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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ajanshul

Beautiful update

Very well written
Continue soon :-))

Originally posted by: raspi

It was so sad nd she is in zoya's dream n tnxxx fr pm

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gr8 part

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Thank you! Sorry if it was very sad, I just wanted to find a good aim for Seher to be there. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago


~9~

A week later.


Asad was finally in Ajmer. He had decided to go there to pray for his love to come back home. He was even fasting and he had restricted himself from going near his family. He couldn't look into Dilshad's eyes without thinking that this twinkle which Zoya brought in her eyes was gone. He couldn't look at his sister without thinking that she was crying herself to sleep each night because her best friend wasn't here any more. So he just ran out like a f**king coward. He entered his hotel room and headed straight to the shower.

"Zoya, it's been 7 days now. How long will you keep torturing me? Why can't you realize that I love you? Why can't you see it Zoya." He mumbled while he was preparing himself to go to the dargah.

As he left the room, he failed to notice Zoya going to the dargah as well. They were just inches apart, not even realizing that they were praying just next to each other. Zoya was praying for her to be able to forgive Asad. She was praying for her to be strong enough to give her enough strength to give back their father to her daughters.

On the other hand, Asad just prayed for his Zoya to come back home safe and sound. When they finished praying, they got up at the same time and while getting up, they put their hands on the wall to get support. When they felt their palms touching, both of them knew it.

"Asad..." She whispered.

"Zoya.." He answered and she pulled back her hand, leaving without giving him a chance to talk. She wasn't sure yet. She ran outside, disappearing into the crowd of people out there. She went straight to her hotel room and was pacing in her room.

"Think Zoya, think! What can you do? Are you going to forgive him? Sanam and Seher can't live without their father, can they? But what if he hurts me? He would never hurt me like this guy did to me and Sanam as Seher said.." Zoya was arguing with herself and she finally made a decision.


Asad was in his room, his eyes were wet with tears. She didn't even want to be near him. He looked at her earring and decided that the next time he would see Zoya, he would give her back the earring. He wiped away his tears furiously.

"You can't keep crying like this Asad. She is like Abbu. She kept you happy just to break your heart like he did 17 years ago. You will give the earring back to her and you will end this torture for ever.." Asad swear and took his phone to call Najma, to tell her about his whereabouts and that he was doing good. He didn't tell her that he had found Zoya because he didn't want her to think that he would bring her back home.

After his call, he called the room-service and ordered food to break his fast. His food came quickly and he just wanted to eat it already and go to sleep for god sake. He realized that he had given him a tray with pizza.

The man had already left and Asad called him.

"Excuse me! You've mistaken. You gave me a tray with pizza." On the same time, Zoya got out of her room with a tray as well.

"What's this? I have asked for a pizza! Not this salad of fruits which is full of papaya!" She said failing to notice Asad, just behind her.

"I'm sorry. Here's your meal." The man said to Zoya and she left while Asad gazed at her back. She noticed him but decided to ignore him. On the other hand, Asad went back to his room and finally he recalled what she said.

'full of papaya!' Why would she have a problem with papaya? But now he didn't care about this. He wouldn't care about Zoya. Not again. She definitely wanted him to be out of her life. He left his room and knocked on her door. Zoya opened the door and gasped on seeing Asad.

"Mr Khan.. I.." She stuttered and he just showed her the earring.

"I think that I should give you the earring. I kept it since I saved you from Akram. I didn't know why I kept it, but I always held it when I was thinking about you. Goodbye Miss Farooqui." He said and left. Zoya wanted to run after him but she stopped herself.

She still didn't know who was this Monica girl so she decided to call her.

"Hello?" A girl answered.

"Hello, I'm Miss Zoya Farooqui, I wanted to talk to Monica."

"Dr Kapoor isn't here for now."

"Doctor.." Zoya whispered without knowing that the woman had heard her.

"Yes she is a doctor for anger management." The woman said.

"I just wanted to know if she had a patient called Asad Ahmed Khan."

"Yes, Mr Khan is a regular patient of Dr Kapoor. It's been three weeks already."

