AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls # 2 ~ Ch 28(Final) Updated on Pg. 71 - Page 12

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

Okay! That was bloody brilliant. A complete U turn. One time they were so passionately making love to each other and then suddenly, he's asking her to get the hell out of the RV. Asad Asad Asad! You messed it all..

Twist in the story. And I love twists. Is she leaving the RV? for now I mean? But she at least has friends now.

Waiting for the update already.

I am so glad u liked it 😃
Twists and turns makes the story very interesting:)
Yup she's going to leave the RV.
Yes, at least she has friends now 😃

Originally posted by: noesha

Ohw god what a mess..

It went from superhot to really cold in there.. They are both afraid of the other one leaving. None of them has enough positive hopes for the other..

Loving it!

Hope you feel better now :)

Thank you for this lovely comnent
Glad u liked it 😊
You're right both are hopeless case 😆
But totally deserve to be with each other 😃

Originally posted by: -ovi-

awesome update

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: shailu123

What is this pai
At starting it was so hwwwt and lovely
But after that every thing change in a bit😔
Asad feel trapped😲 but zoya did't do anything😔
And now Asad said her get out from his place seriously😡 did he said that in anger?😔
Zoya is also right in her part
Now what will happen

Don't worry Shailu everything will be fine
I know this chapter ended on a sad note
But they do need separation to realise their feelings especially Asas
Will update soon :)

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice one dear
Asad fear controlled him & Zoya let him go as she want relationship not wanted to cage him with her. Hope he will understand soon. Waiting to see how their souls be mended. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

You are so right...it's his fear of losing that is stopping him to commit
I am sure he will realise his feelings after she leaves
Will update soon :)

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Turn of events😕

Is anything ever going to be normal between these two?

Please continue soon😊

What ever happens...happens for good
This separation will make them realise each other's worth especially Asad
Will update soon

Originally posted by: ksen

brilliant update

nice twist

both feel so insecure

felt bad for both

there is a long way for both to feel secure in relationship

waiting for tomorrow

thanks for the pm

Thank you dear 😛
I am glad U liked it
Will update soon

Originally posted by: iluvasya

Thank you dear 😛
I am glad U liked it
Will update soon

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

Nice twist..w seperation track cm

Thank you 😊