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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Eeep res
Something coming up from you
Sooo excited
Update soon 🤗

Unres

That was pure perfection
I so loved how they met and just hugged each other so tightly so as to not let go each ither for their whole life
They confessed and the kiss was so romantic
It was such an intense os
I loved it
Just awesome

Edited by cutie15 - 9 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

THIS.

HAS.

TO.

BE.

THE.

MOST.

ROMANTIC.

OS.

THAT.

HAVE.

EVER.

READ.

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Yay!

Was so glad to read your writing all over again

Was an extremely beautiful os

Just took me back to the beautiful qubool hai days. Actually seemed like along with asya, even i am remembering all there bickering, their love and them...

Loved the scene were they again bump into each other and relive their first meeting conversation

The confession was intense and so beautifully written

And the song at the end has recently become my addiction

Can seriously imagine our asya looking so beautiful on it

Amazing os and was a treat to read it

Hope you manage to write more sometime😊

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Yayy

Mine

Unreserved!

Reminiscing!

An OS down the memory lane!

So much nostalgia!

Hayye!

Idiot Asad let her go away. But the memories Zoya took with herself back! 😳 Aww. Each and every moment. Almost!

All their little interactions, all their little and big fights, all their small and big quarrels absolutely everything.

If Zoya was in pain and so was Asad ! He couldn't keep his sanity after she left. Well.. Obviously and who better than Dilshad to get him to come out clean, even after him knowing this.

Asad going to Zoya's room to inhale her scent, to feel her, as if she still was there, in Bhopal, in his house, in that room.

^^ *This scene pulled at heart strings*

"I had never thought that I would ever say this Ammi, but yes, I am in love. Your badtameez, irresponsible, self centered mehmaan has taken away with her the one thing I'd thought I would never give to any girl, she has taken away my heart with her Ammi".

^ This is why we have always loved Dilshad Ammi! 😳

Finally Budhhu Ahmed Khan!

... they were both pulled out of their thoughts when they both felt someone collide into them.

^^ Of course, ASYA have to meet like that! Collide and fight and ogle and just

"Disappointed? Aapne mujhe gerne ki bahut koshish ki par mein nahi giri". As soon as be heard that, a wide smile spread across his lips and he exclaimed in a shocked but happy tone "Aapko chalne ki tameez nahi hai toh ghar par kyun nahi rehti hai aap?" "Aapko baat akene ki tameez nahi hai toh khamosh kyun nahi rehte hain aap?"

Who are you, Choco? I am back in ASYA land

*mitwa, ishq pe zor nahi*

Hayye. *flutters all around and in me*

This Os was beautifully penned. Brought back alll the memories, I was so engrossed in reading this, so into it, I could actually remember each scene play before my eyes, while reading the part. It had all those moments that mattered. Oh, I loved this OS!!!

Thank you, Choco, for penning this down, and sharing it with us. ⭐️

Love you just a little! 🤗❤️

Sorry for being super late! 😛😆👎🏼

Edited by Chandnii. - 9 years ago

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
RES! mayur ,annie, chandnii,binshi, anopama di, asif bhai,abi,aseela di, muskaan,linsie, cutie, shama,nayab,sumi,shailu and baki regular readers of choco 😃

Thanks sue😊

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Ye wala for IBP 🥳
mwuah pkd (ashii) gupchup (yumi)
cuckoo [jas]
spicie [aroo]
tehs and affu ❤️

res

sue 🤗

choco darling welcome back as a writer 🤗

OS is awesome blosome

loveddd it

the way u described asya's feelings

hats off 👏

to be honest i thought u will not let asya meet 😆

but u surprised me

too good tha ji

asad and dilshad scene was written beautifully

and then asad ka NY aana and wo hug

hayeee

wonderful job choco

do write more OS

love u 🤗

Edited by AkaiBara - 9 years ago

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Wow

Loved it

It started off on a sad note

The memories good and bad

But the love was paved

Loved Asad confessing his love so simply to his ammi

Love their meeting

Such a Bollywood ending 😆

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Ab kya naacho
CHOCO WROTE OS 🥳

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
RES! mayur ,annie, chandnii,binshi, anopama di, asif bhai,abi,aseela di, muskaan,linsie, cutie, shama,nayab,sumi,shailu and baki regular readers of choco 😃

Thank You for the RES 😊

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Hello Choco..

First of All I am soo soo happy ki you wrote this OS...I would have said started writing again also...but then I would better be silent and wait for these suprises rather than jinxing it..but yeah this is how I feel...🥳

Coming to the OS...

This is just brilliant and heart warming You see..👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️

Totally loved this part..👍🏼

I mean in a way every good thing about OUR QH was written and remembered here...and this couldn't have been done in a better way than this...so kudos to you...

And last part in NY.. where ASYA meet and actually kind of re enact their first encounter is the best scene for me in this whole OS...everything was good but that scene was the best for me...

Loved it..

And that is why I want you to continue writing...don't write long stories that too if you get time you can but by the time being..but little something like this will be enough for us...

Take Care..😃