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Assalam o Alaikum Friends !!!

Hope you all doing best in your respective lives

Well here I wanna confess something, today I realized I started this FS in December 2015 and I was literally shocked 😆 sachii main

Sorry for being too much lazy but what to do guys life is busy so am I

But woh kehte hain na "dair aaye durust aaye" 😳

So here I'm with the last update of this FS

Hope you guys love reading it too

Finally now I have two FFs "Thodi Si Bewafai (TSB)" and "Woh Humsafar Tha (WHT)" and I'll concentrate on these FFs only... no more new stories *pakka promise* 😳 😎

Coming to my SS "Zidd, Zaroorat Ya Zindagi (ZZZ)", you guys know na I'm too bad in writing Happy Updates so guys have to bear it... I'll try my level best to update as soon as possible please have some patience

Okay enough of my blabber

Scroll down for the update

Ashii...
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Part 5

Zoya read Asad's expressions, she knew he wanted to ask lots of questions regarding Tanveer, she took confused Asad inside the house, first she checked on Tanveer who was in guest room, locking her room from outside Asad and Zoya made their way towards Dilshad room where Najma was trying to console her mother...
Asad and Zoya shared a look and felt guilty as it was because of them only, putting their thoughts aside they entered in Dilshad's room, seeing Zoya back Dilshad took her in a hug, Najma too joined the hug as she too missed her BFF while Asad shed few tears seeing the reunion of his ladies...
After some hugs and tears, Zoya decided to share her side of story, she told them how Tanveer tried to create problems during the wedding rituals, how she spoiled her sarree gifted by Asad, how she mixed acid in her mehendi, how she warned her that she will share a bed with Asad on her wedding day, she told each and everything...
At first Asad and Dilshad were angry at Zoya, she hid everything from them but later they relaxed as Zoya didn't fall in her traps and supported Asad after that fake wedding night... Asad too shared his doubts with his mother and sister, after knowing all the happenings Dilshad wanted to throw Tanveer out of her, how can she hurt her children, she can't let that happen while Najma decided to confront her but she can't as she had already mixed sleeping pills in Tanveer's food that's why she was sleeping like donkeys and they had a proper talk or else she must have interrupted...
When Najma revealed the sleeping pills thing, Zoya broke in laughter and Dilshad felt proud off her badmash bacha while Asad didn't like that idea because Tanveer claimed to be pregnant and this can be harmful to her baby, before he can worry about her so called friend Zoya and Dilshad scolded him for thinking so much for her...
Later Khans decided to take Tanveer's blood sample as they wanted to confirm was she really pregnant or not, they just wanted to expose her with proofs so that she can't come again...
Asad and Zoya came to their room, changed in their night clothes and laid down on the bed in each other's arm, they tried to sleep but sleep was far away from them, both were still wandering what happened in such span of time...
Asad: Zoya...
Zoya: hmm... she hmm-ed and continued playing with the buttons of his kurta...
Asad: thank you...
Zoya: for what... she asked and looked up towards him as her head was rested on his chest...
Asad: for staying... he almost whispered and tightened his hold around her...
Zoya cupped the side of his face sensing his insecurities and locked her eyes with him while Asad looked back in her eyes and both shared an intense eye-lock...
Zoya: aisy kya dekh rahy hain... she asked drowning deep in his eyes...
Asad: hmm kuch nahi... he said taking her hand in his...
Zoya: kuch toh hai Asad, btaiye na...
Asad: you sure you wanna know... he asked kissing the back of her hand...
Zoya: yes I'm... she came closer and brushed her nose with his...
Asad: I need you Zoya... he word out what he wanted...
Asad said with such intensity which Zoya never experienced, she blushed and looked down but Asad held her chin and made her look back at him, she was at loss of words but she knew she had to answer him back...
Zoya: I'm all yours Asad... saying so she hid herself in his chest...
That night wasn't an ordinary night, no doubt Asad and Zoya had already shared passionate nights but that was something beyond passion and intensity...
