asya ss bol do na zara chapter 5 @ pg 9 /13-8-16

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part 1
Bhopal , 1990
Mubarak ho gaffur sahib , beti hui hai ...said the doctor.
Gaffur was more than happy after the news,
Ab to rishta pakka na gaffur ...said Rashid hugging him.
G : haan haan Rashid hume yaad hai , hum bohat khush hai ,
Dilshad (D): hume toh pehle hi pata tha ki ladki hogi , ab humare asad ki shaadi aapki beti ke saath hi hoga , kaash ye 20-23 saal jald se guzar jaaye .
R: arre begum aap chinta mat kijiye yehi aapke ghar ki bahu banegi kyu gaffur.
G : haan Rashid aur dilshaad zaroor.
D : waise bhaisahaab kya naam rakha hai aapne iska ?
G : iska naam hai ... ZOYA .
Waah kya naam hai , zoya , kitna pyaara lagega na ZOYA aur ASAD said dilshaad .



INSIDE THE ROOM ( ZAINUB AND DILSHAAD CONVO)
Zainub dekha humari duaa qubool hogai ...said dilshaad .
Haan dilshaad , hum aaj bahut khush hai hamare bacche saath mein padhenge , saath mein khelenge aur dono ka nikah ek dusre se hoga ... Said zainub eyeing 2 months old asad and one day old zoya ...



Bhopal 2000,
Everyone was crying , it was a sad day for them ,zoya was crying the most, today was the day she lost her mother, asad saw this and he came near zoya and kept consoling her , on the other hand dilshaad was consoling humeira , zoya's younger sister , ( when zoya was four years old humeira was born.), and Rashid on the other hand was consoling haider (zoya's elder brother who is five years elder to zoya ), dilshaad told asad ayaan and nikhat ( dilshaad and rashid's children to go home and take haider, zoya and humeira along with them.).



Bhopal 2006,
Everyone was happy as it was zoya's 16th birthday, dilshaad told asad to gift zoya something special to which asad made an irritated face .

A : ammi maine aapse kitni baar kaha hai ki who sirf meri best friend hai aur kuch nahi , phir aap kyu chahti ho ki mein usse special feel karvau ...damn aap log nahi samajhte ho ,agar maine usse special feel karvaya toh usse aisa lagega ki main ussse pyaar karta hun ,and I don't want that, I don't like her in that way , , she loves me but I don't , I just like her as my bestie ...saying this he goes away.

Offo yeh asad bhi na kuch bhi kehta hai ...saying this dilshaad goes away.




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing start
Loved reading it
Have always loved stories where asya know each other from childhood
Looking forward to read this amazing story
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊
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INDEX

Chapter 1 pg 1
Characters @ pg1
Teaser @ pg 5
Chapter 2 pg 6
Chapter 3 pg 8
Chapter 4 @ pg 9
Chapter 5 @ pg 9


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Characters:

Asad (26 years, main)
Zoya (26 years, main)
Dilshaad (Asad's mother)
Rashid (Asad's father)
Zainub (Zoya's mother, died when zoya was five)
Gaffur (Zoya's father)
Haider ( Zoya' elder brother and asad's jeeju.)
Nikhat (Asad's elder sister and zoya's bhabhi)
Ayaan (Asad's youger brother and humeira's love interest.)
Humeira (Zoya's younger sister and ayaan's love interest.)
Mahira (5 years old, haider and nikhat's daughter, she is the only one who can make zoya smile. )
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing start
Loved reading it
Have always loved stories where asya know each other from childhood
Looking forward to read this amazing story
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊


tysm will surely do soon
Edited by rahulmaanvi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice beginning. So zoya loves asad but he doesn't. Lovely start. Thanks for pm. Do update fast.
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Lovely Start ...!!!
Continue soon ...!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start
These childhood stories...I love them!!
Fixed marriage!
Oye hoye ...siyappa
Zoya pyaar karing but asad na na na
Its going to be fun!
I love the title!!
Brilliant start!!
Loved it
Update soonishesty

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Awesome start

These childhood stories...I love them!!
Fixed marriage!
Oye hoye ...siyappa
Zoya pyaar karing but asad na na na
Its going to be fun!
I love the title!!
Brilliant start!!
Loved it
Update soonishesty

thank u so much😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting
Continue soon ..
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