ASYA FF:MARKED BY HIM,note pg 39

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#151

awesome update
so asad was right that zoya is in danger
dean and sam saved her
zoya teased assd infront of dean
asad's punishment and zoya's revenge ws so funny
and zoya apologised to asad scene is so cute
when asad said sorry she cried when not she got angry poor asad
in sum up very very beautiful update
update soon the next part and please mention the page no. also

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was so Happy to see You again,Dear.😊

Welcome Back...Dear...👏

It was Awesome Part.😊

The way Zoya missing Asad(KSG) was so interesting.😊

Zoya was fine,Dean and Sam saved her,it was so Nice.😊

The way Zoya makes Asad(KSG) to be with her normal was so Nice.😊

Asad(KSG) said to Pa and Najma that he was married to Zoya,it was so Interesting.😊

Zoya teasing Asad(KSG) and his Punishment was so Cute.😳

ASYA(KABHI) love Moments were so Cute.😳

ASYA(KABHI) almost going to kiss but Pa and Najam came,it was so interesting.😊

Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊

Please continue soon your other Stories,Please...😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

Edited by PriyaCherry - 9 years ago

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#153

U with an update

Yay just when I finished rereading

I loved it

It was full of all the emotions

So he left for New York without her

Knowing zoya she would do something stupid

And she did

Thank god for dean and Sam

But tht is no gang related had to be zoya target

Omg jahapanah was mad but he was concerned first

Love the treatment he give to her

Silence ignorance it drove her crazy

All her attempts were in vain to get on his good side

Until she let out the waterfalls and the passion and want come in effect

He has great self control though

Omg Asad seems to had a sad past no mother love hope he brings them to the dust

So pa and tamater is coming

Omg he told them she is his wife

Y do I believe tht to be the truth and tht mangalpur story too to be true

And not made up

Bcuz what can be the link to them knowing each other in the past

Even his parents knowing her his ammi hating her and his abbu loving her

So tht goon nikaah so forth can be truth

Love the level they r at and the tease and comfort

Aww the salman khan bit and her dreams it too cute

Glad she knows early morning do come true

So war a way to wake up with ur WIFE in ur arms and early morning romance

And what a way for pa and tamater to find u

Ur wife straddling u and romancing

Love it continue soon plz

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

@MOnkEy_rAngEr

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Read all chapters together

Intriguing story

Plz continue soon :'))

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#155

I had to refresh the story again :-) Nice long update! Loved it and looking forward to more :-) Lets see how Pa and Tamatar are with Zoya :-)

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maria

@maria_awan

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Just read the whole story , its awsome and u r a geeat writer. Loved the way each character is potray and specially loved the mysterious asad and never losing zoya. Plz update soon