Coffee with AsYa(KaBhi) Shot 5-Part 5, Pg 59 (22/08/17)

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Part four rocked!

Loved reading it

So asad is all set to make zoya confess her love for him again

And the first step is to try to make zoya jealous in which he definitely succeeded

The life scene was romantic

And then the last part was sweet with the roles reversed and this time zoya denying the love she has for him

Looking forward to know how they finally come together

Eagerly waiting for the last part

Please continue soon 😊

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#262

Loved the forth part
asad made zoya jealous again and includes riya in this game
flashback is awesome
first time bcs of zoya asad got scolded from his parents and zoya enjoyed it
asad is trying to zoya confess and zoya is giving him hard time
lovely update
Btw next update is near or little far(little greedy heart you know)
but update soon haa

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

dramatic to nahi...coffee main jyada drama...I don't like...hope you like jo bhi hai...😊

Ofcourse I will ismein koi shak nhi

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@Sp8699

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#264

Amazing story after some time getting to read an amazing story update soon and do PM to me

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Jas please read it now yar...

4 updts ho gage soch ke pda but yahan toh abhi bhi baaki hai 😆 ...Dhoka ho gya mere saath 🤣
& don't say please Depu actually 3-4 din se main waise bhi aayi nahi IF & jab aayi toh thodi der ke liye isliye pda bhi nahi 😳

Pehle tyt Hugs 4 d new flavour of coffee that u brought 4 US🤗
Chalo lets get 2 my review on dis bettersweet coffee 😉
nxt comnt pe 😆

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Hmm so Asya r bachpan ke saathi's & Teenage Lovers 😉
in which apni intelligent Zoya realised her feelings 1st but Asad didn't sigh🥱
Depu I loved all d flashbacks they were beautifully written specially last 1 in part 4 of Asya as kids 😛 awe Zoya wid her Teddy which Asad spoilt brat kahin ka 😡 Ab lagta hai Zoya should not have saved him from scolding all times he deserved it 4 ruining d cute Teddy Zoya's only frnd 😳
Coming back so Asad ne hamesha Coffee ki Rishvat deke khudko bachaya through Zoya & she being a good frnd always helped kabhi kabhi blackmail bhi kiya but still 😆
& When this turned into Love Asad rejected her awe 😭 Mera maan na hai at that age only while Zoya was mature enough 2 realise her feelings it was Asad who didn't 😉 cuz nahi toh who use Kiss kyun karta...Confused man😆
Khair than he left & uske baad se Zoya ki life turned upside down leaving her & her Mum in miseries & struggles which forced her 2 start a fresh life
Now that Asad too realises his love he wants her back but she is not ready 2 give in,... totally understandable why would she & why should she 😆 He'd been an ass & now she will have her sweet revenge 😉 main iska wait kar rahi thi but waisa kuch nahi hua & nxt part wrap up hoga toh revenge ho nahi sakta 😕 ab kya hoga?
Asad is still being his naughty self testing her, teasing her, Jealous bhi karwa diya but she kept her steel wala resolve 😊 She's close 2 melt down cuz she knows she loves him still but I feel kuch extra ordinary hona chahiye last part main 😉
Deepu u created a brilliant story so climax bhi damdaar hona chahiye 😉 cuz we have Rehaan also in d picture so use chodke Asad ke paas jane ki thoos wajah honi chaiye nahi 😉 . I m sure u'll come up wid something best 4 d ending 😛 So looking 4ward 2 that 😃

See maine pad liya finally ab give nxt part but aaraam se koi jaldi nahi hai 1 week main 4 parts de diye so now take ur time no need 2 rush...Relax sweetu 🤗

Suri, Binnu. Mayur toh hai hin besabre 🤣 but main achi bachi hun 😳 so u take ur time 😉
Take care & Love 🤗

Edited by jas91 - 9 years ago

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#267

Awesome update
Loved it
Asad on mission to pacify Zoya.
Liked jealous Zoya
Asad said right if look kills then poor Riya was dead on spot.
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm

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Aishwarya

@--Aishwarya--

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#268

Wowww!!!

Good job!!! 👏

Thanks a lot for the pm!! 😳

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Aishwarya

@--Aishwarya--

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#269

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: jas91

See maine pad liya finally ab give nxt part but aaraam se koi jaldi nahi hai 1 week main 4 parts de diye so now take ur time no need 2 rush...Relax sweetu 🤗

Suri, Binnu. Mayur toh hai hin besabre 🤣 but main achi bachi hun 😳 so u take ur time 😉
Take care & Love 🤗

Jash😲

I will kill u😡 don't do this.😡..I'm already waiting...😭

Deepu...I want coffee ASAP..plzz...