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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Firstly all the best for ur exms
Coming to update
It's super duper amazing
Asad-seher convo
Zoya felt the bond
Asad in so much pain
Asya fall
Loved the update
Continue soon :-))
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Awesome Part Dear👏😊
Asad is regretting his actions
AnZee r angry wid Asad for being responsible for Zoya's condition
They sud even know how he slapped her twice n dumped after sleeping wid her
I did not like how Asad was still concerned wid her short clothes. I mean come on. Dilshad n ZnZee r elder to him but they don't have any problem so he sud not interfere wid his choice.
Zoya thinking dat she is wrong in thinking abt other man due to Akram
Hope Asad really changes n don't repeats his mistakes again
Dunno why they get dreams of Seher?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Well written update
gf try edit the title whenever u update
all the best 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Awesome update
Feeling sad for Asya
Liked the convo between Asad & seher
Zoya was attracted towards him & knew that she was missing something
Hope her memory came back soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Wowww... What an awesome update...
I was soo Happy to see ur pm...
N after reading the update I feel sooo Happy..
Loved the cute scene between Asad n saher..
N then the asya scene where zoya was wearing short clothes..
Asad really gets turn on seeing zoya like that..
Asad n Zoya dreaming about that night n Zoya is still Nt able to remember anything...
Hope she starts remembering something...
Thanks for the pm n continue soon...
~JAZ ~
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Loving that little Seher
Glad that Asad won't give up
Asya moments ❤️
Continue soon plz 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Love the update
So sad for Asad no one is talking to him
He is guilty for his error
Aww he met his daughter too
These dreams imaginative is interesting
Seher says her ammi sis die 4 yrs ago
So love zoya cooking and him eating the bad cake as if it is the best
So she heard him say I love you zoya
Oh oh
So if such a passionate love making he has his love bites where is hers can't she see them
Bcuz according to him he ravaged her
How come he was out hai room with a shirt 😆

Good luck on ur exams
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: EddyCurrents

Well written update
gf try edit the title whenever u update
all the best 😃

Okay bf! I just post it in a rush 😳 Thank you love ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the update... Just request to t thta don't give us a sad ending
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys! I'm soory if I'v taken this long for an update! I was really busy! Plus my internet broke for two days😕 So I didn't get the chance to reply to all your comments but I'll do it right after posting this chapter! xoxo


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Zoya went to Najma's room and Najma showed her two saris.

"Which one?" Najma asked and Zoya looked at her as if she had three heads.

"What?" Zoya just asked, completely lost.

"I need to know which dress will fit me for the party I had at my school! I had told you this..." Najma stopped talking as she realized what she was going to say. "Can you please tell me which one will be better?" Zoya nodded her head yes and she pointed the deep red and black sari.

"Thank you Zoe! I love your choice!" Najma squealed and she hugged Zoya.


"Tamatar, which one?" Zoya asked, showing a deep purple kurta and another one which was blue.

"Which one huh?" Najma repeated. "Why do you want me to chose a kurta for you Zoe? After all, you're just going out with Bhaijaan!" Najma said.

"I'm not going out with Mr Khan! He's just driving me to the mall." Zoya said blushing a little.

"Arrey Miss Farrooqui, isn't your cheeks red because of Asad?" Najma teased and Zoya blushed a bit more if it was even possible.

Zoya remembered this piece of her memory and she found it odd. How was she able to remember such things with Najma when she didn't even knew the girl on the first place? She left the room, disturbed by these flashbacks.

"Wait Zoya!" Najma said gripping her shoulder and Zoya winced in pain.

"What's happening?" Najma enquired, "Did I hurt you?" Najma asked, removing a bit the sleeve off her shoulder. She saw a deep purple mark on it and her eyes widened in surprise! It looked like a bite!

"Zoya? Did someone bite you?" Najma asked.

"Zoya, you're mine and only mine."He whispered in her ear. He was pressed tightly against her back, letting her feel his arousal against her buttocks. He bit her shoulder and soothed the bite with a soft lick. Zoya moaned letting him know that he was doing good. He trailed soft kisses on her spine, biting her here and there then licking the bite straight away.

He got up again and pulled her legs apart. Zoya was too blinded by desire to resist. She was feeling empty without him in her. She moaned loudly when, in a swift thrust, he entered her again. He bit her again on this same spot on her shoulder and Zoya hissed in pain.

"Zoya? Are you still here with me?" Najma asked worried. Zoya had tears in her eyes and was shivering. She ran away from Najma and locked herself in her room.

"Zoya? Please open the door! Najma pleaded, but Zoya had hidden herself in a corner of the room and was crying. Her head was hurting so much and she couldn't do anything about it. Her sobbed increased and she felt strong arms around her.

