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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anuv6

i knew it asad had got some serious pblm
bt i didnt expected the truth this much earlier, he didnt even aplogized for his mistakes fr hurtng zoya, she was in pain for 5 years and when they met asad' was being alwys like, he was also in pain bt still he wants the pain by staying away from her. what's wrong with him?
he hav to try to be with zoya atleast bt he doesnt seems like even realizng his past mistakes,
just his mom , his frnd and he himself feelng pitybe rem the pasts, yaar zoya bhi bahuth hurt hui hai., nd nw she kind of begged him to be with her.
yess, he had hav ill health bt... i feel so sorry for zoya
dnt knw ,what'll happens when asad comes to knw that he is a father nd nw wat'll happens when his family comes to knw about this incident...?!
so coming to ur writing its asusual awesome nd amzng, beautifully written specially u write the emotions between ASYA...wow
waiting fr the nxt update ,.. update sooon


you really think asad ko apology k baad faint hona chahiye tha 😲???

i agree asad is at fault but plz do hear him out and try to understand his POV

if then you don't like him than go ahead and support asad

but at least give him a chance

thank you so much dear

hope you like future asya scenes too

thanks again
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Posted: 8 years ago

thank you dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: raspi

OMG shocking n tnxxx fr pm


thanks for reading dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was so happy to see your Update.😊
It was So Heart-Touching Part.😭
Asad(KSG) took Zoya with him alone,it was so Interesting.😊
Zoya outburst on Asad(KSG) was so Heart-Touching. 😭
Asad(KSG) always left Zoya when she needs him more.😭
ASYA(KABHI) Conversation was so heart-Touching.😭
Asad(KSG) felt bad whatever he did to Zoya.😭
Asad(KSG) had Heart Problem,it was so sad.😭
I hope Asad(KSG) will be fine only.😊
Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu


thank you so much dear

i'm glad you liked it

and hope you will like the future parts too

stay tuned and keep reading
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

I know I am too much..
Plz update soon..
Eagerly waiting for next update...


sorry dear... i didn't update last week

now i'm free and i'll update my both stories ASAP
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

But very sad too
I guessed it right asad do have a heart problem
But plz make it possible for him to survive dont make him amaan
He has to live for ahad and for zoya
Poor thing couldnt even speak
Zoya lashed out and she lashed out hard
5 yrs of pent up anger came out
Oh when she said the famous mangalpur lines
Tht took asad to his knees
So zoya figures what is wrong with him without him tell her
So now her full attention will be on her husband and the father of her son
Waiting for next update
Cont soon


thank you anopama

yes you were right and asad have to survive for zoya, for ahad and for us too 😉

hope you like the future updates too

stay tuned and keep reading

thanks again
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: suganti

awesome chapter.

so,asad is suffering from rare heart disease..that is the reason he left zoya.
hope zoya will tell him about ahad soon.


yes zoya will tell him soon

thank you for reading and liking 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shonajain

sooo sorryyy ashiii for commenting sooo late
and sorryyy for not unres on previous page


coming to the update
actually I feel speechless when it comes to TSB updates and you have again nailed it with your exceptionally beautiful writing skills...I have no words at all

UPDATE WAS JUST PERFECT( madhuri style)

I mean how you revealed asad's disease to zoya and us (readers) was wonderful

and guesss wat the story being compared to one of myyy favoirite moviesss kal ho na ho

I realllyyy loved the dialogue " apne mera bharosa toda h ,mera dil toda "


secondlyy the mangal pur role reversal "wo din kab ayega jab ap humesha k liye merii zindagi se rukhsat honge "

I realllyyy loved the part , zoyas outburst and some truth revelation

zoyas anger justified but realllyyy waiting to knw asad side of story

awsume , fantabulouslyyy , beautifully , amazingly wonderful


thanks a tonnn for pm

continue super soon becoz I am unable to wait for nexttt part


love
shona

P.S : are you srk fan ???? I am a biggg srk fan...I realllyyy adore him...n asad mkes me remember aman bt at the end we all want asya sooo asad has to liveee


thank you

thank you

thank you sooo much dear

now i'm speechless yaar... to be honest i didn't expect this much appreciation

thanks a lot dear... it really means a lottt to me...

coming to the dialogues... with the help of Tehs i watched those scenes again and again and literally did ratta maar thing to the dialogues and used in the update

hope you like the future updates too

say tuned and keep reading
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Well Written Update Ashii...

In a way after all the glitches and pain in the past , even if today ASYA stand a chance and they want to reunite , they have to come out of the past and by taking out all the hurt , anger and clearing out all the secrets and misunderstandings it is possible that they can plan to live in peace in future..
Rest I don't know about others parr meko itna pata hai Aspirin is used for fever na , iska Heart se kya Rishta ??

Continue soon..


mayur... hold on... you literally ended the whole story in 3 lines 😆

i truly appreciate you know this story more than me but now it's time to asad's side of story and then some tearful reunions and hug and all

but i assure you it will go through all the phases you describe... haan ab acha bura jesa bhi hua manage kar lena plz

and about Aspirin thing... i read on net that too searching for IC... Ind Pak mai medicines ke names differs hain but i'm 100% sure us page pe Aspirin hi likha tha... the most common and useful tablet... haan baaki fever and all i don't know... aage se i'll use a new name medicine instead of common

anyways thank you so much dude 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

FINALLY caught up with the last two updates
And both were really high on emotions
finally the much awaited confrontation between asya
But still their reunion seems far away
So asad is suffering from a rare heart disease
Just glad about your assurance that he is not going to die in the story
Looking forward to know what happens in our beloved asya's lives
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊


ahhh finally you are back... i missed your review dear

thanks a lot muskaan

i'm glad you loved both the previous updates

will update soon

keep reading dear

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