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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing update

Loved reading it
Zoya's amnesia and asad finally realising his love for her
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊

Haha! He takes a long time on finally realizing this! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Aww nice update
So we got the memory loss
Well as u say emotional shock
So she erase her present memory
Zoya excited to marry Akram never thought I will see the day
Aww Asad got his slap back
So Najma heard him declaring his love
And his fears
So what will happen will zoya leave
Or will Asad step up and marry her
Bcuz we still has to factor in the fact they slept together
So never know what u will throw at us
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Asad is really an idiot who did not regretted his slap
2 slaps in a month?(1 slap 4m shoot incident) Mazaak hai kya? He is abusive😡
Zoya always gets in trouble cuz of him
He deserved dat slap 4m Dilshad. Dilshad sud know how her respectful son slapped a woman twice.
Glad dat at least no one especially Asad reacted on seeing Zoya in shorts
Hope Zoya does not forgives him for his slaps n leaving her
Wonder how will Anwar n Zeenat react on Asad's behaviour for Zoya?

Thank you 😆 Asad will regret it! I promise 😳 He'll try to control his anger 😉 Dilshad will make him pay don't worry! 😃 No one will react on seeing her with shorts as after all they want to protect her. I don't know yet if she'll forgive him easily. I think they'll act badly like Dilshad 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: tikit

Well really interesting update. So zoya has amnesia and asad feeling guilty. Hope this will make a new stronger relationship between asya. Do pm me the next part.

Thank you 😳 I'll try my best to not hurt them a lot 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Hug scene was nice. Even She forget her life in India but her heart didn't forget him.
Najma was happy to hear her brother confession. Hope everything will sort it out soon. Thanks for pm

Thanks 😃 The heart can't never forget! 😳 Najma is always there for her baijhaan even if he's stupid sometimes 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Perriewinkle

Ok hum..Will you please explain further? I don't mind doing what you want but I'm scared to not understand completely your request 😕
Thank you for enjoying this part! I don't when I'll update again though 😳


sorry i didnt mark it earlier.
hey thanks for taking part in it.Im sure now that i will succed in my attempts just becoz u all.
than u.

u deserve it😊i eally liked the part hence plz dont thank me for that it as my duty n ur deservings.

u can go n see the progress of the os n add too.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: EddyCurrents

Interesting update mouni 👏

Thank you love 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: anopama

Aww nice update

So we got the memory loss
Well as u say emotional shock
So she erase her present memory
Zoya excited to marry Akram never thought I will see the day
Aww Asad got his slap back
So Najma heard him declaring his love
And his fears
So what will happen will zoya leave
Or will Asad step up and marry her
Bcuz we still has to factor in the fact they slept together
So never know what u will throw at us
Continue soon

Thank you 😳 She's not excited, she just want to do as her sister want. I don't know either. Maybe I'll make her leave for a while 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Hi guys! I'm back with the next part! I'm thinking in writing like 10 chapters because I don't know how far I will bring this amnesia thing. And also I'll stop updating for a while because I have more exams which are coming soon 😕 Wish me a good luck 😳



~2~

As he heard this, his heart broke into a billion of pieces. He was the cause of her amnesia and he couldn't bear the thought of it. Zoya forgot everything about his family because of him. Asad got out of his room through the window and went for a walk.

His mind was so busy with thinking about his Zoya that he didn't notice the little girl running in front of him. They bumped into each other and the basket of fruits she was holding fell on the ground.

Asad helped her picking them up then went to sit on a bench in the park not far from Khan Villa. He closed his eyes rubbing them softly...

"Why are you this sad?" A little girl asked him.

Asad looked at her then sighed.

"I hurt the love of my life." He said and the little girl smiled knowingly.

"My mum used to tell me that the best things in life always hurt. She said that she has loved someone and he has hurt her so bad but still she wanted to be with him because she loved him." The little girl said and Asad widened his eyes and looked at the little girl.

