Qubool Hai: Asya Forever FF (IMP NOTE ON PG.14)

Hi Guys...

This is my first time writing a fanfiction on Qubool Hai. So I hope that all of support me and love my story.

None of us wanted Asad and Zoya's story to end in such a tragic way. We were all upset with how their character just ended. But I'm going to fix up Qubool Hai and make a story that we all probably wanted to see. This fanfiction is going to be written the way Qubool Hai is supposed to be. Every character is going to be the same and the storyline is going to be the same as it was in Season 1.

I'm going to start of my fanfiction at the part where Asad finds out Tanveer's truth. I know this a little behind and most of you might not remember this. But I will refresh it for you. Zoya is praying and Tanveer is about to kill her. There Asad arrives and catches Tanveer trying to kill Zoya. Asad is really mad at her and he tells her to leave. In anger, he flips the entire table over. Angry at the fact his childhood best friend betrayed him. Angry at the fact that his best friend tried to kill Zoya.

After this part in Qubool Hai, I found the rest of the story really horrible. Zoya and Ayan's marriage, Najma falling for Imran, our KSG leaving the show, Haider out of nowhere being shown, in the fire incident dream, Zoya suddenly being older than she was, etc. I was mad at the way Qubool Hai turned out to be. I expected way better. I feel that they should have just finished the show on October 29 2013, after a year it started instead of dragging it and making it bs. That way we could have seen Zoya and Asad's marriage with KSG. It would have been so great. I'm going to forget everything that happened in Qubool Hai after Tanveer's truth had been exposed. I'm going to make a story that has more logic to it.

I'm sorry if my opinion hurt any of you but this is just my opinion and how I feel. I just hope you guys love this fanfiction. I'll be giving more ideas on how this fanfiction is going to be. I want my real Qubool Hai type of feeling in this fanfiction. Hope you guys enjoy.



Index

Characters: Page 1
Chapter 1: Page 1
Chapter 2: Page 3
Chapter 3: Page 7
Chapter 4: Page 10
Chapter 5: Page 12

Cast and Characters

Surbhi Jyoti as Zoya Farooqui

Karan Singh Grover as Asad Ahmed Khan

Neha Lakshmi Iyer as Najma Ahmed Khan

Shalini Kapoor Sagar as Dilshad Rashid Ahmed Khan

Sangeeta Kapure as Zeenat Farooqui

Harsh Vashisht as Anwar Farooqui

Rishabh Sinha as Ayaan Ahmed Khan

Archana Taide Sharma as Nikhat Ahmed Khan

Farhina Jarimari as Nuzzhat Ahmed Khan

Ketki Kadam as Humeira Ahmed Siddiqui

Amrapali Gupta as Tanveer/Billo Rani

Vidya Sinha as Badi Bi

Vaquar Shaikh as Rashid Ahmed Khan

Tej Sapru as Gaffur Ahmed Siddiqui

Alka Kaushal as Razia Gaffur Ahmed Siddiqui

Surabhi Vanzara as Shireen Rashid Ahmed Khan

Vikram Singh Chauhan as Imraan Qureshi

Nishi Singh as Haseena Bi

I'm starting at the part where Tanveer's truth is about to be revealed in front of Asad and his family.

Chapter 1

Asad's residence:

Zoya is laying in bed the next morning, thinking how to reveal Tanveer's truth to Asad.

Zoya: "Allah Miyan, mein kya karoon? Tanveer ka sach Mr. Khan ke samne kaise laon? Agar mein Tanveer ke hilaf kuch kahungi, toh Mr. Khan mera yakeen nahi karain gy. Or mein kisi ki help b nahi ly sakte. Proof k bina koi mera yakeen nahi kare ga. Mein kya karoon?"

*Zoya's phone starts ringing*

Zoya: "yeh kiska phone aa gaya subah subah?"

*Zoya checks her phone. Its her Zeenat Appi*

"Appiii" Zoya screamed happily.

Zeenat: "Zoya, kaise ho tum?"

Zoya: "Appi, mein bilkul theek hoon. Ap or Jiju kaise hain?

