ASYA drabble: For You Mr. Khan, updated 6/03/2016

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anopama

@anopama

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Aw tht hurt

But I guess Asad needed a taste of his own medicine

The funny thing too is I am reading saima the perfect misfit 😭

So love it

Will miss u

Hope to see u in future

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Choco dear it was amazing
Cried buckets
I will miss u dear
Will miss ur stories
I know responsibilities comes first
Now a days I am soo busy that I couldn't read ur story earlier
Hope to see u back with ur stories
Love u dear
Take care

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

An absolutely beautiful and heart touching Drabble...I totally loved it. Thank u for writing and sharing it with us.

Choco, I am not going to comment on your note, you know how I feel and what I think...despite that you know I will always support you

Love you lots

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Shaila Banu

@Shailu..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

it was painful 😭

I will pray u and ur family 😊

will miss ur stories 😒

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MaujMasti

@MaujMasti

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

api🤗

it was lovely, emotional and painful altogether 😭 and the most painful thing is that it's the end...you won't write for a while now... i know i was inactive and i was'nt able to read anything from a long time api but u knw i won't quit...will read as soon as i can

for now...i understand your issues api and i guess this long break is really needed for you...so yeah api now relax for a while until you decide to come back and about your writing...apto hamesha se h best ho❤️😳

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Sathya

@IamCrazySeven

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

hey choco

it was very well written 👏

i have no words to say

JUST LOVED IT ❤️

it will be one of favorite AsYa drabble for sure.

yeah i am going to miss your stories as well.

I hope you will come with new stories in future.

take care 🤗

Edited by -Sathya7n- - 9 years ago

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

D drabble was fantastic Choco

U gave a powerful & real insight of d incident

& I loved ur version👏👏

but d 2nd post gosh u r quitting writing

that's such a shocking news

Personal life does comes 1st but try 2 rethink again buddy

don't let go of ur passion

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

very beautiful story choco
i loved it soo much
well written
thank you for pm

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry
IMPORTANT NOTE

As a writer, my journey on India Forum started on 11th December 2013 and since then I have loved every moment of it with Me getting so much love and appreciation for all the hard work that I put into it. Writing had always been my passion and here, I got to openly put on display my love for it. Am here, not to give you guys a boring speech or anything but to show how grateful I am for having you all as my friends and readers for the last 2 years, well a little over it. If not for all the love, support, appreciation and support that you guys showered on me, I don't think I would have taken the big leap and shared my stories.

But I guess, this is all that I could manage as a writer, so, I have decided to put my pen down. I still love to write, but as a few people know, my personal life has become extremely difficult. I have to give my responsibilities more time leaving me with almost no time to write, which, for my super active brain is frustrating but physically am too exhausted everyday to even want to pen down the thoughts and scenarios that my brain keeps cooking up. But I guess I will learn to live with it...

I really wish I could continue but I know I can't. If in the future my life gives me a break, I will definitely comeback with something that I hope will be liked again. But I guess, for now, this is it... Bye from one chotu sa writer who loved having you all as her reader. I have and I always will remember and appreciate your love and support. I will still be here, to read all the amazing stories that we still have, still will follow the few excellent writers that this forum has and will definitely try and stay in touch with you amazing people. I will miss interacting with you all as a writer. Will always love you and keep you all in my heart. Mwah...

Once again, Thank You all

And a something special that I found on the net and have to share with you all being the crazy Quboolians that we all are/ were...
Apna 'Qubool Hai '

ChocoBerry

Now can you believe,I decided to read this important note first and not the story !!!!!

Obviously, NOT going to hit the like button for this stupid post. NO.

And how sad it has made me😒

I'm likee NOOO! CANNOT HAPPEN! NO!

But, I also do know how taxing life is for you currently. I can understand how difficult it is for you to be able to concentrate on your stories with life happening at full speed. So, I'm not going to get really mad or sad even though I am.

I am really going to miss you tons, G!❤️

And alll those lovely stories you come up with😔

I HATE this post! Hate it!

I am going to wait for you to come back. And, I have a feeling it will be super duper soon. I'm sure you can't let the pen rest for long! 😃

ughhh, WHY? :(\

Love you 🤗

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Stupid emotionally challenged AAK!

🥺

The letter was so painful and heart wrenching.

And reading Asad's condition even more! 🥺

Beautifully described both Asad and Zoya's pain.

Beautifully penned, Choco!⭐️

P.S: Can we have another part to this? Perhaps, have a happy ending?!😳

Like let Asad be miserable and when he can finally come to terms with how he really can't concentrate on things and how he feels so miserable and annoyed dude to the void created by Zoya's absence.. Plus, how Tannu sticking to him is also making him mad all the time.

Think about it okay? Like a little present you can give us ?????😳😳

Pretty pleasee!