Next morning Tanveer barged in Asad and Zoya's room only to stop dead in her tracks, her eyes spat anger seeing Asad and Zoya together, she came out and found Dilshad in front of her...
Dilshad: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho???
Tanveer: khala woh hum Jammy se milne gaye thy...
Dilshad: Asad is a married man, don't you know its bad manner to enter in couple's room like this???
Tanveer: par khala Zoya toh chali gayi thi, woh wapis kese aa gayi...
Dilshad: Zoya is Asad's wife, she has all the rights to live in his house and in room too, she was upset with Asad but they sorted out everything...
Tanveer: lekin Jammy hum se shadi karne wale hain, Zoya ko yahan se jana hoga...
Before Dilshad can reply back, Zoya came out of room...
Zoya: main kahi nahi jaongi Tanveer, or tumhare kehne se toh bilkul bhi nahi...
Tanveer: Zoya aap hume ghalat samajh rahi hain, hum toh is liye keh rahy thy kyun ke hume or Jammy ko ek sath dekh kar apko takleef hogi...
Zoya: tum meri fikar mat karo, apni shadi pe dheyaan do...
Having no other option Tanveer excused herself but before she can go Zoya spoke...
Zoya: ammi, aaj main or Asad room mei hi nashta karengey, aap dekhiyega koi hume disturb na kare...
Tanveer fumed in anger and left to her room while Dilshad came to Zoya and twisted her ear...
Dilshad: badmash kahi ki...
Zoya: ahh ammi, stop being cruel mother-in-law, warna mai apne shohar se complain kar doongi...
Dilshad: haan theek hai phir tumhe or tumhare shohar ko ek sath punish karongi...
Zoya: woh sab baad main, bohat bhook lagi hai ammi...
Dilshad: go and fresh n up, main breakfast ready karti hoon...
Zoya: you are the best ammi... she hugged her...
Dilshad: thank you for the compliment, now go... she said pulling her cheek...
After the breakfast, Tanveer found Asad alone in the living area, she looked here and there for Zoya, when she didn't find anyone near Asad, she came to him...
Tanveer: Jammy...
Asad: haan Tanveer bolo...
Tanveer: hume aap se kuch baat karni thi...
Asad: yeah go ahead, I'm listening... he wasn't interested as he was waiting for the reports...
Tanveer: woh Zoya...
Asad immediately looked towards Tanveer, he remembered how many times she tried to harm Zoya, he wanted to kill her for torturing her but he needed to be calm...
Tanveer: aap hume ghalat mat samjhiyega Jammy, apki tarha hum bhi Zoya ki bhalayi chahty hain...
Asad: baat kya hai... he asked...
Najma and Zoya too joined the scene while Dilshad left to collect the reports as it was becoming unbearable for her to face Tanveer who wanted to ruin her children's happiness just for the sake of money...
Tanveer: aaj hamara nikah hai Jammy, or Zoya ka yahan rehna munasib nahi... hum jantey hain woh apki biwi hain par wo apko hamary sath kese dekh sakti hain, unhy acha nahi lagega, or hamary nikah ke baad wese bhi unhy kahi or jana hoga kyun na woh abhi chali jayen...
Asad: Zoya kahi nahi jayegi... he snapped in anger...
Tanveer: Jammy hum toh bas...
Asad: Zoya meri biwi hai, you know what Tanveer according to Shariyat I can't marry without Zoya's permission, its better you keep Zoya out of this or else she can object this wedding too...
Tanveer: aap ne khud hum se nikah karne ka faisla kiya hai Jammy aap aisy kese bol sakty hain, Zoya ko aitraaz kyun hoga, hum kuch ghalat nahi kar rahy... hum toh apki or Zoya ki zindagi se door chaley gaye thy par yeh bacha...
Zoya: hold on Tanveer... she interrupted... tumhe ek baat ek baar main samajh nahi aati kya, suna nahi Mr. Khan ne kya kaha? I can object your and Asad's wedding being his legal wedded wife, par yeh sab toh baad ki baatein hain Tanveer agar meri permission na li jaye toh bhi tum Asad se nikah nahi kar sakti...
Tanveer looked at her in anger while Asad and Najma shared a confusing look...
Tanveer: what do you mean Zoya, tum yeh sab jaan boojh kar rahi ho na, hum jantey hain tum Jammy se pyaar karti ho par Zoya hum yeh sab apne liye nahi kar rahy hum to is bache ke liye... she shed some fake tears and placed a hand on her abdomen...
Zoya: that's my point Tanveer, you are pregnant and Shayirat ek hisaab se you can't marry... she stated the fact...
Asad mentally scolded himself for forgetting such big fact while Tanveer was shocked to the core, her plan backfired, she needed to do something, and she can't let Zoya win...