Zeenat: hum dono b theek hain. Tumhari shaadi toot ne k baad, mein wapis New York chale gee thee. Mujhe tumhari bohat yaad hai. Pata nahi tumhara kya haal ho ga. Asad ny jo kiya tumhare saath, wo bilkul theek nahi tha. Zoya, mujhse tumhari haalat nahi dekhe jaa rahi thee. Isliye maine Dilshad B ko kaha tha k wo tumhara hayal rakhe. Lekin mein or tumhare Jiju abhi airport bas thode he dair me ja rahe hain. Hum dono k tumhare bohat yaad aa rahe hai isliye hum aa rahe hain tumhare pass. Tum bilkul akhele nahi ho.

Zoya: *with tears in her eyes* "Appi ap jaldi aaye. Mujhe aapke saath ki zaroorat hai. Yeh sab jo ho raha hai, wo sab uss Tanveer k wajah sy ho raha. Wo bohat buri hai. Ek baar ab aa jaye, toh mein apko sab kuch samaja doon gee. Jaldi aane aapi. I miss you."

Zeenat: "Zoya tum ro mat. Mein aaj sham tak poonch jaongi. Tu akhele nahi ho. Tumhare pass wahan Dilshad b hain. Hayal rakhna apne. Hum milte hain bohat jald. Mein phone rakhte hoon. Allah Hafiz."

Zoya: "Thank you Appi. Ap b apna or Jiju ka hayal rakna. Allah Hafiz."

*Zoya and Zeenat both hang up*

Zoya (to herself): "aaj sham tak, kaise b kar k mujhe uss Tanveer k saacheye sab k saamne la ne hai."

*Dilshad enters Zoya's room*

Dilshad: "are Zoya, tum utth gaye? Chalo fresh ho jao or phir aa k nashta kar lena."

Zoya: "Ji phophi. Wo aaj sham tak appi or jiju yahan aa rahe hain."

Dilshad: "yeh toh bohat aache baat hai. Hum unke liye guest room clean karwa lete hain. Tum ja k fresh ho jao."

Zoya: "Thank you phophi."

*Zoya smiles at Dilshad and heads to the washroom.*

Dilshad: "Ya Allah, meri Zoya ko hamesha hush rakhna. Uss behari ne kabhi kisi ka kya begara. Usse aise mein upset nahi dekh sakte."

*Everyone is already at the breakfast table*

Tanveer: "Jammy, hum apke liye coffee banaye?"

Asad: "Nahin Tanu, mujhe sirf Zoya k haath ke coffe pasand hai."

Tanveer: "Par Jammy, bachpan sy apko mere haath ke haar cheez pasand thee."

Asad: "Tanu, waqt k saath cheeze b badal jaate hain.

Tanveer: "Par Jammy-"

Najma (interrupts): Bhaijaan, Zoya aa gee hai.

*Dilshad brings Zoya to the table and makes her sit. Asad looks at Zoya and Zoya looks at him. They make eye contact but Zoya looks away.*

Dilshad: "Zoya, tumhare liye maine special pizza mangwaya."

Zoya: "Thank you phophi, par aaj mere mann nahi hai pizza k liye. Maine aaj aapke aloo k parathe khane hai."

Najma: "Zoya, aise kaise? Apne toh pizza ko kabhi naa nahi kiya toh phir aaj kaise?"

Zoya: "Tamatar, mera aaj mann nahi hai."

*Asad is staring at Zoya the entire time. Tanveer is jealous as she wants Asad entire attention on her. So she "accidentally" spills hot tea on herself. But at the same time, warm tea also spills on Zoya but hers is an accident*

Tanveer: "aaa Jammy. Bohat jalan ho rahe hai, mera haat. Jammyyy. Aaa."

Zoya: "phophiii mera haath. Bohat jalh raha hai. Aaa"

Dilshad: "Najma first aid box leh k aao. Zoya chup ho jao, kuch nahi ho ga."

*Asad gets up from the table and attends Tanveer*

Asad: "Tanveer, tum pregnant ho. Apna thoda sa b hayal rakho."

Tanveer: "Ap hai na mere liye. Aaa Jammy bohat dard ho raha."

Asad: "Chalo aao, kamre mein. Mai tumhara first aid wahan kar loon ga.