" Wasn't she talking about your dad?" He asked.

"Maybe..I'm Seher by the way.." The little girl said and Asad smiled at her.

"I'm Asad." He said then they just sat there silently.

"You know, if you've hurt the love of your life and your love is as pure as crystal then you mustn't be afraid. You can still try to fix things because love can be the greatest weapon to fight against the world." Seher said and Asad smiled.

"How can it be possible that you're this wiser. You seem to be around 13 years old."

"I've learnt to be mature at an early age when my mum and sister passed away 4 years ago and I'm already 15 years old." She said and Asad was in awe in front of this courageous girl.

"You're very courageous Seher." He said.

"Thank you." She said and then Asad felt a sharp pain on his head and woke up. He saw that a ball was rolling at his feet. A child has accidentally hit him with the ball. He gave it back to the child then he left the park.

'I'll fight for you forgiveness Miss Farrooqui. I promise.' He thought as he entered his home just to be greeted with Zoya who was cooking. The worst part of it was that she was wearing short shorts and a tank top. Even this sight of her was like having a forbidden sweet in front of him, he couldn't manage to control his 'all about tehbeez and tameez' thing and when he was going to tell her to dress properly, he stopped himself from doing so.

'You don't have the right to shout at her about tehbeez aur tameez Asad..' He thought sadly. He didn't have any right over the woman before him. Not any more.

"Hello Mr Khan. Your mother was tired and your sister left to go to college so I decided to cook. After all, I can't do anything to thank you enough for letting me stay at your home." She said and he looked at her, tears feeling his eyes.

"That's okay Zoya. You don't have to do anything to thank us. You're a member of our family. It's our duty to look after relatives." He said and Zoya couldn't know why his words were warming her heart. She felt close to him even though she couldn't know why.

"I've made some pasta. I hope you'll enjoy it. I've also baked a chocolate cake." She said and he smiled sadly.

He left to freshen up and when he got back she was hurriedly putting out the cake and he smelled something burning. She looked at him upset and her lips curved into a cute pout.

"Sorry.. I've burnt the cake." She said shyly, blushing a little.

"Don't worry. Are you okay?" He asked and she nodded. Even though she had amnesia she still was a part of the Zoya he loved. He just expected her to say a cute shayari to prove him that she was still here..He wanted her to prove him that she was still the same. He wanted her to be the same. As for Zoya, a strange feeling got into her as she was listening to his words and playing them again and again. They were warming her heart. She left to freshen up and came back to see Asad crying over the burnt cake.

"What's happening Mr Khan?" She asked with a cute little voice.

"Nothing Zoya. I was just thinking about someone." 'You' He wanted to add but he realized that it might be a wrong idea. The doctor have said that revealing the truth to Zoya could cause a serious damage to her and he couldn't harm her..Not again.

Zoya cut a piece of part and gave it to Asad, she had given him the most beautiful part of her cake and Asad felt more and more guilty for what he had done.

"Mr Khan..I wanted to know.. I mean..Huh..Are you married?" She asked while she was hardly swallowing the cake. It was disgusting. She had put more sugar than she thought and the burnt part was very disgusting.

"I'm not married Zoya." He said as he was eating the cake peacefully. Zoya's eyes were wide open as he was eating the cake as if it was the best cake he has eaten.

"You..You love the cake?" She asked and he just smiled showing her his dimpled smile.

"Yes. Actually, I love it." He said looking at her in the eyes. Zoya had to break the eye lock as she was losing it. She was drowning into his eyes and she couldn't do anything to stop herself from doing so.

She got up and went to her room. Asad finished the cake and went to his room. He looked into his drawer and saw her earring.

"Maybe you're not remembering me but I will never forget that I love you. I had never felt so complete before you. Before you, I was a ghost, a workaholic, before you I didn't know the meaning of love but since you're here, I didn't only learn the meaning of love, but also the meaning of life."