Tanveer: Jammy... she cried... aap dekh rahy hain Zoya hum se kese baat kar rahi hai, wo nahi chahti ke aap apne bache ko naam dain... she tried to blackmail him again...
Asad: Zoya is right, pata nahi main yeh kese bhool gaya, Tanveer main tumse nikah nahi kar sakta...
Tanveer: Jammy aap... aap hamary sath aisa nahi kar sakty, aap janty hain hum pregnant hain please Jammy aap hum se nikah mat todiye, Jammy hum aap ke or Zoya k beech nahi ayengey hum bas guest room main reh lengey please Jammy aap...
Zoya: enough Tanveer, what's this Jammy Jammy zaida drama karne ki zaroorat nahi hai, tum mere samney mere hi shohar ko shadi ke liye majboor kar rahi ho... anger rose inside her seeing her cheap tricks...
Tanveer: tum jitni marzi koshish kar lo Zoya, hum Jammy se shadi kar ke rahengey, hum apne bache ke sath na-insaafi nahi hone dengey... hum tum logon se kuch nahi maang rahy, hum jantey hain Jammy apne bache ke sath ghalat nahi hone dengey, hai na Jammy... she said hoping Asad will fall in her trap...
Dilshad: tum jhoot bol rahi ho Tanveer, Asad is not the father of your child... she said entering the house...
All turned hearing Dilshad's voice while sweat drops appeared on Tanveer's forehead...
Tanveer: kha khala aa aap...
Dilshad: don't you dare to call me khala, tum jesi ladki ke sath mera toh kya kisi ka koi bhi rishta nahi ho sakta...
Tanveer: aap yeh sab kya keh rahi hain, aap janti hain na Jammy hum se shadi karne wale hain phir aap...
Dilshad: Asad ki shadi Zoya se ho chuki hai Tanveer or tum chahy jitney marzi jhoot bol lo, main tumhari or Asad ki shadi KaBhi nahi hone doongi... KaBhi bhi nahi...
Tanveer: I'm going to be a mother of Asad's child and you...
Dilshad was angrier, first Tanveer tried to frame Asad in her pregnancy and now she was lying again and again, she had listened enough of her blabber, when Tanveer crossed the limits, she slapped her hard on her face...
Zoya and Najma gasped seeing Dilshad in full on angry mode while Asad took the reports from his mother and read, his expression changed within the seconds and he lashed on Tanveer...
Asad: you lied to me, how can you Tanveer, you were my friend na then how can you lie to me, why Tanveer why... he held her arms in a tight grip and asked...
Tanveer: Jammy yeh aap kya kar rahy hain, you are hurting me... she pleaded...
Asad: mujhe Jammy mat bulao, you can't be my friend Tanveer, you can't... he pushed her on the floor...
Dilshad: I consider you my daughter, I let you live in my house and you tried to blackmail my son... tumhe kya laga tum Asad se kahogi you are pregnant and he will marry you, nahi Tanveer tum ghalat ho, mera beta bewakoof nahi hai, us ne tumse shadi ke liye haan ki kyun ke woh janta that um jhoot bol rahi ho or tumhare khilaaf sabot hasil karne ke liye us ne shadi ke liye haan ki...
Tanveer: you fooled me... aap hamary sath aisa kese kar sakty hain Jammy...
Asad: why, only you can lie??? When you said you are pregnant with my child, I thought you are lying, tumhe mera or Zoya ka sath rehna pasand nahi, but I was wrong you are actually pregnant, but that can't be my child because you are three months pregnant Tanveer... he said throwing reports on her face...
Zoya was literally shocked, she had never imagined that Tanveer will go down this low, she knew she wanted Asad maybe she loved him, but she was wrong, Tanveer did everything just to frame him in her pregnancy...
Zoya: I can't believe you did this with your childhood friend, log toh doston ke liye jaan de dety hain or ek tum ho, tumhare jese dost hoon toh dushman ki kya zaroorat...
Dilshad: ek aurat hoty huway tum itna kese gir sakti ho???
Asad: ammi, Zoya... aap log bhi kis ke mou lag rahy hain, utho tum... she came to Tanveer and held her arm...
Tanveer: kahan ly jarahy hain aap hume...
Asad: I can't bear you in my house anymore, get out... he said throwing her out...
Tanveer: hum kahan jayengey Jammy, hamara nahi toh hamary bache ka khayal kar lejiye... she pleaded...
Asad: tumhare bache ka khayal kar ke hi mene police ko inform nahi kiya, is se pehly main apna iraada badal loon, just go away... saying so he shut the door on her face and didn't hear what she wanted to say...
Asad locked himself in his room while Dilshad, Zoya and Najma wondered over the happenings, they were shaken but they were worried for Asad... they let him stay alone for sometime till then the ladies prepared the lunch...
Najma came to Asad and call him for lunch, few minutes later he joined them, lunch was a silent affair...
