AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls # 2 ~ Ch 28(Final) Updated on Pg. 71

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Shaila

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

aww they had a fight plzzz let them be together n tnxxx fr pm

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

& here we were getting happy😆

what a U turn d story take

Asad is so confused & complicated

Now I m thinking he accepted commitment only so 2 stop Zoya from sleeping wid some other man

I know he is in love wid her & has insecurities but his actions r giving wrong impression

Zoya was right in her place any1 would have felt like that & her fears r genuine

can't believe just 4 this small argue Asad asked her 2 get away from his property when he never said that even after many big issues.

Zoya needs her girly gang again 😆

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: iluvasya

Thank you my dear Jas 😊
Trust me even I like my stories being short only but sometimes they'll be longer like this one :)

Yippee so yeah finally Asad is ready to commit
But I am sure even you must have figure it out by now that this can be happily ever after
Twist is just waiting around the corner 😆
I have no idea what happened between Rehaan and Khushi. I overlooked their part. I am only concentrating on AsYa 😊
Will update soon :)

I know right specially cuz u get an easy access not have 2 scroll different pages & threads😆

Really in every story I guess till now u presented their was some twist in d crucial moment when its unexpected😆

Don't worry dear even I also care about Asya nobody else.🤣 They r d only couple I read stories & come here 4. And I was just curious cuz if not Asad Rehan would have been a nice match 4 Zoe. Just if Asad was not Asad 😆

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

I am just shattered right now. I though he was ready for commitment and just like Zoya, I understand something else.

And I could imagine slowly, when she realized what he was meaning : if it's the only way to have you, it was to sleep with you , AAARRRGGHHH, men *sigh*

I was a bit disapointed with the mature part, it wasn't as I expected, he was not at all guiding her, I guess it's the writter mistake or his way to imagine mature part, it lacks some sensitivity. It wasn't emotional for me, the chemistry was lacking in this part. Anyway, let's not debate about that.

The face off was really well written and needed and perfect. When the reality slapped her on her face, she asked the worst question, knowing where it will lead her : out of his life. And I can't be proud of her more. Asad was he serious when he said today and tomorrow? Was it a real commitment? I know it's the most that he gave to any one else, but still, two days woow, best commitment ever.

But in the same way, I can't blame him, when he clutched her clothes, I saw the Asad kid who always faced seperation, holding her clothes like it will keep her with him. All his fears were described in this short scene and this one was really heart touching scene. And when he asked her to leave or to stay, I can imagine internally saying : please stay don't leave me 😭

Complicated man, with huge insecurities and I can't wait to see what will happen between them. I hope this time she will leave and will go with another man, just to see and to make him realize.

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Amina...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

It was nice ...
Ending 😭😭😭
Plz plz plz continue soon ...

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laks_vish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

What has happened.mindblowing in thebeginning and end was sad...Zoya is heartbroken...Asad has never loved anyone so he is confused like hell...i guess with the separation he will realise his feelings for her