ASYA FF:MARKED BY HIM,note pg 39 - Page 17

I L-O-V-E-D IT...I have really fallen for this story...Do u know how excited i got when I saw ur name in my inbox,sara...u really r a great writer.I know this chapter was long but I dont wanted it to end..Look how selfish I am...I love EVIL JAHAPANAh Pls update soon...I will be waiting

Originally posted by: BelleAme

tehns ki bacchi my royal princess. .hiii...*hug*
is bar ye update likhte likhte mein sach mein thak gaya tha..but when I read everyone's views i forgot abt it...its always worth it 😳
haaaw tum tho mera sabse sweet reader ho...bilkul nahi karungi...u have no other choice but to endure my torturous updates..samjhi 😆
really u felt like that tehns..actually I re read the update there are quiet a few mistakes but m tired n lazy to correct them
ah!ur the first reader to come up with the million dollar question...The ans next next next update..*bada walla hug for reading so attentively *
I don't know y I just love writing abt angry ahmed khan...that was my fav par of the update...uff I miss ksg aka asad onscreen
dhadam? 😆 mast sound effect hai...

gangs story I ll put it up tomo

thankuuu for such a cute walla comment tehs
tehs

loads of luv
sara

🤣 N see on Y u would know what went wrong or not we only see the final product... N baby see I'm the smartest reader u will get..😉😆 And as I told u earlier I live the angry Ahmed khan... Hmm putting GG today means update ko time hai Kya?? Chal hatt pagli..thanks bolte hai...

Originally posted by: BelleAme

m glad to be back...I mean writing walla back 😆
no u r not wrong...n u ll know the reason too ..m asad will explain it to zoya in future updates
u like dean part..I luv dean in supernatural. .have u by chance seen it?
hopefully I ll get that writing grip back

soonish

No I have not watched SUPERNATURAL..

Originally posted by: BelleAme

Yes mera pm list mein mayur na ho aise kabhi hosakta hai kya 😆
ye story light hearted hi hai mayur. u know I get really bored to write a story jaha sab acche ho 😆 I mean V need the drama,action,spice,masala n al right 😛
okay kuch light hearted likhti hun 😳

thanksss mayur

Aapne itni izzat dedi who bahut hai mere liye...

Finally U Update...🥳

Awesome Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Was Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Beautifully Written...⭐️

Update Next Part Soon...😃

Originally posted by: BelleAme

OKies affu..mera naam delete karlo apne buddy list se...waise m waiting for urs n gf's story jo u both are going to write together. ..mein lilchoosa buddy karleten hun cos u send pms from that acc na 😉

nahi u unbuddy me... And add me again back after April... I April ki end tak exams naam ki bala sath going on a risky vacation till then IF and stories bye bye... Dua karna ke theek thaak lautun... phir kuch padhunga

waise I think aapka next update April me hi aayega🤣

Yo. Resad the update. PM ke liye thanks thanks. good update. really nice. beginning was great. ending was great. beech mein - that whole asad roothna zoya manana and she getting pissed off, he getting pissed off was kind of annoying - in the sense thoda repetition ho gaya. hope you know, i am such a cool enemy of yours, thoda criticsism allowed hai na? dont feel bad or anything. i loved the whole update. especially the seductres bit. LOLLL. achcha tha. but so looonggg. LOL. Aadha karna chahiye tha. at least i could have expecteda n update nextw eek also. *sighs* ab ek mahina wait karna padega kya? Updtae revenge marriage soon. AND. gangster girl bhi updtae te karo - WITH a new chapter.

Brilliant update
no doubt you are ace at writing