Qubool Hai: Asya Forever FF (IMP NOTE ON PG.14) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Do pm me whenever you update next😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Very interesting start

Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊


Thank you & I will update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Do pm me whenever you update next😊


For sure
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start dear
Loved it
Continue soon plz
Do pm me when u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice start dear
Loved it
Continue soon plz
Do pm me when u update
Thanks


Thank you & for sure :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Before starting chapter 2, I want to make some things clear:

1. Nikhat's wedding is still fixed with Imran.
2. There is no Najma & Imran track
3. Farhan doesn't exist in my ff
4. Zoya still believes that her Abbu isn't alive

Chapter 2

Ayan's residence:

*Its night time*

Ayan (to himself): "Main Bhaijaan ko phone kar k bata deta hoon k hum unse milne aa rahe hain."

*Ayan dials Asad's number.*

Ayan: "salam Bhaijaan"

Asad: "w/salam Ayan. Iss waqt kyun phone kiya? Koi kaam tha?"

Ayan: "Nahi Bhaijaan. Main bas apko inform kar raha hoon k main, Nikhat or Nuzhat apse milne aa rahe hain."

Asad: "Ayan, abhi humare ghar k halat kuch theek nahi hain. Toh mujhe nahin lagta tumhe ana chahi hai."

Ayan: "Par Bhaijaan, hum kitne dair sy nahin mile. Mujhe apke yaad aa rahe hai."

Asad: "Ayan mujhe b tumhare yaad aa rahe hai. Accha, aa jao. Khaafe time ho gaya hum mile nahin."

Ayan: "thank you Bhaijaan. Mujhe hamare purani waqt bohat yaad aate hain. Jab main raat ko apko milne ata tha, choop choop k. Or Mona ny bhi hume kitna baar pakra tha. Kya time thay wo. Ab sab kuch bohat badal gaya hai, haina Bhaijaan?"

Asad: "Haan Ayan bohat zyada. Phele toh Ms. Farooqui mujhe bardhast kar lete thi or mujhse baat b kar lete thi. Par ab, wo mujhse itne nafrat karte hain. Unko mera chera dekhna b nahi pasand."

Ayan: Bhaijaan, ap tension maat liye. Wo zyada dair tak apse naraz nahi reh sakte. Dekhna, bohat jald wo apse baat kare gee."

Asad: "Wo jab chup rehte hai, toh mujhe daar lagta hai. Uske chupi mujhe guilty feel kara rahe hai. Phele bohat bohlti thi. Mere saath kitna argue karti thi. Ab bas chup rehte hai. Uske ankhon mai woh dard dekheye deta hai jo maine usse diya. Mujhe mere purani Zoya wapis chaiye hai.

Ayan: Mil jaye gee apko apni purani Zoya. Mujhe bhi mere purani wale Bhaijaan chaiye hai. Zoya kehte hai k ap Akru Ahmed Khan ho. Par ab mujhe aisa nahi lagta. Wo wale akru phir sy mujhe wapis chaiye hain. Zoya ko b apna Akru Ahmed Khan wapis chaiye hai. Wo ap sy naraz hai par zyada dair tak nahi rahi gee. Dekhna bohat jald ap dono k beech sab kuch theek ho jaye ga."

Asad: "InshAllah tumhari baate sach huyi Ayan. Mujhe uss din k intezar hai jab Zoya mujhse phir argue kare, mujhse theek sy baat kare. Ayan, tum yahan aa jao phir baaki baate hoon gee."

Ayan: "okay Bhaijaan. Apna khayal rakhna. Allah Hafiz."

*Asad and Ayan hang up*

Ayan: "Nikhat, Nuzhat yahan aao. Kuch baat karne hai." (Calls out to them)

Nikhat: "Gee Bhaijaan, bas 5 minutes dy."

Nuzhat: "Gee Bhaijaan, abhi aayi."

*Nikhat and Nuzhat come to Ayan's room*

Ayan: "Nikhat, Nuzhat main yeh soocha raha tha k sirf main jaon Bhaijaan k ghar. Kyunki abhi unke ghar mein bohat tension hai. Tum dono mere saath next time chale jana theek hai?"

Nuzhat: "Par maine b Bhaijaan ko milna hai."

Nikhat: "Nuzhat koi baat nahi. Hum agle baar chale jayenge."

*Nuzhat and Nikhat are kind of upset because they wanted to meet Asad.*

*Ayan gets ready to leave the house.*

*Rashid is talking to Shireen in their bedroom*

Rashid: "Shireen, Asad ny bohat galat kiya Zoya k saath haina?"

Shireen: "Mujhe Asad or uske family sy koi matlab nahi."