"Okay thank you, goodbye!" Zoya said and hung up. Asad was trying to change for her..

'Why am I this stupid!' She said to herself before running to the receptionist to ask for Asad's room number. Then she ran back to his room and knocked on Asad's door. As soon as he opened the door, she locked their lips in a mind blowing kiss.

Chapter 10 just below 😉

Edited by Perriewinkle - 9 years ago
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~10~

They entered the room without separating their lips, and they managed to close the door as he pushed her against the door. Zoya moaned with pain. She realized that he had to be slow because they could hurt the babies. He trailed wet kisses on her neck and she moaned loudly.

"I love you Asad." She said between moans. "I love you more than my life jaan." She said panting as he was suckling her neck, not saying a word to her. When he got back up to kiss her plump lips, he nibbled at her lower lip before kissing her deeply. His tongue was dancing a passionate tango with hers and she was overwhelmed with this. She wrapped her legs around his torso when he grabbed her butt and she placed feather kisses on his neck, marking her territory on the process. He carried her to the bedroom and looked at her with such intensity. He was still quiet, not making a sound, just looking at his beautiful Zoya.

"Why did you leave me Zoya?" He finally asked. "Why did you play with my heart right after I told you that I love you? Why?" He asked kissing her belly, and realize that her skin was softer and her belly harder. He knew it already. He just wanted her to tell him. He pulled off her white blouse and saw her hardening nipples through her bra.

"Dammit Zoya! What are you hiding from me?" He asked still calm. Zoya realized that it was almost impossible for him to control his anger. She took her hand and put it right above her lips and kissed it before going back down. She put his hand on her belly and smiled at him lovingly.

"I'm pregnant Asad. I'm expecting a mix of us, a proof of our love..." She said and Asad kissed her with such a fervour. He kissed her jawline and kissed behind her ear as well.

"Say it again, please." He whispered.

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"I'm pregnant Asad. I'm pregnant with you. And I love you Mr Khan." Asad pulled off her bra and looked at her full breast which had become bigger because of her pregnancy.

"Please Asad, say you love me!" Zoya moaned while he was stroking her intimately through her jeans. He trailed soft kisses from her belly to her awaiting mouth, kissing the valley between her boobs and her neck.


"I love you Zoya. In all my life, I was taught that I couldn't count on anyone, that's why I tried to succeed on my own but now that I have you, I realize that I'm nothing without you." He mumbled while he was admiring her beautiful face.

Zoya grabbed his neck and pulled him down for a passionate kiss. His hand got back up to caress her assets while she tore his shirt open like a possessed girl. They flipped over so Zoya was on top, her core right above his awaiting erection. She started moving on him, while he was stroking her thighs. His manhood was getting harder and harder as they were looking at each other intensely. Zoya got up and opened his trousers. His Calvin Klein boxers wasn't hiding his huge monster and she had to control herself from pulling him inside her immediately. She pulled off his boxers to free his shaft and Zoya gasped. He was so huge.


She kissed his tip, before licking his length. Then she took all of him in her hot mouth. Asad growled as she was going up and down, rubbing his shaft with her hand.

"Please Zoya..I want you!" He growled and Zoya sucked him once more before trailing wet kisses until she reached his mouth.

Asad unbuttoned her jeans and lowered them along with her panties until they reached her knees. Then they flipped over once more and he pulled off her jeans.

"My turn." He whispered in her ear before he kissed her neck, leaving love bites here and there. He lowered his head to her full boobs and sucked her nipples.

"Asaaad! Please, I want more!" Zoya said, rubbing her wet and hot core on his shaft.

"Make love to me.." She moaned and he lost it. Asad kissed her neck and in one swift motion, he entered her. Zoya moaned and kissed him deeply as they were reviving this night they shared a few weeks ago. They made love on the bed, in the bathroom, on the ground and when they climaxed for the last time, they fell asleep on the ground, naked.

End of mature content.


Zoya woke up next day and felt the hard body under her palm. She snuggled more into his chest and traced his face with her finger.

