AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#801

why why do u make us wait so long...i am just keyed up to know whats next..

Asad is so stubborn he does not see it is only Zoya he wants...

Armaan is too nice...

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#802

My poor Zoya, it was really an amazing and funny chapter. In the beginning of the chapter, I was like : No way, Zoya likes this Armaan already and will she really fall in love with him? But when he finally said that Rehaan told him everything, I was just laughing.

Asad has really good and understanding friend, they are really amazing 😃. And even Zoya found good friends and they all moved from the past.

If I understand well Asad, the more he flirted with women the more it helped him to stop his jealousy and thinking. Man, he was so possessive, why can't he just let it go?

The last part was really heart touching, when she confessed and how he reacted. Now, for sure, he will be convinced that he didn't deserve a girl like her, oh God, I though he made a big step tonight and it crashed at the end, 😭

Poor Zoya, really I felt for her, I can imagine the beginning of the next chapter (17), she will be on her bed crying from one side and Asad blaming himself from being blind to her need. This story is so beautiful and so frustrating in the same time.

Edited by radadolcevida - 10 years ago

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#803

Originally posted by: crazedfan19
ooh I am so excited for Asad going to a meeting with Zoya and her new "potential" husband. Asad is going to be so jealous!!! Great update as usual!!!! Loving Zoya's spirit to fight and make Asad realize his folly👏thanks for the update!
Aisha

Thanks Aisha
Glad u liked this chapter
Jealous Asad is so much fun to read 😳

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#804

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover
Where r u?

I am here only Aroo 😊
Sorry couldn't update last night
But did it in the morning ...enjoy reading 😊

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#805

Originally posted by: ASYA4eveAAA
Hey sorry to interrupt but if there're more parts to the story you need to make a new thread.
:D
And update soon.
M just dieing here to read further.

Hey there,

The story has reached only halfway...altogether there is 28 chapters..maybe I can update ch 17 on a new thread 😊

Thanks for informing me:)

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#806

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Pia..
This might be your first story which will have another thread..

So true Mayur 😃
I can't believe I'll be making a 2nd thread
But I have a question...don't I need to wait until this thread reachs to 150 pages 😕
I need to make an index too 😊

Remember when I posted my first story I couldn't make more than 20 posts and I had to count everytime I replied to comments 😆

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#807

Originally posted by: iluvasya

So true Mayur 😃
I can't believe I'll be making a 2nd thread
But I have a question...don't I need to wait until this thread reachs to 150 pages 😕
I need to make an index too 😊

Remember when I posted my first story I couldn't make more than 20 posts and I had to count everytime I replied to comments 😆

I think their is no limit as such...
But i will ask someone and let U know...
Waise Congrats...yaarr you are going good...
Ab Jaldi se Index banao & update karo...
Maybe now you can think about its thread and all.

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#808

Awesome update
Rehan already told armaan abt Asya. He was helping her to make him realise the value of Zoya & their relationship. She said it to him that she want to be with him only. Waiting for next one soon
Thanks for pm