Zoya: aap sab itne khamosh kyun ho, abhi sab theek hai na so relax...
Najma: hmm Zoya aap ne kal Kheer banayi thi na... she said remembering Zoya wanted to share something...
Zoya stopped eating and realized she was the dumbest woman in the world who forgot her own pregnanycy...
Dilshad: haan Zoya tum kuch btaney wali thi...
Zoya: haan ammi, par abhi nahi... phir KaBhi... she said sadly...
Zoya wanted to share but seeing Asad somewhere lost she decided not to reveal about her pregnancy, it was the biggest happiness of their lives and she can't afford to spill the beans in such gloomy time...
Najma: acha par hum Kheer toh kha hi sakty hain na...
Zoya: haan abhi laayi...
Zoya stood up but before she could take a step, she felt dizzy and held her head...
Dilshad: kya hua Zoya... she asked worriedly...
Zoya: kuch nahi ammi, bas aisy hi chakar aa gaya tha... she said feeling better...
Dilshad: tum betho or khana khao, jab dekho pizza khati rehti ho... she scolded her...
Zoya: ammi... she pouted...
Dilshad: dekh rahy ho Asad, how much careless she is...
Asad: aami aap kyun bechari ko daant rahi hain, apko pata hai woh aisi hi hai...
Zoya: Allah Miyan!!! What's wrong...
Zoya stopped in her sentence as she felt everything revolving around her and before she knew it she passed out... Asad was fast enough to hold her securely and saved her from falling, he patted her cheek but she didn't responded, he took her to the room while Dilshad called the doctor...
Asad and Najma were pacing outside the room while Dilsahd was in with the doctor, few minutes later doctor and Dilshad came out and broke the news of Zoya's pregnancy...
Happiness knew no bounds in Khan Villa, Asad thanked the doctor and escorted her out... Asad was about to go to Zoya when Dilshad stopped him...
Dilshad: Asad... tum Zoya ko kuch nahi kahogey...
Asad: ammi main samjha nahi...
Dilshad: Zoya knew she was expecting... she told him...
Asad: what... no ammi, she didn't know, usko pata hota toh woh mujhe btati ya phir apko btati... he defended his wife...
Dilshad: Allah... why are you so dumb Asad...
Asad: now what did I do???
Dilshad: don't you remember yesterday Zoya wanted to say something and now when Najma asked she said phir KaBhi sahi'...
Asad: it means Zoya wanted to tell us but...
Dilshad: haan, kahir jo hona tha hogaya, now go to her and please usko kuch mat kehna...
Asad: apko lagta hai main Zoya ko kuch kahonga that too after knowing she is carrying my child, kya ammi apko main aisa lagta hoon kya... he sadly pouted...
Dilshad: I know mera bacha bohat samajhdar hai I was just saying meri beti ka zaida khayal rakhna hoga...
Asad: I'll ammi... he smiled...
Dilshad placed a kiss on his forehead and then ruffled his hair, she can't believe she was going to be grand-mother and here her son was still a kid to her, she took Najma with her so that Asad and Zoya can have a private moment...
Asad entered in the room and closed the door behind him, he came sat on the bed near Zoya and took her hands in his... Zoya refused to look back as she was guilty for hiding her pregnancy, Asad sensed her hesitation, he entwined her hand with hers and placed on her abdomen, the place where their symbol of love was resided...
Zoya: I'm sor...
Asad immediately placed a finger on her lips and stopped her from saying sorry while Zoya looked at him with teary eyes...
Asad: I should be sorry Zoya, meri wajah se your surprise got ruined... he whispered...
Zoya: no Asad, you don't need to say sorry it's my fault, mujhe apko btana chahiye tha par itna sab hogaya or main bhool gayi... she confessed...
Asad: no more blaming, let it be the way it is wifey... he said wiping her tears...
Zoya: so you happy... she asked coming back to her bubbly self...
Asad: happy??? I'm beyond that word, thank you sooo much Zoya, I can't explain how much I'm happy... thank you Zoya... thanks a ton... he said excitedly and dropped a kiss on her forehead...
Zoya smiled and showed his beautiful dimples, she didn't know how to react, she simply hugged him in response...
Zoya: I love you... she whispered...
Asad: I love you too Zoya... he hugged her back...
Later that night Khans had a lavish dinner in a five-star hotel and celebrated their new found happiness, 8 months later Zoya gave birth to a baby girl "Mahi" who was the apple of everyone's eyes specially Asad and Zoya who spoiled with lots of love and lived happily ever after...

