Coffee with AsYa(KaBhi) Shot 5-Part 5, Pg 59 (22/08/17) - Page 29

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Jas please read it now yar...

4 updts ho gage soch ke pda but yahan toh abhi bhi baaki hai ๐Ÿ˜† ...Dhoka ho gya mere saath ๐Ÿคฃ

Dhoka...nahi to...you said it na...4 updates ek sath padhegi...๐Ÿ˜†

& don't say please Depu actually 3-4 din se main waise bhi aayi nahi IF & jab aayi toh thodi der ke liye isliye pda bhi nahi ๐Ÿ˜ณ

it's fine...no need of explanations yar...I know tu time milega to padegi...for sure...i was just teasing...

Pehle tyt Hugs 4 d new flavour of coffee that u brought 4 US๐Ÿค—

huggies back ๐Ÿค—
Chalo lets get 2 my review on dis bettersweet coffee ๐Ÿ˜‰

ahhhaa...chalo...always enjoy reading your reviews ๐Ÿ˜Š
nxt comnt pe ๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Prinky-


Hey Binuu...Awe...coffee wala hug...how sweet...๐Ÿค—
Ahhaaa...loved this full of coffee review...feel refresh ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
m so glad you enjoyed...morning coffee...
will try to come soon with next part...
m not going to say thank you...but seriously it's a lot to me...๐Ÿค—

Aww..๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I'm glad u loved it deepu ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Haha..enjoyed very well๐Ÿ˜ณ
Yeah ..update soon...I'm waiting...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Good girl๐Ÿ‘..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91


Hmm so Asya r bachpan ke saathi's & Teenage Lovers ๐Ÿ˜‰
in which a
pni intelligent Zoya realised her feelings 1st but Asad didn't sigh๐Ÿฅฑ


Yes...intelligent Zoya and buddhu Asad...or i say over matured Asad...

Depu I loved all d flashbacks they were beautifully written specially last 1 in part 4 of Asya as kids ๐Ÿ˜› awe Zoya wid her Teddy which Asad spoilt brat kahin ka ๐Ÿ˜ก Ab lagta hai Zoya should not have saved him from scolding all times he deserved it 4 ruining d cute Teddy Zoya's only frnd ๐Ÿ˜ณ
haha...m glad you like flashbacks...actually that was i enjoyed to write too...

Coming back so Asad ne hamesha Coffee ki Rishvat deke khudko bachaya through Zoya & she being a good frnd always helped kabhi kabhi blackmail bhi kiya but still ๐Ÿ˜†

Yes...he blackmailed her but also tried to cheer her up whenever she was upset na...

& When this turned into Love Asad rejected her awe ๐Ÿ˜ญ Mera maan na hai at that age only while Zoya was mature enough 2 realise her feelings it was Asad who didn't ๐Ÿ˜‰ cuz nahi toh who use Kiss kyun karta...Confused man๐Ÿ˜†

hmm...confused man...he hurt her so much...but still that sudden confession...he never though about her in that way...so he just reacted...i know rudely...about kiss actually he thought he just take advantage of her and he was angry with his own behavior

Khair than he left & uske baad se Zoya ki life turned upside down leaving her & her Mum in miseries & struggles which forced her 2 start a fresh life

yes...that was another blow for her and changed into a totally new Zoya

Now that Asad too realises his love he wants her back but she is not ready 2 give in,... totally understandable why would she & why should she ๐Ÿ˜† He'd been an ass & now she will have her sweet revenge ๐Ÿ˜‰ main iska wait kar rahi thi but waisa kuch nahi hua & nxt part wrap up hoga toh revenge ho nahi sakta ๐Ÿ˜• ab kya hoga?

Hehe...yes she is not ready to give in now...she is not thinking about revenge...but also not ready to fall for his charm again...she had gone through a lot in those 7 years...and she is afraid now...what if he will leave her again...that was her heart's fear...

Asad is still being his naughty self testing her, teasing her, Jealous bhi karwa diya but she kept her steel wala resolve ๐Ÿ˜Š She's close 2 melt down cuz she knows she loves him still but I feel kuch extra ordinary hona chahiye last part main ๐Ÿ˜‰

that was Asad only...naughty and jovial...
extra ordinary...??? ๐Ÿ˜•

Deepu u created a brilliant story so climax bhi damdaar hona chahiye ๐Ÿ˜‰ cuz we have Rehaan also in d picture so use chodke Asad ke paas jane ki thoos wajah honi chaiye nahi ๐Ÿ˜‰ . I m sure u'll come up wid something best 4 d ending ๐Ÿ˜› So looking 4ward 2 that ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Rehaan...actually I just add him in picture for Asad...to know that she still love him...and if i add more drama with Rehaan...then yeh to SS ban jayegi...and actually i want to keep coffee shot sweet and cute...not much drama...still is shot me bohat kuch ho gaya...lets see age kya hoga...i hope you like the last sip of this coffee too...

See maine pad liya finally ab give nxt part but aaraam se koi jaldi nahi hai 1 week main 4 parts de diye so now take ur time no need 2 rush...Relax sweetu ๐Ÿค—

haha...how sweet of you...but yeh jo kaha hai tumne...be ready for the reactions...๐Ÿ˜†

Suri, Binnu. Mayur toh hai hin besabre ๐Ÿคฃ but main achi bachi hun ๐Ÿ˜ณ so u take ur time ๐Ÿ˜‰

Take care & Love ๐Ÿค—


Tight wali hug for my Achhi bachhi... ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: binuuu

Aww..๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I'm glad u loved it deepu ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Haha..enjoyed very well๐Ÿ˜ณ
Yeah ..update soon...I'm waiting...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Good girl๐Ÿ‘..


of course I loved it so much...it has a flavor of your love...๐Ÿ˜ณ
haha...that i m...a good girl...but you have to wait a little for the last sip...actually i didn't get time to write anything yesterday...but will come soon with last part...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Loved it
Asad on mission to pacify Zoya.
Liked jealous Zoya
Asad said right if look kills then poor Riya was dead on spot.
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm


Thank you so much Asif...
hehe...poor Riya...m glad you enjoyed it...
will update soon ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--

Wowww!!!


Good job!!! ๐Ÿ‘

Thanks a lot for the pm!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Thank you so much Aishwarya ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago

Awe...how sweet of you...it means a lot dear ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: binuuu


Jash๐Ÿ˜ฒ
I will kill u๐Ÿ˜ก don't do this.๐Ÿ˜ก..I'm already waiting...๐Ÿ˜ญ
Deepu...I want coffee ASAP..plzz...


hahaha...see Jas darling...I told you...reactions ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Omg

Absolutely loved it
Can't wait for more
I am a coffe Addict and an asya one too๐Ÿ˜ƒ
So she realizes the love still there
Knew she fell for her friend and he rejected saying is not love
But didn't know he kissed her is intensely and then regretted
Aww poor zoya
But it didn't take him long to realize after he moved away
Her memories kept haunting him and he went back to find her
But it was too late
Until now 7 yrs later
Waiting for the end
Soon update


Hey Anopama...thank you so much for a lovely comment
wow...you too coffee addict...hehe...m glad that you loved this AsYa wali coffee too...
hmm...he kissed her and actually he didn't regreat...but he thought that he took advantage of his friend and he was angry coz of his own strange behavior...
yes...he too suffered a lot...away from everyone...and not getting any news of Zoya...a guilt was eating him inside whole the time...
will continue soon...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Amazing

I love this
Continue soon


Thank you so much San...
will continue soon ๐Ÿ˜Š

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