New Asya FS ~ Sab Teraa ~ posted part 4 (15/7/2016) - Page 20

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing update

Loved reading it to the core

Especially the bond asya have come to share

The dori scene was romantic and intense too

Hate this haseena😡

But so glad that asad took her class

Looking forward to know what happens next in the story

Please continue soon

Will be waiting impatiently 😊

Originally posted by: binuuu

Hey jash🤗

Super duper update...

Enjoyed very well...

Wow...Asya's equation changed...

Asad tied the dori...nice scene to watch...scene of the day😉

Perfect gif to describe their feelings...👏

They started to depend on others unknowingly...

Dilshaad is not going to interfere in their love life...they themself will take the step...good ..

Zoya became a perfect mother for zara. .

Asad miyaan chup chaap se listened Nadira's words...kuch toh hua hai,kuch hogaya hai...interesting..interesting...😉

Haseena bhi😡😡

Asad have wonderful answers to her👏..hats off u Mr.Khan..

I'm sure he will not go to his shell this time ..

Wanna see what will happen in Khan mansion...

Update soon mahotrama...

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hello Jas... 😊
Thank You soo much for the RES... 😳
Hope you are doing good..

Coming to the update...
It was very good , well written and Intriguing... 👏
I mean first the song sequence at first with ASYA dori scene was perfect...kaash !! serial ke time bhi yeh gaana hota toh yeh scene aur bhi perfect hoojata...but here it was perfect...and the emotions were written spot on..liked reading that whole first half..

Now coming to the 2nd half...I guess this push was needed by someone to make ASYA realize their inner emotions and what truly they feel about each other...because Dilshad is right on her place...yeh halki si push dena toh bahar waalon ka kaam hai... 😆 , and Nadira aunty ne who kaam bakhoobi nibahaya hai..

Haseena bi is 😡 😡 ...aaacha kiya ki usko inti baatein sun wayi Asad aur Dilshad dono se...

Dekhte hai ab Asad miya gussa hota hai yaa confess karte hai... 😉

Liked reading this part..

Continue soonish... 😊

Originally posted by: anopama

Love the update

An FS can simply be turned into an SS😉

So asya friendship grew and it seems to be more than friends now

Their is a little akwardness and he was so worried if he offended her

Love the Dori scene

🤢Haseena and her daughter nasty

Haha she wanted tanveer for Asad

Thank god both refuse both times

Glad Asad opened his mouth to Haseena

Waiting for more

Cont

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Awesome update again Jas...👏👏

Song was so perfect and the whole sequence was amazingly written...

like to see their changing equation now...

Zoya and Zara...so cute together...

Nadira did a good job here...

Haseena was just 😡😡

So now drama toh ho gaya...what will be the reactions of it...eager to read...

continue soon...

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

Jas beautiful,

let me tell you I am in love with this story, TO-TAL-LY IN LOVE with this one. I mean I was hooked from the beginning and I don't want this story to end.

Awe Rada that was so sweet Love u.. I m glad u managed 2 read this 1🤗

It has its own charm, the plot is brillant and the way you portray Asya's relationships is amazing girl. Most of the time, I am in my la la land, it's so romantic, so deep, so intense. I am too girly 😆

In 1 word its completely fluff right 😆 & I love this genre koi nasty crazy villan nahi bas just love & romance😛

I can't get over this story and I am so enthusiastic about this one. I can't imagine you want to finish it so quickly but I will not say anything 🥺 or using any blackmail 😭or torture you 😈 to extand, you are the writer but think about it.

Lol u r 2nd 1 2 say this Rada 😆 but sachi i don't know where i m taking it... cuz i have a habit of getting carried away a lot😆

For a change, I have nothing to add or to discuss, everything in this story is so cool and is just going to way it should be between the two of them. The love is growing between them and you made it so beautiful.

Hehe I m so happy u find it so good ☺️ tyt hugs 4 d lovely review Sweetu🤗

I hope you will update soon, can't wait to see how both of them will confess.

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Mere liye bhi choddo ek spot😆

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

Yipeee me 1st

Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Mayur res ke liye thanks na bola kar 😆 badi choti baat hai
I m well hope so r u ... aajkal gayab ho kya tum bhi?
I m really glad a pat on my back lol suprisingly maine dono hi stories main ache romantic & dreamy scene lekhe the😆 but is baar pta nahi boring hai aage

han u understand it correctly👍🏼 bas Nadira ke intentions ache the but Haseena was too disgusting🤢

lol yes lets wait & wait cuz i m on writers block🤣🤣

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Main aadat se majboor hu...Thanks nikal hee jaata hai...😆

And i guess being a very Attentive Reader and Fan of ASYA the way you are soo Romantic parts sahi nikalna toh banta hai...aagey bhi aache hee aayenge...

And I wish yeh Block jalddi hatey and hamey update jaldi miley..