He closed his eyes and fell asleep against the night stand, hugging her earring.

"I love you Zoya.." He mumbled without knowing that someone has noticed his little talk.

Zoya ran to her room as her head was hurting from hearing this. She gripped her hair tightly as she was feeling her brain thumping against her head.

"I love you Zoya.."

"Prove it, make love to me..."

She intertwined her fingers with the stranger's fingers as he was entering her. She gripped his hair while he was suckling her neck. Her legs were wrapped around his waist giving him better access.

"Oh yes! I love you!" She moaned as he was pounded into her leading her to a world full of bliss.

Zoya couldn't bear the pain. She felt as if her head was going to explode. 'What's wrong with me?' She asked herself wrapping her arms around her legs. She looked at her reflection in the mirror and she wanted to break it. This weak woman who she was seeing wasn't her. This wasn't the Zoya she used to be.

And regarding to these wet dreams, Zoya felt disgusted with herself. How could she think about doing the naughty with someone else than her husband-to-be? She was lost and she couldn't put things in place. Her mind was a mess and she realized that she had forgotten something. Something very important to her.

Asad woke up, his body aching due to the fact that he was sleeping on the floor.

He got up and went to take a bath. He stopped walking when he saw his reflection on the mirror.

His eyes were read and puffy, his stubble was horrible, his hair was a mess and he looked lost. He was lost. His soul and heart were lost without her. She lived under the same roof as him, yet it seemed like she was miles away from him.

He undressed himself and his fingers slowly traced the love bite on his chest. A single tear escaped from his eye as he remembered the night they shared two days ago. He couldn't remember it completely but he remembered a good part of this night of passion, how they got lost into a world full of passion, bliss and love.

He got into the shower, letting the water wash away his pain and sorrow. The water took the same path as her fingers when she was running them all over his bare chest, it washed away the pain he felt, knowing that he was being so close to her yet he couldn't touch her, love her...

'It's your fault!' His heart shouted to his brain and he closed his eyes in pain.

Zoya dialed her api and as soon as Zeenat picked up she started sobbing.

"Api, when will you come?" She asked.

"Why? What's happening Zoya?" Zeenat asked concerned.

"Api, this family is so kind with me but actually I'm feeling like something is wrong." Zoya explained and Zeenat smiled sadly.

"Don't worry. My flight is tomorrow morning okay? Then we'll go back home." Zeenat said and Zoya smiled before hanging up.

Zeenat felt sorry for Dilshad and Najma. Dilshad had always talked to her about their strong bond and she couldn't even recognize them. But she was angry at Asad. She was angry that in just a minute, this man erased the memory of the family her sister had found in Dilhad and Najma.

"Api are you still there?" Zoya asked concerned.

"Yes baby, don't worry okay. Dilshad is very nice. She'll take care of you until I come." Zeenat said and Zoya sighed and hung up. She was hungry so she left to the kitchen. As she was walking towards the fridge, she tripped over her own feet and was ready to hit the ground but she never did so. Her hand landed on his bare chest, just above his heart while her other hand was wrapped around his neck. Asad was holding her neck with one of his hand while the was secured around her waist. They got this famous eye lock and Zoya was mesmerized by his dark eyes. She felt safe in his arms. Asad was lost into her glorious beauty. His hand was on this same neck he had ravaged with love bites, his other hand was resting against this waist he had gripped during his first climax ever. And these lips.. God knows how he wanted to make them swollen by kissing her deeply.

"Zoya?" Najma called from her room and Zoya's eyes broke the eye lock and she straightened herself to go see what was wrong with Najma.

'What's wrong with me?' She thought while she was going to Najma's room.

TBC..

Chapter 3

Edited by Perriewinkle - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Amazing update
Loved reading it
Asad is trying to change. Feel bad for him
Hope zoya's memory comes back soon
Loved asad and seher conversation
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon
Thanks for pm😊

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