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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here is the next chapter! There is a mature part in red like always 😆


~10~

Zoya's pov.

"Mr Khan, are you ready? Haven't you forgotten anything?" I asked a bit anxious. This was going to be a big move. Asad would actually sleep next to Tanveer just to make her frightened. The masterpiece of our revenge would take place on the reception she used to organize for her son's birthday in a few weeks. She would get the shock of her life!


"Jaan, don't worry! She would fall in our trap like a mouse." He pecked my lips and I smiled in the kiss. Then he left, leaving me in our old room. I looked around and I saw a photography of Najma, Asad and I. I got sad when I remembered the happy days with Tamatar, my best friend. It was so hard to not hear her talking about her diets...

Asad's pov.

Tannu, your end is slowly nearing. And you wouldn't be able to stop it! I entered Tanveer's room and I quietly got into her bed. 'Please Zoya forgive me for what I'm going to do!' I thought before, with disgust I kissed Tanveer on the cheek. She got up and looked at me with wide eyes.

"Kya hua Tannu?" I asked holding her face. She got up and screamed.

"Ha Jammy!! Leave me alone! You're dead!" She tried to open her door but I held her waist and nuzzled my head into her neck. She pushed me and I looked at her in disbelief.

"Look, now I am injured!" I said turning around so she could face my back and see the fake knife on my back. I approached her with a glare and I gripped her neck.

"You know what? I'm gonna harm you like you harmed me!" I said then I held her neck and she wasn't touching the ground any more. I threw her on the bed and I said:

" It's just a matter of days before the real owners of this house kick you out Tanveer. You end is near, this a promise made by a dead and betrayed man!" She closed her eyes and I left quickly. I reached Zoya and I old room and I hugged her. She kissed me and I kissed her back. I held her petite waist while she wrapped her arms around my neck. After our kiss, we left the house and we went back to our home.


Tanveer's pov..(you didn't expect it haha lol!)

What was happening?! Why did I see Zoya and Asad?? oh my god, I was turning crazy!

"Rehaan!" I called my son Rehaan. This stupid boy had to find out who was tormenting me! Tanveer Beg wouldn't let people annoy her!

"Ammi? Kya hua?" He asked.

"Rehaan, you have to check up the house I've heard some noise." I lied and he did what I told. It was because of Rehaan if I had to kill people! He had to obey to me! An hour later he came in my room.

"Ammi, I found nothing. I looked outside and in every room there is no one in this house but us." I nodded and he left

Zoya and Asad's look alike were there I was sure. As I was going to sleep, I felt some cold air and when I looked at the window, I saw Najma! She approached me and gripped my cheeks.

"Kya hua Tanveer? You didn't expect it, did you? Your end is near Tanveer. Zoya and Asad's ghosts will haunt you until your death!" She said then she hit me in the stomach and the pain was unbearable.

"Do you feel it? This is the pain I felt when you take me from Haaya. You know? Your son's sister!" I had tears in my eyes as she pressed harder into my stomach.

"Leave me alone!" I shouted. I closed my eyes screaming Najma to leave me alone and I heard Rehaan entering the room. "Ammi! Ammi!" He hugged me and I opened my eyes.

"Rehaan there is..." I stopped talking when I discovered that only Rehaan and I were in the room.

"There is nothing, go to sleep. I just had a nightmare." He nodded and left before giving me some pills to sleep. This was a strange night! How was it possible to have such visions?

Seher's pov.

I woke up, feeling a bit dizzy. My neck was hurting like hell and my body was aching. Then I remembered the events of last night. This Anwar whatever his name was, almost raped me! What happened to Sanam? I got up and I left the room where I was. The photo frame of my ammi and abbu in the wall made me realize that I was indeed in my Badi Ammi's house. I went into Sanam's room and I saw her sleeping.

"Sanam?" I said brushing her shoulder. She woke up and looked at me surprised. "Seher, what are you doing here? Go back to bed, in your state you.." I hugged her and she hugged me back. It was so good to hear her caring for me.

"I'm so sorry Seher. I acted so bad towards you! You was left alone all those years and I was so childish. Please forgive me."

"Of course I forgive you Sanam." I hugged her tightly and as we hugged memories of us hugging each other when we were little flew back in my mind. I remembered how ammi said that we were the best thing that happened in her life. I cried on Sanam's shoulder and she cried too. I had finally a family.

Sanam's pov.

It felt good to be with Seher. She was a bubbly girl, her clothes were very modern and Badi Ammi said that as I had the behaviour of my abbu, Seher was exactly like ammi. The only thing I got from ammi was her love for poems. While the only thing Seher got from abbu was her way to boss people around.

