AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 78

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

LOL Zoya painted his walls. Can't wait for Asad's reaction to it. He's going to like it no doubt.

Asad enters the RV before his home these days. That's definitely an improvement. A big one!
And Asad-Zoya scene in the RV was so damn sweet. 😳
Bring Armaan Malik in.Soon-iiisssh!



Ha ha so true, he's spending all his time in the RV nowadays 😆
Their scenes are really adorable 😳
Will update shortly :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurisb80

they are going in circles with each other...wonder where they will end up...



Ha ha I an sure they'll end up together only :)
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Very Very Good Part Pia.
Well in a way in Both have them someone has to decide and fight a battle for their relationship..and i am glad that Zoya did because certainly ASYA here in this story , Zoya is much stronger emotionally than Asad...
Oh my myy Asad is going to get tortured for what he is denying himself...& setting Zoya with someone else..
The Game has just started and i am loving it...not much if it goes to far in play..
Continue soonish.



Thanks Mayur for this lovely comment
I agree with you. Zoya is so much more stronger emotionally than Asad.
He is so afraid to commit not because he'll might cheat on her but because something he will do that will upset her and she'll leave him. 😭
Oh boy! He has signed up himself to be tortured 😉
It won't go far...you'll see that in the next chapter only :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafreva

This has got to be my favourite update till date!

I just loved the way Asad was riled up when Zoya agreed for Armaan...

This is so worth aawwiinngg

Asad has to realize soon...

Love Zoya'a spirit... and good thing she is ready to fight...

But why is Asad not ready for commitment?



Awww I am happy to know you liked this chapter so much
Asad has abandoned issue...he is afraid to lose her so he rather not even have her
Poor guy...I feel so bad for him 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KABHIrabab786

Awesome update
I love all his nicknames for her its so cute
That whole game part was fun
Arman malik interesting continue soon



Yeah I love all the nicknames he gives it to her 😊
Glad to know you liked this chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

Oh god zoya was so so angry..! She painted something that showed her anger.!
Asad wants zoya but doesn't want to commit but why can't he try and understand what does zoya wants now .. after making love with him..
And zoya she just cant tolerate the fact that asad wants her to be with someone else..
They both are in such a mess of desires..
awesome..! :)



He has his issues...he'll understand one day what Zoya means for him 😊
Zoya is right about what she want
Both are in love onky Asad needs to realize it
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: blueberry02

Woohooo!!!!
This is 1 amazing part,i really njoyed reading it
so zoya has decided dat she vil fight 4 der relationship...gud going girl
nd i hav 2 say dis...
Allah miyan!!!! Wats wrong with u Mr. Khan??? Y r u so adamant????
k so new guy is coming in da story,let him come...we r also eagerly waiting 2 c jealous wala asad...it wud b so much fun ;-)
nd zoya wants asad 2 accompany her in all her dates...hahahaha dat wud b torture 4 him.Bechara!
Dying 2 read nxt part...
Cont soon
thanq



Thanks for the lovely comment
Glad u liked this chapter
Will update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Manyata5

The last line!!

It was the best part of the update simple yet broad
It was all beautiful and i like Zoya's resistance...
Asad needs to see what he is doing...
Armaan seems an interesting kind of guy...
Continue soon



Totally agree with everything you've wrote
Glad u liked this update
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