Sooo that's it...
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Ashii...
Edited by AkaiBara - 9 years ago
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Res
unres

kal se wait kari thi

awesome
tanveer ,the evil out wonderful
u know if writers are much beter than friction show writters
u portrayed asad as sher but in show he was a goat

Bravo asya united.
loved the reunion with mahi

totally loved the fs.
wonderful
exotic

i oved each and every part of it

chalo jaldi se update other parts
all the best😊
Edited by ashlesha2 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AkaiBara

Assalam o Alaikum Friends !!!


Hope you all doing best in your respective lives

Well here I wanna confess something, today I realized I started this FS in December 2015 and I was literally shocked 😆 sachii main

Sorry for being too much lazy but what to do guys life is busy so am I

But woh kehte hain na "dair aaye durust aaye" 😳

So here I'm with the last update of this FS

Hope you guys love reading it too

Finally now I have two FFs "Thodi Si Bewafai (TSB)" and "Woh Humsafar Tha (WHT)" and I'll concentrate on these FFs only... no more new stories *pakka promise* 😳 😎

Coming to my SS "Zidd, Zaroorat Ya Zindagi (ZZZ)", you guys know na I'm too bad in writing Happy Updates so guys have to bear it... I'll try my level best to update as soon as possible please have some patience

Okay enough of my blabber

Scroll down for the update

Ashii...


koi nahi

ur forgiven

i would new stories also😊

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