ASYA drabble: For You Mr. Khan, updated 6/03/2016

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9849565007

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Could feel Asad and Zoya's pain in your words.

AND You are a wonderful writer. Pl don't stop writing. will miss you.

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Choco something so so so sad from you was a shocker,,,

But u nailed it dear..

Chocochip I loved how Zoya only and only wrote about the Ammi and sister she missed and would cherish... I'm glad he was not included in her list of those she would miss...

U made me a bit teary..

Loved it.

And what is the second post...

I don't accept...

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Really a very painful drabble

But was beautifully written

Loved reading it

Will definitely miss your writings dear

I can understand that life can be really very difficult at times but please do come back even for a visit

People of this forum adore you and your writings a lot including me

Abd thanks for such amazing stories😊

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

drabble was very emotional and painful...
but the second note is more painful than that 😭
plzz don't stop writing ..we will miss u...
drabble...I have no words to say...
the lumb formed in my throat...
very emotional one...
asad deserves it...
the words showed how much pain asad caused zoya...
beautifully penned...

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dhlgirl

@dhlgirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Amazingly written...could feel the sadness and pain zoya went through while writing the letter.

You are an amazing writer please don't stop writing...you have an exceptional talent...

Hope you do find time to write...will surely miss reading your works of art...

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

mine

unres

wonderful story Choco

loved ittt

felt zoya's pain

i agree asad said wrong abt her

but he deserves a chance

can u plzzz write another part where asad can say sorry

Edited by AkaiBara - 9 years ago

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

That was a very painful yet awesome os
Like you i too felt that for once asad should have felt the pain he always had inflicted on zoya
And i felt so sad while reading that letter
We cant even imagine the pain she would have felt on listening those accusations which would make her remember her parents each time
You did an awesome job and expressed her pain efficiently

Coming to the second post
It makes me very sad
But life hits hard sometimes
Its ok choco dii
Have a great life ahead
You will be missed so bad
We love you
Hope to see you on if in near future
Till then tada.. Take care.. Stay blessed and happy
Love you loads 🤗

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Very emotional...
Sad..
N heart wrenching too..

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Monica

@mochhug

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Despite being very sad and painful, I loved this. It always irked me how he put her down and degraded her since Tanveer came in the picture. Sad pieces like this are beautiful in their finality, because they show us what could happen in real life when someone is treated that way.

But what about your second post 😭 I hope you'll still pop in sometimes. It'd be sad to lose yet another great writer on this forum. 😔

Edited by mochhug - 9 years ago

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

I don't know what to say...
The drabble had me in tears...just like the epi did...I used to hurt for Zoya when Asad said those things to her and about her...
Everything you wrote was spot on...Zoya's emotions penned down beautifully...

I will really miss you and your stories Chocco...
But when and if you get some time plz do entertain us with a drabble or os here and there...

I am really going to miss you 😭