"Badi ammi..huh actually I didn't ask you yesterday... but what happened to ammi and abbu?" Seher asked lowering her head.

"Beta your parents, grandfathers and phuphi got killed by a girl called Tanveer Beg.."

"Badi Ammi please can you tell us the story of our parents?" I asked and Seher, Haaya and I sat around Badi ammi.

"Well, everything started when Zeenat, your mother's Api asked me to take care of Zoya, who lived in US but came in India to find her dad, Mr Ghafoor Siddiqui. She was very bubbly and she had brought back the happiness our family was longing for after my husband, Rashid was forced to leave us. She even taught, Asad, your father how to love and how to live.."

"Seriously Badi Ammi?" Seher said laughing.

"I swear! When I asked him if he loved Zoya he was acting as if I had asked him to give away his kidneys!" Badi Ammi exclaimed.

"And what happened to ammi?" I asked.

"When your ammi thought that Asad had betrayed her with Tanveer, that was when we discovered that they really loved each other. But we later discovered that Zoya never doubted about Asad she knew that he didn't do such a thing. But she left to prove to us that Tanveer was just messing with our trust. And you know what? That's when I had taken my Zoya as my bahu. She had done all she could to preserve Asad from getting hurt even though that was the last thing she had to do."

"And what about meri ammi?" Haaya asked with signs.

"Meri Tamatar? Najma was very shy and she always feared to deceive Asad or me! I remembered when she discovered that she was going to marry with someone else than Imran, the one she loved. To protect her sister Nikhat, who was engaged to your father she had refused to marry Imran until Nikhat herself told her to do so!"

"And what about Ammi aur abbu's nikkah?" Seher's asked.

"They were very happy to know that their nikkah was in front of the Taj Mahal. It was very beautiful and it was just a way to prove that their relationship would be for a lifetime. Asad was like he had found a treasure and Zoya was finally able to shout on the rooftops that she had a family."

"And what about our birth?" I asked.

"Ji. Your birth. Asad was like a crazy man. I swear! And when Zoya had gripped his hand to push...allah miyaan! I never had seen someone crying like him. He refused to let her go and he held her hands for five hours, encouraging her when she was saying that he won't touch her any more. I remember how she said: 'Allah miyaan, Mr Khan never again you will touch me forget about giving them sisters and brothers!' The most hilarious part was when Haaya was born. Haaya was very cute and a bit big and Zoya was looking frightened towards an exhausted Najma. 'Ammi I'm scared. Will I have to push two big babies like this out of me? Asad! You're a dead man!" she had said and we all made fun of her! But not even the worst pain could delete the smile on their face, when Seher and you were born."


No one's pov.

The three women cried as their grandmother told them how Tanveer had killed their family. They hugged each other but were disturbed by someone knocking at the door. Sanam got up to open the door and found Rahaat standing in front of her.

"Rahaat!" She exclaimed before hugging him. He entered the room and almost choked when he saw Seher.

"Sanam..Am I sick or is there another you?"

"Ha Rahaat beta, meet Seher, Sanam's twin sister." Dilshad said.

"But.." He began but Seher cut him off.

"This is a long story." He chuckled and sat next to Haaya who blushed. This blush didn't go unnoticed by Dilshad who smiled knowingly. Haaya was exactly like Najma when she was around Imran before their wedding.

"Mrs Khan, well..actually I was here to ask you Haaya's hand in marriage... Not right now... I asked my parents to be present first but it just to tell you that I want to marry Haaya." He said and Dilshad smiled before asking Haaya through signs:

"Do you want to marry Rahaat?" She nodded shyly so Dilshad smiled.

"Well if you do want to marry each other, then I won't stand against it as long as Haaya is happy with you." Haaya hugged her grandmother as a smile was plastered on her face.

"But first, Haaya has to go with me to Bhopal." Dilshad said.

"Ji, Mrs Khan." Rahaat said politely.

"Please, call me Badi Ammi. After all we'll be part of the same family soon!" Rahaat blushed and after saying goodbye he left. He called his mother and she answered few seconds later.

"Asalamu'alaikum Ammi."

"Wa'alaikum salam Rahaat beta."

"Ammi actually, I called to tell that I have found your bahu.."

"Really?! I am gonna tell it to your father and sister right now!"


Zoya's pov.

I woke up feeling a bit sore from the events of last night. After our little escapade Asad had wanted to have sex with me and with my horny mood I couldn't say no..

Flashback.

We were going to our bedroom and Asad was kissing my neck, standing behind me, and letting me feel his arousal on my butt.

" Jaan, please, let's go, I want to be yours right now."

"Mrs Khan, I thought you had already understood that you were mine!"

