Asya(KaBhi) Drabble series..Realization...(Drabble 3 - pg 7)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Woaahahooo great do PM when u update any other drabble

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muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

I am really very speechless after reading this beautiful piece of work

This was seriously breadth taking

The bol na halke halke sequence has always been at the top of my favourite scene list and this drabble cum os😆 just gave it a new dimension and just increased my love for this song as well as asya

It was such a great treat to read it

And the end was so awesome

The perfect end this story could have

Definitely one of the best OS on asya I have read

Thanks for this amazing works dear😊

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Hello Reboot Deepti Di...😊

Reboot isiliye kyunki First hello first update ka...2nd pe Hello again kaha maine...aur jaise maine filmon ke titles padhe hai soo yeh third update ka Reboot...

I know bakwas logic tha...khair still i will go with that...😆

Coming to this update...

This was a very good drabble...

Some nice moments at the end...And ASYA bhi thode shyarana way mein baat karr rahe thay...

Liked reading this part...

##### NOW I WANT COFFEE SERIES PLEASEEE #####

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Awesome just awesome...

Wo ek pal...Bolna Halke halke...

I wish to hear the song now..

It was just b articulate dipti.

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jas91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

huggie Depu itni jaldi updt 😃
& Updt was just beautiful 😛
meko yeh part padke apni FF yaad aa gyi 😳 😆
now I really need 2 buck up 😆
coming here so yes as I said it's beautiful... Loved reading it 😛
BHH definitely had a spcl place in our hearts 😳 & uspe 1 aur version read karna was superb
& finally they confessed which was very sweet 😃... aage bhi ayega na abhi?

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Amin21Khpulwak

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Ek pal ...

Really wonderfully written

So beautiful

Love it

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Daljit Dhami

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Hi Deepti
i received your message
i am fine thanks for your concern
i just got busy in my M.A. studies
thats why i was not able to read your updates
without reading i did not feel right to comment just for formality
so i read it now
it was a beautiful drabble
asad is the boss of zoya
so zoya was angry with him bcsvof his rude behaviour
asad cannot bear her silence
loved their confession
each scene described beautifully
lovedvthis drabble deepti
when are you going to update 'cup of coffie' and 'you are mine'?
update soon

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surbhi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Tweetiee 🤗
It was such a nice read...the whole os. It made me connect to a point in life jaha hume lgta h jo humasri life me nh rha wo ofcourse khaas to rahega bt we give our all focus to that instead of realizing the value of what we do have.
Same cheez na...but u got the realization ki coffee is more important than the cup and I could really imagine you in the is n not zoya 😳
I loved reading this ❤️

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Tweetiee 🤗
It was such a nice read...the whole os. It made me connect to a point in life jaha hume lgta h jo humasri life me nh rha wo ofcourse khaas to rahega bt we give our all focus to that instead of realizing the value of what we do have.
Same cheez na...but u got the realization ki coffee is more important than the cup and I could really imagine you in the is n not zoya 😳
I loved reading this ❤️

Sweetie 🤗

tu yaha ghum rahi hai...

Awe...you got it...

hehe...imagine me 😲...well...may be...but a little difference...

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Sometimes a moment is enough to drastically change your life...!!!

A moment of Realization...!!!

Well, it turned into a series of drabble...that I didn't even think when I open this thread...

The only reason that encourages me to write is you...all lovely readers of mine... Your reviews make me happy... Some moments here on the forum are really wonderful always...

2016 was comparatively a good one and somewhere you all were the part of it...who always took out time for reading my work and your lovely reviews always left a smile on my face...😊

So A huge Thank you to all of you for being

with me...😳

And I am here with another drabble and may be a last update from me for this year...with a promise of a treat on new year 😳

Hope you enjoy...

😊😳

❤️

--Deepti--

Edited by -Prinky- - 8 years ago