Qubool hai: a second chance [link for the second thread=p20]. - Page 10

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Beautiful chapter dear

Very heart touching

Wish they meet soon

Please continue soon

Thanks for the pm😊

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Very emotional update
Full family in Bhopal.
Entering scene in KV was nice.
Everyone in graveyard but miss meeting except haaya. She won't be able to recognise as they changed their get up.
Waiting for family meeting soon
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ajanshul

Beautiful update

It made me a bit emotional at the graveyard scene

Continue soon :-))

Originally posted by: anopama

Loved it

A very emotional update

So so sad

Omg Asya met haya and didn't even know

Oh so sad Asya had a son and he die

Poor baby salman

He thought he was superman

So much heartbreak Asya had

Hope their happiness is around the corner for them

So sanseh is also here now to avenge their parents death

So will the reunion be at the grand party

Continue soon

As tomorrow it's Karan's birthday and I don't have time to write an OS for it, then I'll update another chapter in a few hours!! 😆

Chapter 13

Aahil's pov.

I had arrived at home and everything I could think about was Sanam. I missed her so much but seeing her with this boy stopped me from calling her. I wouldn't let her have this effect on me. I called Natasha and I asked her to meet at a bar. If she was flirting around, why shouldn't I?

Sanam's pov.

As we went back to our house, I thought about Aahil. I missed him so much and this bas***d has left without saying a word to me! Badi ammi knew that something was wrong but I didn't tell her. I just couldn't share with her my heartbroken state. Seher on the other hand, even though I treated her like crap lately, she still tried to soothe me. I felt so bad on acting like a bitch with her...

Allah miyaan! I was a horrible sister! I went to her room which was our mum's room and I gasped on seeing the state of the room. Clothes were everywhere on the ground, there were pizza boxes on her bed and she was doing something on her laptop.

"Allah miyaan! What's wrong with you!" I exclaimed.

"Kya hua Sanam?" She shouted.

"Can you please stop talking this loud?" I asked.

"What are you doing in my room? If it's just to shout at me then please don't disturb yourself cause I have enough." She said and that was when I realised that I was very bad with her.

"Please don't."

"Don't do what Sanam? It's not my fault if Aahil is gone. I'm trying to keep you happy as much as I can but you keep treating me as if it's my fault if everything went wrong in your life. I'm done Sanam. I tried to change how I dressed because you didn't like it. I tried to be a friend and a sister to you when I helped you on confessing to Aahil your feelings but still I have something that disturbs you and I don't know why! If you want me to leave, then ok, I'm leaving tomorrow itself, Seher.. I mean Safaa Omarjee will be out of your life for good!" She pushed me out of her room and slammed the door. Dammit, what have I done!

Seher's pov.

I locked myself into the bathroom and I cried. Why couldn't she accept me as I was? I did accept her as my sister but it seemed to be hard for her to let me in her life.. I opened the music box and I listened to it.

"Why ammi? Why do I have a sister so different? Why can't we be close like I was with Maya? I love her so much already but it seemed like I would never be more than her look alike.." I sobbed and I fell asleep on the ground.

Dilshad's pov.

I heard Sanam and Seher's discussion and I was very worried. I went to Sanam's room and I saw her crying. I got close to her and I hugged her.

"Why am I so cruel with her badi ammi?" She asked. I kissed her head and I said:

"You know Asad was like you because his father had left us, I am sure there is a reason behind your behaviour towards Seher, you have to find it Sanam because if you don't you will lose your twin sister. Tanveer has already taken her away from you, from us, don't let this reason take her away from us again. Think about this Sanam. I know that your parents' loss is very difficult to bear but don't you think that she didn't knew about her real family until now, knowing that your parents are dead is really difficult but living while knowing that you have a family who don't accept you is beyond every pain you can feel. Seher has came here to find her family, and she found it. Do you really want to take this little happiness from her as well?" Sanam was remaining silent so I got up and I went to Seher's room. She was nowhere to be seen. I looked in the bathroom and I saw her laying on the floor with Zoya's music box. I didn't know how she had managed to get it but it was cute that she had this music box. I managed to get her to bed and I kissed her forehead.

"Don't worry my little sweetheart. Soon both of you will have the best friendship of the world. Sanam loves you to pieces, just give her some time."

I left her room and I went to mine. Allah have blessed me with adorable twins but unfortunately for me, having the same behaviour as their parents was unbearable! I went to sleep exhausted.

Next morning, Seher's pov.

I woke up early to leave. I had called Khala to tell her that I was coming back if she would be ok to take me back and she accepted so I grabbed my things and left, not forgetting my music box and a photo of my parents and phuphi. Rehaan had accepted to pick me up so I went to his car and he helped me put my things in his car.

"Miss Khan, are you sure that it's a good choice?" He asked.

"Listen Rehaan, I already love her to pieces but it seems like it's not the same for her. She keeps behaving rudely and I tried to accept it as her natural way to act but I just can't take it any more. When she will realise that I have a heart and her being rude with me is unbearable, then I would accept to go back home."

"You're unbelievable, Seher Ahmed Khan." He sighed and I looked at the window while seeing my home disappearing it was becoming difficult to realize that I probably wouldn't come back..

Sanam's pov.

I had woken up, decided to open my heart to my sister. I knew that I behaved rudely towards her when she had done nothing wrong. But I had a reason behind it. I was just so scared to lose her again... I had always felt incomplete before she came back in our lives and it was so weird to have her back in my life that I didn't know how to behave. I went to her room and knocked but there wasn't any answer so I opened the door thinking that she was probably in the bathroom but there was no one. What caught my attention was the absence of clothes and pizza boxes. Seher was gone...

I had left the house to search for Seher. Badi ammi was against it saying that I didn't know the city but I had assured her that I would bring my phone to call her in case of emergency. As I was walking near some hotel I saw none other than Aahil leaving with another girl. My heart broke into a billion of pieces when I saw him kissing her. How could he? 'Forget it Sanam. Your sister is more important than this guy.' I told myself and I continued looking for my sister.

I felt my phone vibrating so I picked it.

"Badi ammi? Is Seher at home? Please tell me that she's at home."

"No Sanam, I'm sorry but you should come back it's already midday. Come to eat please." she pleaded.

"Nahin badi ammi. I won't come back until I come with my sister." I exclaimed.