AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 80

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Posted: 9 years ago
😃
Love Armaan
Rehaan is bae
So the other night
Asad and Zoya didn't really sleep together
Like she didn't lose her virginity
Okay
Now Asad is being a bum
As always
Again why am I not in this story so I can punch Asad
😆⭐️
So you're not gonna update tonight, in my timezone
😭
Tbh thats the only thing I look forward to at night
🤗
Loves ❤️

Edited by KeyaHira2 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu123

Awesome update 👍🏼
Zoya painted his walls what will be his reaction on seeing it 😆
Now a new entry interesting
Rehans story is a tragedy😔
Love asya moments totally



Thanks for this lovely comment Shailu 😊
Big hug for mentioning about Rehaan's love story
It was indeed very sad 😕
New entry is here
Updated the next chapter already :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#000033">Respect for Zoya farooqui in the chapter, she nailed it. She finally consider the fact to want him and only him. She will fight and let her pride away. As I read and experimented myself, there is no ego or pride in love, only compromise.</font>


<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#000033">I really feel bad for Asad who had to face her "rude" choice to want another man than him. But as she said, it was his idea.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#000033">I love her pov when she said, he already commited to her. Everything he did, his road, his thought, his heart went to her only. I couldn't imagine what will happen to him if he saw her with another man. sigh😕</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#000033">Still I don't know why she chose Khushi date intead of his choice, was she going to ask for Khushi's help in her plan? That would be interesting, if she involved other member in her plan.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#000033">This is so funny to see Asad's friend, there are really good to make him see the reality, but Asad stubborn, didn't feel himself worth to be with her. If it was not a proof of deep love, I must really lost my touches. Sacrify your own heart for another what a selfless gesture of him.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#000033">The small moment that they spent together like a real couple was only obvious for her and not him, I feel that he takes for those moment all that he can, before it went away, before she left his side for another one.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#000033">I am really eager to see how Asad will accept his love for her and if Zoya will succeed in her task?</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#000033">I have to applause to you, your choice of stories intil now are really wonderful, it's just a proof of a good taste and thanks again for sharing with us those stories.</font>



Wow such an amazing comment 😃

First, thank you for liking the stories I have chosen to share with you all.

I totally agree with everything you have said. It's good Zoya has agreed to fight for her love. There is absolutely no pride in that...you need to compromise 👏

He has set himself for torture and Zoya is going to play along. Hopefully this will maje him realize his stupidity.

Khushi and Priya will help Zoya in her plan 😉

Already updated the next chapter:). Enjoy reading it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: noesha

Zoya is gonna tame the beast. Its just a matter of time. He is never gonna find someone else who will make her happy because no one else is Asad. *giggles* Im loving this! Its could take some time tho cause they are both so stubborn I just hope Asad wont do something stupid in the meantime.. like sleep with some other girl..

Loving it!

Thanks for the pm!



She'll surely tame him 😊
Glad you are enjoying the story
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

Interesting updates...
Continue soon



Thanks Arpita 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Rehan already told Arman that zoya belongs to asad lol y doesn't asad accept he wants zoya for more than a night
Good zoya told him she's virgin now
Asads possessive n jealousy was cute but d scenario changed in restaurant Assad flirting with girls n zoya jealous lol poor zoya 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Have unres from chap 11

Can't remember the pages though
Loved,it and missed it
Where is last nite a update



I will go back and read all your comments
Just updated ch 16. Couldn't updated last night as I am not keeping well
I missed you a lot 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

I think u took an off for Sunday😉😆



Hey Tehs...how are you dear?

Yeah I took off on sunday :)

Actually Saturday for me...I updated Ch 16 on Subday morning 😊
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I fell asleep last night 😕 so couldn't update
Already update ch 16. Enjoy reading
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu123

Hope Ur fine pai 🤗



I am getting better
Thanks for asking Shailu 🤗
When are u going to update your story ???

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