I was feeling wet on my thighs just by hearing his possessiveness towards me was driving me crazy, as always.

"Asad, just do it." I ordered as we entered our bedroom. I put off my shirt and jeans and I got back against him, my bare back facing him.

"If you want so..." He said chuckling.

He started kissing my neck. Before turning me to face him and he kissed me passionately. He held my leg and I threw myself unto him, letting him feel my arousal just above his. I bit his neck then I soothed the bite with a small lick. He groaned and I smirked. I got down and I put off his tee. Then I trailed a path of wet kisses on his torso until I reached his pants.

"Zoya..please.."He moaned and I chuckled. We felt the same love towards each other as 17 years ago. I am Zoya Ahmed Khan and he was my Jahanpanah six packs, killing our love was difficult! Anyway, I took off his boxers. The sight of his penis always made me water, the way it fitted into me like our bodies were made for each other. I licked the tip before taking it entirely into my mouth.

Asad held my head as he was groaning and chanting my name. My magic mouth had an effect on him and I knew it very well. I was going to swirl my tongue around his manhood when he caught my shoulders and I stood up.

"Enough teasing Mrs Khan, more love making." He carried me to the bed and removed my underwear. He sucked on my boobs and I tried so hard not to yelp due to their sensitiveness. I felt his manhood against my womanhood and I sighed in relief as he was brushing my cl*t.

"Asad, please, enough teasing." I wrapped my arms and legs around his body. He kissed me, tasting himself on my lips then he penetrated me. He started gently then he gradually started thrusting in higher pace.

"Please Asad, go faster, go harder." I moaned as he pounded into me relentlessly. I kissed him and he kissed me back as he was rocking my world like each time we had our love making session. I was so concentrated in his climax that I didn't even realised that I was climaxing as well.

End of flashback.

Our passionate moments made me realise that I had to tell Asad about my pregnancy. I couldn't live any longer knowing that I was lying to him. So I made him a breakfast and when he sat to eat, I held his hand and he looked at me a bit taken aback.

"Jaan..Asad.. I need to tell you something."

"What do you want to tell me Zoya?"

"Asad I'm pregnant."

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ajanshul

Beautiful update :-)))

Thank you😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Waiting for asads reaction and defintely want asya to see their child grow as they missed out seeing their daughters grow. It really might be interesting also to see twins reaction. Loved tanu being scared. Thank u for the pm and do pm me the next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update
Sisters reunion was nice
Dilshad told them how their parents met & what happened afterwards.
Rahaat came for alliance with haaya
Asad scene with tanveer & then najma entry was good
Finally she told Asad that she was pregnant
Curious to know about his reaction
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Zoya is pregnant What will be Asad reaction?
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Originally posted by: tikit

Waiting for asads reaction and defintely want asya to see their child grow as they missed out seeing their daughters grow. It really might be interesting also to see twins reaction. Loved tanu being scared. Thank u for the pm and do pm me the next part.

Don't worry, they will see this little one growing up! I would definitely write the twins reaction! And Tanveer's end is near 😉 You welcome, don't worry I will pm you 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Lovely update
Sisters reunion was nice
Dilshad told them how their parents met & what happened afterwards.
Rahaat came for alliance with haaya
Asad scene with tanveer & then najma entry was good
Finally she told Asad that she was pregnant
Curious to know about his reaction
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

They are finally together 😃 Yep Dilshad told them everything about Asya and Najma. And Rahaat and Haaya won't marry until Asya find their family. His reaction won't be that bad. I'll update ASAP 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hajr

Awesome update

Zoya is pregnant What will be Asad reaction?

You'll see Asad reaction in the next update 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh boy Asad knows
What will be his reaction
So love the sis reunion
And the storytelling
But the best part was abt zoya delivery
Always knew Asad to be the dotting husband
So rahat asked for haya hands
So who will be coming as his parents nikhat and who

Omg so grossed,out when Asad nuzzle tanveer
And how can he still say tanu🤢
But his way of scaring her was fun
Omg tamatar came too
Continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anopama

Oh boy Asad knows

What will be his reaction
So love the sis reunion
And the storytelling
But the best part was abt zoya delivery
Always knew Asad to be the dotting husband
So rahat asked for haya hands
So who will be coming as his parents nikhat and who

Omg so grossed,out when Asad nuzzle tanveer
And how can he still say tanu🤢
But his way of scaring her was fun
Omg tamatar came too
Continue

His reaction won't be bad don't worry about this. Nikhat will come with her husband! I know that doesn't help a lot but you'll see soon. I know it was disgusting, I didn't want him to do that but that's just to scare the s**t out of her! Tamatar is a good part of this story even if she's dead

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