Rashid: "Asad mera b beta hai or Zoya mere bete jaise. Mujhe unn dono k fikr hai."

Shireen: "Wo apke baache hon gy par mera unse koi rishta nahi. Ap humare Ayan or Nikhat k baare mai soochiye. Nikhat ka rishta bohat baar toote toote baacha hai. Or ab hume jald uske shaadi karwa dene hai. Or Ayan or Humaira k rishte ke baat b aagi bara ne hai."

Rashid: "Ho jaye gee dono k shaadi. Wo toh kisi b waqt ho sakte hai. Mujhe iss waqt sirf Asad k fikr hai. Shaadi toote hai uss bechare ke."

Shireen: "Rashid, apne kabhi b meri or mere baacho k fikr nahi ke. Hum apke liye kuch bhi nahi hain. Jab dekho uss Dilshad k family k baate karte rete ho."

Rashid: "Shireen tum- rene do. Tumse baat karna he bekrar hai."

Shireen: "Par Rashid-"

*Rashid gets up and leaves the room in anger. Razia is watching all this happening from outside*

Razia: "Ab mein Shireen ko Rashid k khilaf karoon gee."

*Razia smirks evilly*


Asad's residence

*Asad, Zoya, Dilshad, Najma & Tanveer were all sitting in the living room, watching a cricket match.*

Najma: "Zoya, cricket toh apka favorite hai. Mahendra Singh Dhoni toh apka favourite player hai. Usne two six maare hain par ap aaj waise unke liye cheer nahi kar rahi."

Zoya: "Nahi Najma, woh bas mera mood nahi hai. Mera tabiyat kuch theek nahi. Phophi, main kamre mein jaa kar aram karte hoon."

Dilshad: "Zoya, achanak kya hua? Tum theek toh ho?"

Zoya: "Jee Phophi. Thodi dair reat karoon gee toh theek ho jaon gee. Don't worry."

Dilshad: "Theek hai Zoya, tum jao. Agar kisi b cheez ke zaroorat ho, toh mujhe bhula lena."

Zoya: "okay phophi."

*Asad looks at Zoya with concern but she tries really hard not to look at him. All of a sudden the door bell rings. Asad and Zoya at the same time say...*

Zoya (excited): "Lagta hai Appi or Jiju aa gy."

Asad: "Lagta hai Ayan aa gaya."

*Asad and Zoya make eye contact but Zoya looks away*

Najma: "Ammi, mein dekh ty hoon k kohn hai."

*Najma gets up and answer the door. Its Ayan.*

Najma: "Ayan Bhaijaan ap? Aaye andhar."

*Ayan enters and hugs Asad.*

Ayan: "Salam Mona darling."

*Zoya just ignores him*

Ayan: "Chalo koi baat nahi. Salam baari Ammi."

Dilshad: "w/salam beta."

*Dilshad smiles at him.*

Zoya: "Phophi main kamre mein jaa rahe hoon."

Dilshad: "Theek hai beta, jao."

Ayan: "Zoya ko kya hua?"

Najma: "Uske tabiyat nahi theek."

Ayan: "Bhaijaan, apke room mein chaltay hain."

Asad: "Ammi, mein jata hoon. Khana jab tayar ho ga, ap mujhe bhula leh."

Dilshad: "Theek hai, tum log jao. Tanveer, tum bhi jaa k aram karo."

Tanveer: "Jee Khala."

*Tanveer is mad because no one gave attention to her. Everyone went to their rooms.*

*Later*

Dilshad: "Asad, Zoya, Najma, Ayan, Tanveer, aa k khana kha lo."

*Everyone is sitting and eating. Suddenly they hear the doorbell ring*

Najma: "Ammi, mein dekh tee hoon."

*Najma opens the door and sees that its Zoya's Appi and Jiju. She lets them in the house. Zoya sees them and runs towards them and hugs them.

Zoya: "Appi, Jiju, mujhe ap dono k bohat yaad aa rahe thee."

Anwar: "Hume bhi tumhare bohat yaad aa rahe thee isliye toh hum aaye hain."

*Everyone greets Appi and Jiju. Dilshad serves them food and water. Then they all sit and talk. Zoya is really happy. Asad is happy, seeing her smile after so many days.*

Asad (to himself): "Ms. Farooqui, ap aise he smile karte rahe. Apko khush dekh k mujhe b bohat khushi milte hai."

*Asad is staring at Zoya. As usual Tanveer is jealous.*

Dilshad: "Bohat raat ho gaye hai, hum sab ko jaa kar so jana chaiye hai. Ayan, tum ny kar nahi jana."

Ayan: "Nahi, main sooch raha tha k aaj raat mein yaheen rookh jaon, agar ap sab sy theek hai."