"If being with you means that I'll wake up like this everyday..I would love to spend the rest of my life with you." Asad mumbled and placed a soft kiss on her forehead. They smiled at each other and suddenly she got up and ran to the bathroom.

'Morning sickness.' He thought and went to her to grab her hair out of her face while she was emptying her stomach. Once she was done, she got up and realized how they were both standing, naked and his manhood tightly pressed against her buttocks. She blushed.

"Mr Khan.." She whispered.

"Let's take a bath Zoya. Then will go find a Qazi to get married. I want you to be my wife Zoya. Not because we slept together, nor because you're pregnant but because I love you." He said and she washed her mouth before they took a bath, together. Zoya closed her eyes when he was rubbing her flesh with the soap, enjoying the feeling of his touch on her.

"Mr Khan.." She moaned when his finger brushed her c***.

"Asad! I.." She moaned and Asad entered her with his finger. He seemed possessed, drunk with her love and body. Each time he had his Zoya near him, he couldn't resist the need to love her, to kiss her.. to do everything but leaving her far from him.

"I'm.. I.." He stopped her from talking and kissed her deeply as they repeated their love making.

After a morning full of passion, Asad went to Zoya's hotel room and picked all her things to bring them to his own room. She got dressed and they went to the dargah to get married. Even if Zoya didn't answer to his proposal, he knew that Zoya agreed to marry him.

"Zoya, are you sure that you want to marry me?" He asked and Zoya nodded hesitantly.

"Yes Asad. I want to be your wife." She answered while they entered the dargah.

Zoya held his hand tightly, not even caring for the people looking at them disapprovingly. After all, they weren't married yet.

They saw the Qazi and approached him.


"Kya aapko yeh nikkah qubool hai?" The Qazi asked to Asad.

"Qubool hai." He answered.

"Kya aapko yeh nikkah qubool hai?" He asked.

"Qubool hai." She replied.

And there they were, Zoya and Asad Ahmed Khan. Zoya couldn't be happier. They were finally together. On their way to the hotel room, they stopped to the mall were he bought her a beautiful set of jewellery.

When they arrived in the hotel room, Asad carried her to the bed.

"Mrs Ahmed Khan..This name suits you.." He said and Zoya blushed.

"What are we going to say to Phuphi, Najma and Api?" She asked.

"We will tell them that we are in love." He said and she hugged him tightly. "It's so good to have you by my side Mrs Khan, forever.. I can't stop thinking that it's just a dream, that I would wake up and you will be gone." He said.

"But I'm going anywhere Asad. Now that we are here together, I'll never leave you." She said and she kissed him deeply before they fell asleep.

"Why are you smiling like an idiot?" Seher asked, standing with Asad in front of the sea.

"Today, I'm the happiest man alive. Zoya is finally mine." He said and Seher giggled.

"It seems like Ajmer is really the city of miracles.." She said."I had dreamt for my parents to be happy together, and you just realized my dreams..Abbu. Thank you." Seher said and vanished into the sand. Asad looked at the spot where she was, few minutes ago then smiled at Zoya who was running to him.

"Mr Khan!" She said and he engulfed her into a bone crashing hug.

~11~

Edited by Perriewinkle - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome updates
Dargah scene was nice.
Finally confusion finished & they confessed again & again.
Asad wanted to marry & she agreed.
They married in dargah
Last scene with seher was nice
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was cute n update soon n tnxxx fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing
They were successful in changing their future
A better one this time
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing updates
loved reading them
So happy that finally they are together
Was full of passion and intensity
And the marriage was a treat to read
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful parts loved it
asya moments soo hot
finally asya are married
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update
Wow Ajmer place of miracles
So Asya met they stay apart
They said goodbye then the unite after learning the truth
Aww zoya how can u think he is unfaithful
He loves u only and would do anything for u
Love the make up and the passion and the love
He knew she was having his baby
So he marries her bcuz he loves her
Sher and happy and she thanked her abbu
Love it
Continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesomes updates👍🏼
And hwwt one also☺️
Finally they are married now wow
Continue soon😳

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