*Zoya looks at him with a hurt face, with tears streaming down her cheeks*

Dilshad: "Asad, Zoya ko bhi lagi hai."

Asad: "Ammi, ap dekhye, Tanu ko zyada lagi hai. Mai usse kamre mein leh k jaa raha hoon."

Asad (to himself): "I'm sorry Zoya. Tumhari pass Ammi or Najma hai. Par Tanu bilkul akhele hao. Or waise b, agar mein apko haath lagta, toh ap phirse kehte k mujhe haath matt lagye. Mai janta hoon k ap mujhse ab nafrat kar ty hain. I'm sorry."

*Tanveer smirks*

Zoya (to herself): "Mr. Khan, apko mere zara se b fikr nahi hai? Ho kya gaya apko? Mujhe toh laga tha k ap mujhe takleef mein nahi dekh sakte. Lekin mein galat thee. Don"t worry Mr.Khan. Tanveer ko expose kar k mein New York wapis chale jaongi."

*Zoya is crying but is trying to control it*

Zoya: "Phophi, mera ek kaam hai, wo mein complete kar k New York wapis chale jaongi.

*Asad, while walking Tanveer to the room freezes in shock.*

*Zoya, quickly runs to her room*

Asad: "Ms. Farooqui-"

*It was too late for Asad to say anything as Zoya already ran to her room.*

Asad (to herself): "Zoya tumhe mein wapis nahi jaane doon ga jo b ho jaye."

*Zoya is crying so much in her room. Thinking to herself how her Mr. Khan is so heartless, more heartless than he was when she first met him.*

Zoya (to herself): "Tanveer ka saach toh mein aapke samne laa kar rahoon gee."


Ayan's residence:

(I'm gonna use the old Ayan in my story. Humaira isn't going to have a memory loss in which she is Rajni)

*Razia talking to Humaira*

Razia: "Humaira, tumhara or Ayan ka nikah mei bohat jald karwaoon gee. Do teen hafte tak."

Humaira: "Theek hai Ammi par ek baad Ayan sy baat kar lein."

Razia: "Usse baat karne k zaroorat nahi. Wo maan jaye ga."

Humaira: "Okay Ammi"

*Nikhat, Nuzhat, Ayan talking*

Ayan: "Bhaijaan bohat upset hain. Jab k unke shaadi toote hai."

Nikhat: "Ayan, sirf Bhaijaan nahi upset. Zoya Baji unse zyada upset hain. Unka dil toota or wo b Bhaijaan ke wajah sy."

Ayan: "Iss mein Bhaijaan ka koi kasoor nahi hai. Jo b hua, uss mein Tanveer k bhi galti ho sakte hai."

Zuzhat: "Haan, yeh bhi ho sakta. Kyun na hum aaj sham ko Asad Bhaijaan k ghar jaye?"

Ayan: "Haan, yeh aacha idea hai."

Precap: Someone attempting to kill Zoya.


I hope you guys enjoyed. Please comment and I will continue soon. I will try to make the next few chapters longer.

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

hey, its a nice update..
looking fwd fr the upcoming twist...
pm me if u can,
update soon...

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was so Happy to meet you.😊

It was So Interesting FF.😊

I also didn't like that Track in QH.😡

Your Idea was so Nice,I Loves it.😊

Character Sketch was so Nice.😊

This Part was so Interesting.😊

Please Continue soon and PM to me,I am waiting here.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

Awww thank you so much :)

Originally posted by: anuv6

hey, its a nice update..
looking fwd fr the upcoming twist...
pm me if u can,
update soon...

Thanks & for sure

Loved it..
Feelings are mutual...
Thanks...
I was waiting for something like this happening...
Good...

Hope u won't let zoya forgive asad easily like in the show...
Let asad woo her...
Later...
Plz update soon..
Plz pm me

Originally posted by: sasir

Loved it..
Feelings are mutual...
Thanks...
I was waiting for something like this happening...
Good...

Hope u won't let zoya forgive asad easily like in the show...
Let asad woo her...
Later...
Plz update soon..
Plz pm me

Glad we have similar feelings. I'll update soon & will pm you

Very interesting start