Asad was just sitting there, in the backyard, thinking about her again. An hour ago, he had registered in a class to control his anger. He wanted to prove her that he would be everything she needed, everything she wanted. He was just admiring her earring when he heard sobs coming from her room. He got up straight away and saw his Zoya crying in a corner of her room. She looked so vulnerable, so innocent.. He walked towards Zoya, sat next to her and wrapped his arms around her tiny waist. Zoya looked at the intruder and felt relaxed on knowing that it was just Mr. Khan. She wiped her tears away and tried to get up but he held her tightly against him.

"Mr Khan? What are you doing?" She asked, sniffling a bit.

"Zoya, you're not all right, are you? Do you want to talk about it?" He asked softly and Zoya looked at him ashamed.

" I don't know if it's correct to share my problems with you." She said.

"Zoya we are relatives, so being relatives, you can share whatever you want and I'll do the same, okay?" He said and she nodded hesitantly.

"I'm having sort of flash blacks lately." She said and Asad wanted so much to smile but he held it down. "I feel as if, this house is my own, I'm feeling this weird connection with your sister and Dilshad... and you." Zoya said looking down. "I don't know why, I'm always feeling as if I'm not an invite in this house." She said and Asad was actually happy on seeing that she was already starting to recover.

"I...Woh..actually.. I don't know what to say. Ammi said that you had come to visit us when I was a child and you had really loved staying here with us. Maybe that just memories from this time that your remember." He said and Zoya hummed in approval.

"Now tell me, what's your problem Mr Khan?" She asked and Asad eyes saddened.

"Love." He said and Zoya smiled.

"Arrey Mr Khan, you're in love? It's not a problem then! Listen, I have a shayari for this situation:

Unke ishq mei ulajhkar ho gaye hum badnaam,

uljhan hee sahi kuch to mila muhabbat ka inaam !" (NA: I don't know if the translation is correct, so sorry if I did mistakes 😆)

Zoya said and Asad smiled at her. She had said a shayari, his Zoya was still there deep inside of the Zoya before him.

"I've met her months ago, but when I finally realized that I loved her, she was gone.." He added and she looked at him shocked.

"Where did she go?" She enquired.

"I don't know." He answered. Zoya smiled at him reassuringly.

"If you belong to each other she'll come back." She said and Asad smiled again. 'I hope you'll come back to me Zoya.' He thought and they stayed like this, not saying a word for a while. Zoya felt safe in his arms and Asad was on cloud nine with her in his arms.

"Zoya!" They heard Dilsha calling Zoya from outside. They got up quickly and before leaving, Zoya held Asad's hand.

"Thank you for listening to me Mr. Khan." She said softly.

"Thank you for making me smile Zoya." He replied and left by the window while she left to see why Dilshad was calling her.

"Kya hua Mrs Khan?" Zoya asked softly.

"It's time to eat Zoya." Dilshad answered and Zoya next to Dilshad while Najma sat across them.

"Mrs Khan, won't Mr Khan come and join us?" Zoya enquired and Dilshad looked at her surprised.

"No he won't." She just said and began eating without further explanations.


Zoya and Najma ate silently without disturbing Dilshad. Najma was really affected by this situation, it's been two whole days that her bhaijaan and ammi didn't talk to each other and it was heart breaking. When they finished eating, Najma washed the plates and went to her room. Dilshad locked herself in her room and Zoya prepared a tray with food for Asad. She then knocked on is door and waited for him to open it.

"Zoya? What are you doing here?" He asked, confused.

"I was bringing you some food. I thought that you may be hungry." She explained and Asad flashed her a dimpled smile.

"Thank you." He said and Zoya's curiosity popped in.

"Why don't you eat with us? Why is your mother angry at you?" She asked softly.

"I did something horrible and now she's punishing me, but don't worry about it. Ammi is just calming herself. Soon everything will get back to normal. I know that my behaviour was rude and the reason why she's angry is right. She's right to be angry at me. Even I, I'm angry with myself Zoya. " 'I hope ammi will forgive me for what I did to you.' He thought.

He ate silently and Zoya stayed here, looking at him eating. After he finished eating, he wanted to bring the plates on the kitchen but she stopped him from doing so and did it herself. Then she went to her room. She locked herself in her room and pulled off her tank top. Then she looked at her back through the mirror. Her eyes widened in horror and she put her hands on her mouth to stop herself from shouting. Her back was covered with deep purple marks!

"Allah miyan! What's all these marks!" She said in horror.

Chapter 4

Edited by Perriewinkle - 9 years ago

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