanveer, well wat'll happen to them ??...more secrets nd surprises !!!!
waiting eager fr the nxt long update ...
cont sooon

Thank you 😉 Dil bole Ahmed Khan!! 😆😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

I know it's still short but I have a lot of things to do before leaving, this is the last update of this year and I'll see you all by the 20th of January maybe 😆😆😆


~11~

Zoya fell in front of Siddiqui as she was pushed by his goons.

"What are you doing here?"

"I came to take my children back."

"As if I'll let you.." Siddiqui answered.

"What did I do to get this much hate from you? Why do you hate me Abbu..You have always been my hero.. I have always thought that I'll be able to earn your love. Why don't you love me like Humzie?" Zoya asked sobbing.

"Because you're his illegitimate daughter!" Razia said coming from behind Ghafoor and Zoya looked at them with pain written all over her face. Was it true?

"Is it true? Who is my mother then? What are you saying? I don't believe you!" She said as she got up. "I don't believe you!" She was going to leave from there.

"Aryan!" Ghafoor said and his goon stopped her and held her arms tightly, leaving bruises. "Bring her to the room at the top of the mansion and lock her there." Ghafoor said and all of this was done before Humeira came back from school. However, as this man was taking her upstairs, Zoya didn't missed her children in their room.

"Mahira! Ahsan!" She exclaimed.

Both looked at her and Zoya's heart melted. They were just few feet away, yet she couldn't hug them, kiss them.. Aryan locked her on the room so that she couldn't leave.

"Let go of me!! Abbu!! Let me go!" Zoya banged on the door until she was tired and she collapsed on the floor. She cried as she continued to bang faintly on the door.

When Humeira arrived home, she knew something was wrong.

"Abbu? Ammi? What's wrong?" She asked but they didn't say anything.

"Nothing, go and take care of Ahsan." Her father said completely avoiding talking about his granddaughter.

"Ji, I'm going to take care of Mahira and Ahsan." Humeira said and left.

She found them playing in their room and she hugged them.

"How are my princess and my prince?" She asked kissing their cheeks.

"Mummy!" They said and Humeira smiled.

"I know I miss your mom too." Humeira said and sobbed.


Asad was on the plane when he felt a sudden pain on his chest as if someone was stabbing him.

"Zoya!" he said. Something was wrong, he felt it..

He was just eager to go there to save his love and his children from this man.

When he arrived, he switch on his phone and was surprised to see missed calls from Rashid. So he called him back.

"Abbu?" Asad said.

"I'm in India my son, where are you ?" Rashid asked.

"I've just arrived in Bhopal." Asad said.

"Me too. Wait for me outside the airport." Rashid said. Asad couldn't be graceful enough to having this man in his life.


Flashback.

Asad was 5 when his mother had decided to remarry after his father left her as she was still pregnant with him for another woman.

At first he wasn't accepting the arrival of a new man and a baby in his little life. He was jealous that her mother was taking care of this baby and not of him. But then his mother explained something to him.

"Beta, Ayan's mother is in heaven now, she has become an angel, and she came to see me in my sleep and she asked me to take care of him like my son. She asked you to love Ayan like your brother because he will feel very lonely and you don't want that, do you?" Dilshad asked while she was caressing his hair.

"What about Rashid? Do I have to love him like a father, too?" Asad asked innocently.

"Choice is yours, I don't ask you to love him like a father, I just want you to accept him as a part of our family and our lives."

At first, Asad was very reticent but you know how children are, they can be mean and one day, a boy had made fun of Asad because he didn't have a father and Rashid had stood up for him.. Since this day he was like a hero for Asad.


End of flashback.

They first went to the hotel to rest as it was night.

"Abbu, why are you trying to rescue Zoya?" Asad asked as he was sitting on his bed.

"Didn't I say that I was your hero?" Rashid said. "Actually, if my suspicions are right Zoya is Ayaan's twin." Rashid said.

"So that would make Zoya my sister? My step-sister?" Asad stuttered and Rashid nodded his head no, and Asad sighed. It would have been gross to know that he had f***ed his sister even though Rashid wasn't his real father.

"Ayaan is not my son Asad, he is my nephew. My sister Sheereen was young and nave when she met this Ghafoor Ahmed Siddiqui and he took this advantage to take her purity away. He raped her. And from this rape, Sheereen got Ayaan and Mahdiya, she loved them like they were her treasure. She knew that Ghafoor had done that to have a male heir as his wife couldn't be pregnant at this time, he told her as he was destroying her. So as their birth, she decided to dress them both as girls but when Ghafoor came to know about that, a year later that he had a boy and a girl, and not girl twins, he came back to take his heir away. However, he took the wrong twin, and he killed my sister unnecessarily. Actually, after this rape, Sheereen married her college sweetheart Rayhan Sheikh, who was a soldier. He took care of her when she was pregnant, she was happy.. Then he got killed.. I still believe that this man killed him too.." Rashid said and Asad cried and hugged him.

"We will bring your niece back home, and your grandchildren as well." Asad said.

"Grandchildren?" Rashid asked.

"Actually, I've known Zoya two years back. In Australia. We've done things and well if Tanveer hadn't spoilt it, she would have been back since then. From our little relationship, she became pregnant and we are parents of twins, a boy Ahsan and a girl Mahira.. I came to know this today only." Asad said.

"Tell me more about her Asad, please." Rashid said.

"Where to start abbu..Zoya is unique in such a way! She has kindness, respect.. She's simple yet she seems so precious,.. she shows you the notion of humanity when not a lot of humans had shown that to her.. She's just so adorable, so precious, and what I love more, is this cute dimple on her cheek.. it makes her look more beautiful if it's actually possible." Asad said looking at nowhere in particular.

" You seem so in love with her.. I'm happy for both of you." Rashid said. "I hope this Ghafoor Ahmed Siddiqui won't hurt her because if he does, I'll kill him." Rashid said.

~12~

Edited by Asyawriting - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice part..
for a moment he thought Zoya to be his step sister..
So now past is clear..
Looking forward to know how Asad and his hero will save Zoya...
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love the update
Enjoy ur vacay and go looking for ksg
Lol
So asad and rashid in india
Omg rashid is not asad father but he is his hero
Aww he thought he did wrong by being with zoya when he learn who she may be
But then he learn the whole truth she is not your step sis but just like a a cuz a distance cuz they r note even related by blood
Gaffur a nasty nasty man
Hope the twins rake humi to zoya
Hope asad get to his love and children on time
Cont

Happy New Year
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update dear
Loved it
Thanks for pm
Have a nice holiday.
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was soo nyc tnx fr pm and HAPPY NEW YEAR
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice part
Continue soon

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