AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142 - Page 47

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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

<font color="#000066" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Interesting and a quick reading update I guess..😆👏</font>

<font color="#000066" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">You know if we see the whole story from Zoya's POV then whatever she is doing if we were in her shoes we would have done something similar...because she has no idea were would she be if Asad knows about her charade..</font>

<font color="#000066" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Zoya and Lily's moment in the Dress showroom was emotional and kind of sad from Zoya's POV</font>

<font color="#000066" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Continue soon.😊</font>



I agree with you Mayur. I am sure if we were in Zoya's shoes we would have probably done the same thing. She doesn't know how Asad is going to react only we know as a reader because we can see Asad's POV too.

That scene with Lily in the boutique was an emotional one 😭 felt really bad for Zoya

I know...I know this chapter was short...main bechari bhi kya karoon. Original writer ko blame karo 😆

Will update tonight...and the next chapter is little longer than this one 😉

Happy new year Mayur 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ksen

That was an interesting part
Beautifully written
zoya shopping with Lily was so cute and emotional
Asya conversation in last was amazing
Asad is so close to the truth
Excited for the wedding
Sure asad is going to be mesmerised by zoya's beauty during wedding
Hope nothing goes wrong during their trip to India
Excited for the next part
Thanks for the pm



Asad is not anywhere close to the truth as of yet
A lot will occur between them before he'll find out the truth 😉
Glaf you liked this chapter dear 😃
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Asad's heart is melting
So love is not far away
But I get the feeling that things will not be the sama for zoya



Because Zoya knows she is deceiving him
Asad is falling in love after knowing the worst about her
Feel bad for Asad 😕
Glad U liked this chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: allwaysasya

brilliant update
zoya is ready to become a bride
i wonder how will she manage considering lilly' birth certificate and password thing
hope asad find soon the truth of zoya
when the truth will reveal infront asad


Yeah let's see how Zoya going to manage all this
Asad will know the truth but not yet
There is still time
Will update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu123

awesome update pai

asya moment is so cute😳
he think she is totally different some times😳
continue soon😛



Thanks Shailu 😃
Yes, poor Asad is all confused
Will update soon
Happy New Year Dost 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Ms.Funnybee_

Awesome update.

Loved it so much.
Eagerly waiting for next part.



Thank you dear 😊
I'm so glad u liked it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Mine :)


Oh goodness, i dont understand for how long will zoya b able to continue this game. She didnt start it on purpose but with the passage of days the hole is getting deeper implying her fall will be real hard and impact her strongly.

Asad already feels she has two personalities which she swaps in moments. Its not long before he starts to put things together. Now dat they r gonna b together, things will get complicated for Zoya.

I feel lyk killing zoe. Such a self obssessed witch. Every chap dat goes without her inquiring the welfare of her sis n child, makes me hate her more.

I have a feeling dat its only till the tym dat she's enjoying herself, once things dnt turn her way, she will b the first one to tell Asad the truth abt zoya, in hopes of getting the money. U think im somewat correct?

Gonna read the next part now :)

Love



Thank you Nim for this amazing feedback 😊
Glad to know you are enjoying the story
Trust me even I want to kill Zoe
She's causing all the problems in AsYa'a life
You are right Zoe will be the one to disclose the truth
Bechara aasad is getting all confused 😡
Of course for her only money matters
Will update soon dear and I hope you enjoy reading the next chapter too :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jaanu013


Awesome update..

</div>asya convo was nice.asad..thinks she is a different person..waiting for the marriage part..thnx to the pm..<div>



Thanks dear 😊
Glad u liked it
Marriage in the next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update sooon.. I can't wait to read more..;)
And happy new year..:)

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