asya ss bol do na zara chapter 5 @ pg 9 /13-8-16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

what kind on track u want plz let me know

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Nice update
Asad took a wrong decision
He should talk to Zoya rather than leaving her. Waiting for next update soon
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Hope you are feeling better now

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice update
Asad took a wrong decision
He should talk to Zoya rather than leaving her. Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm
Hope you are feeling better now

yaa
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update by tmrw
not very big one
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and i am feeling much better

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

this is a shocking decision from Asad...loved the update

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Recap:
Zoya came back to reality and went to her father and saw him shivering and asked someone to call the ambulance.

after few hours :

doctor sahab gaffur bhaisahaab kaise hai ab...

hum kuch nahi keh sakte hai ...said the doctor .

CHAPTER 3

It was more than five hours and still no improvement in gaffur's health.
Everyone was tensed and zoya was crying, for two reasons, gaffur's health and asad's betrayal.
She was lost in some thought when she saw doctor coming out.
She rushed towards the doctor and asked him: doctor mere abbu kaise hain, kya hua unhe, woh thik toh haina?...

DOCTOR:dekhiye abhi woh critical hai lekin woh kisi zoya se milna chahte hai...
As soon as she heard the doctor she rushed inside.
Abbu... Said zoya.

G: zoya aao beta, betho mere paas.

Z :abbu aap thik toh haina.

G: zoya meri baat suno, mere paas bahut kam samay hai...

Z: abbu yeh aap kya keh rahe hai...

G: zoya aaj bolne do, main janta hun ki aaj jo tumhare saath hua woh accha nahi hua, main bhi asad se bahut naaraaz hun, par zoya mujhe ek vaada karo, vaada karo ki tum nahi tutogi, nahi asad ke liye nahi mere maut se, tum strong rahogi, main janta hun ki haider bada hai lekin uss ke dreams alag hai main chahta hun ki tum hamare company ko chalao aur usme apna talent add karo, main jahan bhi rahun, mujhe tum par garv mehsoos ho, aur humeira ka khyaal rakhna aur apne bhai bhabhi ki har baat manna, humare parivar ko tutne mat dena, saying so he takes her hand and keeps it on his head...
Before zoya could say anything she saw gaffur closing his eyes...

ABBUUU!!!!!!! screamed zoya at the top of her voice...
Listening to zoya the doctor came in and sent her out.

After some time:

I am sorry to say aapke abbu zinda toh hai lekin woh coma mein jaa chuke hai... said the doc.

Kya aisa nahi ho sakta doctor!!! Said zoya.
Plz samajhiye aisa hi hai!! Aap chahe toh inhe ghar le jaa sakti hai... Said the doc.

Jee doc hum lekar jayenge inhe ghar,aap saari formalities poori kijiye.. Said haider.

After sometime :

Zoya has recovered from her shock.
She narrates to the family about what gaffur has said her to do, and everyone agreed on the same.

Z: chinta mat kijiye abbu, main aapka sapna poora karungi aur humari event management ki company ko bahut aage lekar jaungi.
No one will be able to break me!! She says wiping her tears.

SO guys here, part 3 i couldnt wait so wrote it down.
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Posted: 9 years ago

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updating chapter four in sometime

Edited by rahulmaanvi - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Recap:

Z: chinta mat kijiye abbu, main aapka sapna poora karungi aur humari event management ki company ko bahut aage lekar jaungi.
No one will be able to break me!! She says wiping her tears.

CHAPTER 4

4 years later
Bhopal 2016,
Sunday morning,

Bhabhi,bhabhi... Said zoya with a stern voice and cold face.

(after asads betrayal and gaffurs loss zoya has changed, she was no more the bubbly, happy and carefree zoya, she is a girl who works all day, never laughs, and spends time in her room or with her abbu,she works a lot and because of her hardwork, the company has reached to a greater Heights, she doesnt even talks to her own family and also asads family, at nights she doesn't sleep she takes anti-depressents,she drinks black coffe, eats very little, she has grown slim and has big bags under her eyes,she is worried about humeira's marriage,as her abbu wanted that, there is only one person who can make her smile, she is mahira, zoya's neice(refer to character sketch at pg 1).)