Dilshad: "Haan therk hai. Tum Asad k kamre mein soo jao. Zeenat, Anwar, mein ap dono ko guesy room tak chor atte hoon."

*Everyone goes to their rooms to sleep.*

*Zoya is sleeping in her room with the lights turned off. Suddenly someone opens her bedroom door. That person is dressed in all black with it's face covered. That person is also holding a knife. That person is slowly walking towards Zoya. That person trips and accidentally knocks off a vase from the table. The vase drops on the ground with a loud sound. Zoya suddenly wakes up.*

Zoya (in a scared voice): "k-k-kon haii?"

*The person slowly comes closer to her*

Zoya (still scared): "k-kon h-hai? M-mere paas maat ana."

*The person is so close to her, but is unable to stab her as she gets up from the bed and runs outside. When she is in the living room, she screams.*

Zoya (scared voice): "Phopiii, Najmaaa, Mr. Khannn!!"

*The person runs away quickly from the door. Everyone comes running to the living room. Dilshad and Zeenat run towards Zoya and hug her. She falls on the ground, crying. Dilshad and Zeenat try to console her. Dilshad, Asad, Najma, Ayan, Zeenat, Anwar are all present in the room. The only person not seen in the room is Tanveer.*

Dilshad: "Zoya, kya hua? Tum theek ho?"

Zoya (scared): "phophi, mere kamre mein koi aya tha. Mujhe nahi pata kon tha wo par uske haath mein knife tha. Phophi mujhe bohat daar lag raha."

*Zoya hugs Dilshad tightly while crying.*

Dilshad: "Chup ho jao meri baachi. Koi nahi hai. Ab main aa gaye hoon. Kuch nahi ho ga."

Asad: Ayan, baar ja kar dekho kon tha. Uss insan ko mai chora ga nahi. Ms. Farooqui, ap akhele nahi hain. Hum sab apke saath hain. Apko daar ny k zaroorat nahi."

*Zoya hugs Asad tightly*
*Mitwa Moment*

Zoya (scared/crying): "Mr. Khan, ap mujhe chor kar maat jaye."

Asad: "Nahin Ms. Farooqui, main yahin hoon. Kahin bhi nahin jaonga apko chor kar."

*Asad comforts Zoya by patting her head. Zoya realizes that in fear she hugged Asad. So she quickly moves away from him.*

Zoya: "Phophi, ap mere saath rahe. Please."

Zeenat: "Mere baache, kuch nahi ho ga. Mein tumhare saath tumhare kamre mein soote hoon."

Anwar: "Chup ho jao meri princess, hum sab hain aapke saath."

*Zoya is still crying*

Dilshad: "Zeenat, Zoya ko kamre mein ly jao. Bechari bohat daar gaye hai."

*Asad is upset but tries to control his emotions.*

*Ayan comes*

Ayan: "Bhaijaan, mujhe koi b nahi mila. Lagta wo insan bhaag gaya."

Asad: "Mujhe jab uss insan ka pata chale ga, main usko choro ga nahi. Ek minute. Tanu kahan hai. Itna kuch ho gaya or woh aaye nahin."

Dilshad: "Asad, woh pregnant hai. Thak gaye ho gee isliye aram kar rahe ho gee."

Zoya (to herself): "Jo insan mere kamre mein aaya tha, wo kya Tanveer ho sakte hai? Haan woh zaroor Tanveer he thi."

*Asad goes to Tanveer's room. He sees that she is sleeping. Asad leaves. Tanveer opens her eyes. She was fake sleeping so no one doubts her.*

Tanveer (to herself): "Mujhe mera doosra attack Zoya py jald karna. Iss baar wo baach nahi sakte."

Precap: Tanveer's truth revealed in front of everyone.


Hope you guys enjoyed this update. Sorry if it was too boring. Next chapter will be worth reading for sure.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Hate this tanveer...
N stupid n dumb asad...
Can u plz let ayaan show asad the mirror of his deeds like caring for tanveer leaving zoya..
I want at least some one to lash it out to him..
Plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Awesome chapter
Loved reading it
Asad indeed deserves all of zoya's hatred
Hate this tanveer
But glad to know that she would be exposed in the next part
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was so happy to see your Update.😊
It was so Interesting Part.😊
Asad(KSG) and Ayaan Conversation was so Nice.😊
It was so sad to see ASYA(KABHI) Like that.😭
Tanveer😡 again tried to kill Zoya.
Zoya hugged Asad(KSG) in fear,it was so Nice.😊
Percap was so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
thanks fr the PM dear,
a nice update,
looking fwd fr the revelations...
update sooon...

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