New ASYA OS: Time Stood Still

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

This was so beautifully written. My favourite part was Asad and Dilshad's conversation and how Asad clung to Dilshad with her smallest gesture of understanding. AsYa's milaan was equally beautifully written.

Silly girl, why would ever put your pen down! Ab phir mat bolna, "I'm putting my pen down." Writers don't decide when to stop writing, the stories within them decide when to stop pushing to come out <3

Edited by mochhug - 9 years ago

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Really loved this os
Feeling so nostalgic after reading about QH1 scenes
I absolutely loved Khan Villa days...

Thank you so much for this xxx

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Aleena

@aleena008

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

IT WAS AWESOME,dear.No more words to describe how I felt when I read this...write more,,, u really r a gud writer...

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Beautiful OS ...!!!
Loved It ...!!!

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Awesome OS Choco Di👏😊

U wrote a scenario of Zoya going back to NY

Asad is so emotionally challenged

Asad n Zoya missed each other

Asad decided to go to NY to propose Zoya

Hope he did it on his own instead of his ammi's talks

Asad n Zoya met again n hugged each other

Loved their confession

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Superb one
To gud
Awsm update
Plzz do write more
Thnx for d pm
T.c

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

@MOnkEy_rAngEr

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

It was so so beautiful

Don't have words to explain the beauty of this os

Very well written 👏

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@Sp8699

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Nice, song fits perfect the situation

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

wow awesome choco
very beautiful written
loved it soo much
my asya are amazing
good job
thank you for pm

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Awesome OS
All emotions written beautifully
Finally he confessed in front of his mother. She told him to go & bring her back.
Time was stopped when they saw each other. Confession was nice.
Thanks for pm