AsYa Story: Striking Back- Part 11- Page 61- 16th April

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 8 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: MH2002
When are you going to upload??? I m waiting for it.. Hope you upload it soon.

It will be after a week as I have 3 more stories n just 2days ago I wrote face a very long 16 pages part😊.

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@ridhi95

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Posted: 8 years ago

#322

nice update

continue soon

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 8 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

It will be after a week as I have 3 more stories n just 2days ago I wrote face a very long 16 pages part😊.

Its OK. Take your time

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ksen

@ksen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#324

very nice part

loved it

looking forward for the next part

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 8 years ago

#325

Nice update

U are really enjoying writing this story

Bcuz u r getting to trash all the bad people

U are fixing all the wrongs

So some serious revelations

But the biggest is what asad and farhan learn and they will keep it from zoya

So u say asya will get better they will even consummate

But what will happen tht will make us hate zoya even u too

Guessing she will learn the truth of her identity and probably go to them

So even farhaan will not be happy with her too

Cont soon

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Linsie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Asad crying in pain due to manhandling does not make him weak. Asad bhi insaan hai patthar nahi. Also Zoya ka karatewaala haath hai na😆. U try to do dis wid ur brother I am sure he will also cry in pain😆. My brother is surely physically stronger than me but weneva I pinch n press his hands in masti he too cries in pain. Wen Asad manhandled Zoya after he stopped her 4m meeting Dilshad he actually manhandled it so hard dat Zoya cried in pain dat he is hurting her. I can't make Zoya like Zoya of d show who forgave Asad even after he traded her or Anika who justified Shivaay's every abusive behaviour as love for his family.

Are you kidding me... doing this stunt to my brother.. 😲 😲 😲 ...
ya went you surprise someone with your move...
that person will turn week.. zoya karate no way .. for asad 😆 😆 😆

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Linsie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#327

thanks for the scrap and pm 🤗 🤗

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Linsie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#328

9...

i did see some emotions .. for sleeping asad... 🤔 she did
prove.. she still have the feelings...

i like ..
asad telling off tanveer to shut up... 👏 👏
and surprise zoya...
he thought well before he say it... for once he saw clearly
what tanveer motif..

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Linsie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#329

What i dont like ...
zoya overboard words for the earring...
it sound touchy but asad did not see the opposite meaning..
how it effected zoya for moment losing it..

she calling it lust bringing in dead parents little to much
she was harsh..

full planned move to keep the earring .. not planned to hurt
her.. the way farhan saying it...

Dilshad knowing the truth ... her lies

Najma could not understand it... there is retailed ..
wish najma step in little for this statement... of what zoya said..
that she suffered 7 months in that house...
is not like she have to stay.. she can always leave
if you did not get the respect...

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Linsie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#330

stupid move... not saving the evidence... now losing
good opportunity

Tanveer and her sick game..

nikhat is very timid girl... with no voice , cant blame her she brought
up in that environment... men dominating.. for imran ignoring
her and let his friends to insult her..
she can always reply back.. if she have that guts...