asya ss bol do na zara chapter 5 @ pg 9 /13-8-16 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Wow double updates😃


Awesome parts dear👏😊

Zoya decided to run her father's business

Glad dat she decided to move on😃

So Zoya is changed due to dat day

Yes, even girls can change into serious not only boys

Can I punch these both sets pf parents?😡R they really some mentally challenged people to arrange their kids marriage to their friends kids just cuz these elders were friends? Wats d guarantee dat their children will be happy wid their marriages n will love each other only n not someone else while growing up? Wat will they do then for their selfish wishes?😡

I don't feel much bad for Gaffur as he is also d root cause along wid other elders

How can Gaffur so easily say dat he is angry wid Asad?😡

Zoya n Mahira scene is lovely😃

How can Humeira use Zoya? Can't she see her sister's pain?😡

I am glad dat Zoya came to know abt Humeira's plan


tysm
will update tomorrow also
ik i hate the parents
but we cant help it
it happens a lot in india
everyone is selfish
i hate humeira
next part we will have asad
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Oh..no..
Zoya changed so much...
See how much damage u have done to zoya's asad...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Recap:

Abbu aap hi bataiye ki main kya karun...
Main jaanti hu ki humeira ayaan se mohabbat karti hai lekin main kya karun kaise ayaan par yakeen karu... Asad ne jo bhi kiya uske kaaran main ayaan par yakeen nahi kar pa rahi hun... Aapko pata hai humie ne kaha ki agar mein nahi maani to woh mujhe manipulate karegi taaki mein maan jau... Aab aap hi koi raasta dikhaiye abbu!!! Said zoya crying bitterly.




CHAPTER 5

Everytime sitting in front of the her abbu Zoya would share all her problems, this time also she did the same, when she was laying her head on her abbu's bed she got an idea... She decided to test ayaan's love for humeira , so she went to her room and made few calls...

Z: chalo ab finally kaam hojayega teen din ke andar andar pata chal jayega ki ayaan humzie se kitna pyaar karta hai...
Saiyng so she left the room and went over to enjoy her day with her princess.



Meanwhile in Newyork:

ASAD was lost in some deep call when his pa called him...

Sir woh mr. Jones je saath deal ke liye meeting hai thode der mein... Sirrr...
Said prasad (P.A)

Hun... Haan mein bas ready hun, tum jaao mein abhi aata hun,... Said asad.

Ok sir...the pa left.

A: bas ab bahut hogaya hai ab jaise hi yeh deal finalise ho jayegi tab main bhopal jaunga, sabse maanfi manguga and zoya se apne pyaar ka izhar kardunga...

(Yes, you heard it right, asad loves zoya maybe, when he came to newyork he went over to his friends house and over the time he became one of the top businessman in newyork, he thought that he didn't love zoya but over the time because of loneliness he realised zoya's value in his life, he regretted his decision and now thinks that zoya will forgive him but little did he know that she has changed a lot and will not spare him.)

Keeping his thoughts aside he went for his meeting.



Meanwhile in India:
After three days:

Saare tests mein ayaan kaise pass ho sakta hai, kitne logo Se Kitna Kaam Karvaya, dono ke beech misunderstanding create karvayi lekin usne sab solve kardiya... Usse jealous feel karvaya,par woh jealous nahi hua and openly sab ke saamne usne confess kiya about his love for humzie,... Ab i guess mujhe yakeen ho chuka hai ki he is the one for her... Saying this Zoya comes out of her room and calls everyone.

Kya hua zoya... Said nikhat.

Z: bhabhi bhaijaan bura mat manna par maine humeira ke liye ladka pasand karliya hai aur iss se pehle aap puche ki woh kaun hai main bata deti hoon ki woh log kal aayenge... Saying so she leaves to her room bidding everyone good night.

Waah dekhiye kitni mahaan devi hai meri behen bina mujhse puche mera rishta tai kardiya!!!! How could she do that!!!! I hate her!!!! I feel like slapping her... Says humeira and leaves for her room.
Haider and nikhat also leave helplessly.

But what no one noticed is that zoya was listening everything and was crying!!




Thats it friends!!!
3 updates in a day.
I hope u all like it.
Specially my appi.
Asyaarshilover.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Zoya is right in testing Ayaan

I did not liked Asad here. If he really realized dat he loves Zoya then why did not he talked to her in 4 years?😡 I hope Zoya does not easily forgive him n rejects him.

Humeira is really very rude who only thinks of herself😡

I did not liked Zoya calling someone even widout asking Humeira(though its drama)

Is anyone really there to support Zoya wid her heartbreak?😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Part Dear👏😊


Zoya is right in testing Ayaan

I did not liked Asad here. If he really realized dat he loves Zoya then why did not he talked to her in 4 years?😡I hope Zoya does not easily forgive him n rejects him.

Humeira is really very rude who only thinks of herself😡

I did not liked Zoya calling someone even widout asking Humeira(though its drama)

Is anyone really there to support Zoya wid her heartbreak?😭

thanks
asad is a jerk
humeira is bad
nikhat was there to support her
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I don't like humeira n her attitude..
What's wrong with her ..
She is selfish...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh yaar loved it. three updates in one day. it's amazing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update
Loved reading it
Asad indeed has broken zoya beyond repair
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Read it in one go! I love the context and I think that except Mahira, no one can really understand Zoya and her pain. Unfortunately I can't understand that much your story as I don't talk Hindi but well..I'm still trying 😆 Update soon 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice updates dear
Loved it
Didn't like Asad & Humeira. If he realised his love for her than he should come back straight away & tried to sort it out but he didn't & as for humeira, she was selfish. Let see what happens next
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

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