Kya hua zoya... Said nikhat coming out from her room.
(Yes, you are right Asad's sister nikhat is only haider's wife aka zoya's bhabhi, dilshaad rashid gaffur and zainub decided that the children will get married to each other.
Haider-nikhat
Asad-zoya
Ayaan-humeira.)

Z: bhabhi aaj toh sunday hain, so subah subah mahira kahan gayi...
N: arre woh kya haina kal raat mein haider ne usse promise kiya tha ki woh usse park leke jayenge toh woh uth kar chali gayi unke saath, kyun kya hua zoya...
Z: nahi bhabhi aap toh jaante ho na mujhe subah uth the hi usse dekhne ki aadat hai... Acha mein chalti hoon... Saying so she leaves from the hall with a sad face.

Inside the room:

Zoya was lost in some thought or i can say a good memory of her and asad.

(i know u all must be wondering why is thinking about him but as they say pyaar ko bhulana aasan nahi thats the case with zoya.)

It was during summer asya were 6 years old and they were at a park enjoying and playing when suddenly zoya felt like having ice cream.

Z: ashu chalo ice cream khate hai.

A: nahi zoya mujhe nahi khaana hai, tum bhi mat khao warna aur moti ho jaogi.

Z: ashu dont worry hum mote nahi honge chalo... She tried pulling him but he pushed her hard.. Aah she shouted with pain as she hurt her knee very badly because of her ashu.

Aashu main tumse baat nahi karungi jao.. Saying so she somehow managed to go home with the help of the driver.

She was brought back out of her thoughts by her neice...

Phuphiii!!!!!!!!! Mahira ran towards zoya and hugged her.

Z: aagai meri bacchi.

M: haan phuphi, pata hai aaj maine bahut enjoy kiya aur apko bahut miss bhi kiya, lekin ab main aagai hun toh aaj pura din hum masti karenge ok?

Z: pakka karengekareng par pehle aap jaakar fresh hojao aur uske baad hum games khelenge ok?

M: barbie wala game?

Z: haan haan princess barbie wala game..saying so she hugs mahira after the hug mahira leaves.

Other corner of the house:

HAAN HAAN dont worry abhi tak aapi ko humare baare mein kuch bhi pata nahi chala hai, agar asad bhai ne dhoka nahi diya hota toh aaj hum bhi ek saath khush hote but dont worry main jaldi unse baat karungi aur agar woh nahi maani toh unhe emotional blackmail karungi... Said humeira.

(yes she was none other than humeira,
She and ayaan loved other and now are planning to say it to the whole family. She knew how to manipulate zoya to fulfill all her wishes or we cay say that she was the khotta sikka of the family. I know that she is not at fault but she should take her siblings for granted. )

In gaffur's room:

Abbu aap hi bataiye ki main kya karun...
Main jaanti hu ki humeira ayaan se mohabbat karti hai lekin main kya karun kaise ayaan par yakeen karu... Asad ne jo bhi kiya uske kaaran main ayaan par yakeen nahi kar pa rahi hun... Aapko pata hai humie ne kaha ki agar mein nahi maani to woh mujhe manipulate karegi taaki mein maan jau... Aab aap hi koi raasta dikhaiye abbu!!!

thats it for today.
my longest update.
next update tmrw.
hope u like it.
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Posted: 9 years ago

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amazing part

zoya and gaffour talk little emotional

asad's decision is really wrong

plz pm me for next

continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: nilusoni
amazing part
zoya and gaffour talk little emotional
asad's decision is really wrong
plz pm me for next
continue soon

thanks so much
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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Wow double updates😃

Awesome parts dear👏😊

Zoya decided to run her father's business

Glad dat she decided to move on😃

So Zoya is changed due to dat day

Yes, even girls can change into serious not only boys

Can I punch these both sets pf parents?😡 R they really some mentally challenged people to arrange their kids marriage to their friends kids just cuz these elders were friends? Wats d guarantee dat their children will be happy wid their marriages n will love each other only n not someone else while growing up? Wat will they do then for their selfish wishes?😡

I don't feel much bad for Gaffur as he is also d root cause along wid other elders

How can Gaffur so easily say dat he is angry wid Asad?😡

Zoya n Mahira scene is lovely😃

How can Humeira use Zoya? Can't she see her sister's pain?😡

I am glad dat Zoya came to know abt Humeira's plan

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago