New Asya FS ~ Sab Teraa ~ posted part 4 (15/7/2016)

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Love the update

An FS can simply be turned into an SS😉

So asya friendship grew and it seems to be more than friends now

Their is a little akwardness and he was so worried if he offended her

Love the Dori scene

🤢Haseena and her daughter nasty

Haha she wanted tanveer for Asad

Thank god both refuse both times

Glad Asad opened his mouth to Haseena

Waiting for more

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@Sp8699

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Superb hey do PM when u update next wonderful update, update soon

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Really

Why are some people interested in others so much

Just mind ur own business

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Jas beautiful,

let me tell you I am in love with this story, TO-TAL-LY IN LOVE with this one. I mean I was hooked from the beginning and I don't want this story to end.

It has its own charm, the plot is brillant and the way you portray Asya's relationships is amazing girl. Most of the time, I am in my la la land, it's so romantic, so deep, so intense. I am too girly 😆

I can't get over this story and I am so enthusiastic about this one. I can't imagine you want to finish it so quickly but I will not say anything 🥺 or using any blackmail 😭or torture you 😈 to extand, you are the writer but think about it.

For a change, I have nothing to add or to discuss, everything in this story is so cool and is just going to way it should be between the two of them. The love is growing between them and you made it so beautiful.

I hope you will update soon, can't wait to see how both of them will confess.

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

asya room scene cute... sweet..

we bold asad...

nice update

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#186

Awesome update again Jas...👏👏

Song was so perfect and the whole sequence was amazingly written...

like to see their changing equation now...

Zoya and Zara...so cute together...

Nadira did a good job here...

Haseena was just 😡😡

So now drama toh ho gaya...what will be the reactions of it...eager to read...

continue soon...

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#187

A beautifully written story.

Waiting for the story to proceed further and Asad's reaction towards zoya.

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: shonayaa
Beautifully written
Love the bond asya share
Thanx for pm

Originally posted by: -jerry-
L❤️ve It

Originally posted by: 9849565007
Loved the update

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Amazing part
Asya moments lovely
Omg that bhaiseena and her drama really bad but asad and dilshaad handling her wow
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next
Continue soon

Originally posted by: sasir
Superb...
Loved it..
But hate that haseena..

Originally posted by: Chocochip...
LOVED IT.Continue soon

Originally posted by: MOnkEy_rAngEr
Nice

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
Awesome Update
You did a great job

Originally posted by: allwaysasya
Brilliant update
loved asya bonding
haseena can never spoke good for anyone
asad showed her real place
zoya's worries are reasonable
update soon

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Awesome update
Loved it
Asya coming closer. Zoya & Zara bonding was nice. Room incident, one feel guilty & other feel shy as she didn't know how to react. Haseena & her mouth, dilshad told her to stay away from her family as next time she won't leave her. Zoya was scared for asad. Hope he will talk to her rather that go to his shell. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Monali5
Yippee!! Nice update 👏

Originally posted by: AMMY12
Awsm update
To gud
Luvd it
Superb one
Cont asap plzzz.
Thnx for d pm
T.c.

Originally posted by: Sp8699
Superb hey do PM when u update next wonderful update, update soon

Originally posted by: SanKsgian
Really
Why are some people interested in others so much
Just mind ur own business

Originally posted by: Linsie

asya room scene cute... sweet..
we bold asad...

nice update

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao
A beautifully written story.
Waiting for the story to proceed further and Asad's reaction towards zoya.

Thanks every1 4 ur lovely replies😃

Edited by jas91 - 9 years ago

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Amina...
Mind blowing Update Jas ...!!!
It was Really Nice ...!!!
Loved Asya's new found bonding ... their growing closeness n feelings ...!!!
The song sequence was Lovely ...!!!
And that Haseena ... i want to kill her 😡
But Asad did the right thing 👏
On the whole , loved the update ...!!!
Continue Soon Please ...!!!

Thanks a lot Amina ... I m really glad u liked it😃
Shall updt as soon as possible😳

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: cutie15
The dori scene ❤️
Zoya and zara are adorable together
Asad took a very good stand
Haseena bi is just beyond my imagination in speaking evil
Loved the update
Next update soon plz 😊

Hi Cutie thanks 4 ur comnt😊
Haseena ki entry bas bezzat hone ke liye hui thi yahan 🤣