ASYA FF:MARKED BY HIM,note pg 39 - Page 18

amazing update
plz continue soon
thanls for pm

It is a wonderful story ,, I enjoyed reading it ,,👏

Mai tapaki wapas 🤣
kaan band karle
i want to scream out of happiness! 😆
Aaa! Yayayaya
update agai *jumps jumping jhapak thampak jhampak * whatever that was abhi khushi me yad ni reh raha hai
aur tune kya kaha tha that ur surprised ki people actually tell me to read ur story na
to ab ye sun
i have exams and i wasn't coming here
aai b to pm dabba check ni kiya mai fb pe thi
and people at fb are going krazzie and texting me sara ne update ki sara ne update ki 😆
THATS HOW I KNW U UPDATed finally
😃
NOW I AM SO HAPPY
after a long time u wrote
m sure acha hi hoga update
abhi padha ni mene
mai to mtlb m dying to read
bt practicals hai
bt i'll come back here on 15th feb
and read ths for sure!
Mere pet me chuhe kuding
excitement se b
and bhuk se b
kyuki aaungi to review dungi
tera sar khaungi
spam kalunga mai 😛
Aur na bs tumse itna hai kehna
happy teddy day and apna dashboard check kariye kripya 😆
love u 🤗
bs yu gai yu aai
mwuaah
jb tk kuch aur b update kar
and links ni bheji tune other works ki?
Index hena tera? Ni ho to ABHI BNA
cya
enjoy reading the reviews
mai ati hu phr karenge dhamal ;)
❤️

Originally posted by: Persiko

nahi u unbuddy me...And add me again back after April...I April ki end tak exams naam ki bala sath going on a risky vacation till then IF and stories bye bye...Dua karna ke theek thaak lautun...phir kuch padhunga

pata hai...All the best 😳
acche se likhna aur zyaada tension mat lena..I know u will ace
hm tho Rehne do...delete add mere se ye sab nahi hota 😆
tumhe tho pata hi hai na m soo laziee
don't worry duwaa mein zaroor karunga. ..tumhare liye bhi apne heenu wifey ke liye bhi

all the best affu ki bacchi

Originally posted by: najma123

Yo. Resad the update. PM ke liye thanks thanks. good update. really nice. beginning was great. ending was great. beech mein - that whole asad roothna zoya manana and she getting pissed off, he getting pissed off was kind of annoying - in the sense thoda repetition ho gaya. hope you know, i am such a cool enemy of yours, thoda criticsism allowed hai na? dont feel bad or anything. i loved the whole update. especially the seductres bit. LOLLL. achcha tha. but so looonggg. LOL. Aadha karna chahiye tha. at least i could have expecteda n update nextw eek also. *sighs* ab ek mahina wait karna padega kya? Updtae revenge marriage soon. AND. gangster girl bhi updtae te karo - WITH a new chapter.

hey naj *hug* 😃
ji review ke liye thanks...hehehe...I get it naj. ..par ein kya karun...that's how I had imagined it...first scene is bEdrom walla where asad shows his silent treatment. ..second is dining room mango walla...third is office walla where she hurts him..And fifth is phir bedroom walla where they patch up ...I think the scene revolves in the same place plus it's zoya's repeated attempts isliye repetitive laga hoga..I ll read again n rewrite the whole scene 😳
Yes criticism always welcome...I love honest views n u know that...It really helps me improve 😃
saba ka phal meetha hota hai 😆
OKies ..Thanks for such a lovely view 😳

Originally posted by: Persiko

waise I think aapka next update April me hi aayega🤣

haaw mujhe uksao mat warna mein jaldi update kardunga 😆

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Mai tapaki wapas 🤣
kaan band karle
i want to scream out of happiness! 😆
Aaa! Yayayaya
update agai *jumps jumping jhapak thampak jhampak * whatever that was abhi khushi me yad ni reh raha hai
aur tune kya kaha tha that ur surprised ki people actually tell me to read ur story na
to ab ye sun
i have exams and i wasn't coming here
aai b to pm dabba check ni kiya mai fb pe thi
and people at fb are going krazzie and texting me sara ne update ki sara ne update ki 😆
THATS HOW I KNW U UPDATed finally
😃
NOW I AM SO HAPPY
after a long time u wrote
m sure acha hi hoga update
abhi padha ni mene
mai to mtlb m dying to read
bt practicals hai
bt i'll come back here on 15th feb
and read ths for sure!
Mere pet me chuhe kuding
excitement se b
and bhuk se b
kyuki aaungi to review dungi
tera sar khaungi
spam kalunga mai 😛
Aur na bs tumse itna hai kehna
happy teddy day and apna dashboard check kariye kripya 😆
love u 🤗
bs yu gai yu aai
mwuaah
jb tk kuch aur b update kar
and links ni bheji tune other works ki?
Index hena tera? Ni ho to ABHI BNA
cya
enjoy reading the reviews
mai ati hu phr karenge dhamal ;)
❤️

sue*hug*
Do u know ur antics make me smile like crazy 😳
that jumping japang ends with gillie gillie gillie 😛
lol r u serious 😆 tumhe fb se pata chala. .kisne bataya? 😳 gf nai?
haaaw 15 Feb. .itna zyaada intezaar
hm pehle stories upload tho karne do...accha suno did u read tgat os-pretend marriage?
banAungI index ...ek din zaroor banaungi 😆

loads of luv
sara

waise all the best ..sirf haste hi mat rehna...acche se karna tayyari n exams 😆 😳 ..best of luck

Originally posted by: EddyCurrents

Brilliant update
no doubt you are ace at writing

thanku eddy 😳

Originally posted by: BelleAme

hey aleenaansari 😳
yupp long long n super long...I guess this is the longest update I've written but not sure ..kabhi kabar when m into the scene words keep flowing n it's to put a full stop 😆
they don't need to comment automatic hojayega 😉
Yes it will bring them close closer n closest 😳

thanks for such a lovely viewview

love
sara

Hahaha.. 😆
Hope ur words always flows in future so dat we can get
More super looongg updates... 😆
Jokes apart i truely n heartly luv ur writing... 👏
U r tooo good dat i cnt help it bt to get into d story fully...nt to 4gt wid concentration n of course feelngs invovled.. 😳
Bt u knw wat i luv gangsters girl d most...bt guess wat story isnt reposted till now... 😭
Plzz sara repost it soon...i'm missng it terribly...
N dont 4gt to update dis story f urs... 😉
Luv u 😳