AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls # 2 ~ Ch 28(Final) Updated on Pg. 71 - Page 11

Originally posted by: ayat20

Very hot

Nice update

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

*Facepalm

Im gonna cry rn

😭

Why

😭

Awww don't cry
Everything will be fine
It's a good thing that she's leaving :)

Originally posted by: blueberry02

Heartbreaking
Da story took complete U turn
dis is definately not wat i had xpected yesterday
asad is a complicated man...
my poor zoya! Dont no wat happens now
nd i completely forgot abot da title...after reading da chapter only i realized wat it meant :-(
cont soon
thanq

Yes, the end was heartbreaking
But they really need this at this point of time
Separation will make them realise what they want :)

Originally posted by: KABHIrabab786

I only read beginning of mature content 😆
I'm felling sad for both of them 😭
Zoya wants more commitment marriage a future but asad only wants zoya he have no plans of future
I don't know who ditched whom but I'm feeling more sad of zoya
"If you walk out that door, we're done. You can pack your things and get the hell out of the RV, off my land." 😭
I desperately want yo read more
Kal kab ayega
😒

Glad to know you liked this update even though it was a sad one
Will update soon

Originally posted by: iluvarmaanmalik

Oh my God! It was plain amazing. Loved the update. Even though you are writing adaptations of different novels and are not taking any credit, I love you for doing it.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Love

Z.

Awww thank you so much
Glad u liked this chapter

Originally posted by: kobeb

Awesome update!! Omgg what's gonna happens nowww?!?!? Can't wait

Thanks
Glad u liked it
Don't worry everything will be fine :)

Originally posted by: Avie

Read the last couple of chapters in a go..

Awesome story by the way..😳

Love the way the story is progressing..😊

Can't wait to read what happens next..

Write soon! Thanks for the pm..

PS: Congrats on new thread! Well-deserved..👏

Thank you 😃
I am so glad to know you are enjoying reading this story :)

Originally posted by: cutie15

😭 😭
that was heart shattering..
they made love and it was so beautiful. .
but all these commitment issues are just not letting them to be together. .
zoya is right on her side and asad is right on his.. but then asad is just not understanding what he needs truely..
awesome update. .:)

So trye...it was indeed heartbreaking 😕
Both are right on their own ways
This separation is really good for them
This will make Asad come to conclusion what he needs :)

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

What just happened?

A complet U turn..

What is bothering them both?

I can't understand who is right and who is not...

But sad for both...

Even though I agree Zoya is more tormented but for me Asad is no less tormented..

U can't expect a person to change his thinking his perspective overnight..

It needs time.

But I will just wait for next parts.

Thanks Tehs
I know this chapter was heartbreaking
Yes, they are both confused and for that reason this separation will be good for them
Asad wanted only one night stand since the beginning...at last he got that. They slept together and she left. He should move on like he always does? But will he be able to? Let's see what happens:)

Originally posted by: MayurChan

<font color="#000000" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Plzz tell me thi is the only misunderstanding or problem you were talking about??/????</font>

<font color="#000000" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Or is it still not around the corner yet.</font>

<font color="#000000" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Continue soon.</font>

Yes Mayur, this is the only misunderstanding I was talking about.
The worst has happened...from here only good will happen 😃
Will update soon :)