AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128

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Shaila Banu

@Shailu..

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#761

Awesome update 👍🏼
Zoya painted his walls what will be his reaction on seeing it 😆
Now a new entry interesting
Rehans story is a tragedy😔
Love asya moments totally

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#762

Respect for Zoya farooqui in the chapter, she nailed it. She finally consider the fact to want him and only him. She will fight and let her pride away. As I read and experimented myself, there is no ego or pride in love, only compromise.

I really feel bad for Asad who had to face her "rude" choice to want another man than him. But as she said, it was his idea.

I love her pov when she said, he already commited to her. Everything he did, his road, his thought, his heart went to her only. I couldn't imagine what will happen to him if he saw her with another man. sigh😕

Still I don't know why she chose Khushi date intead of his choice, was she going to ask for Khushi's help in her plan? That would be interesting, if she involved other member in her plan.

This is so funny to see Asad's friend, there are really good to make him see the reality, but Asad stubborn, didn't feel himself worth to be with her. If it was not a proof of deep love, I must really lost my touches. Sacrify your own heart for another what a selfless gesture of him.

The small moment that they spent together like a real couple was only obvious for her and not him, I feel that he takes for those moment all that he can, before it went away, before she left his side for another one.

I am really eager to see how Asad will accept his love for her and if Zoya will succeed in her task?

I have to applause to you, your choice of stories intil now are really wonderful, it's just a proof of a good taste and thanks again for sharing with us those stories.

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noesha

@noesha

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#763

Zoya is gonna tame the beast. Its just a matter of time. He is never gonna find someone else who will make her happy because no one else is Asad. *giggles* Im loving this! Its could take some time tho cause they are both so stubborn I just hope Asad wont do something stupid in the meantime.. like sleep with some other girl..

Loving it!

Thanks for the pm!

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#764

Have unres from chap 11

Can't remember the pages though

Loved,it and missed it

Where is last nite a update

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#765

I think u took an off for Sunday 😉😆

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crazedfan19

@crazedfan19

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#766

ooh I am so excited for Asad going to a meeting with Zoya and her new "potential" husband. Asad is going to be so jealous!!! Great update as usual!!!! Loving Zoya's spirit to fight and make Asad realize his folly 👏 thanks for the update!

Aisha

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#767

Originally posted by: anopama

R
Unres

Aww Asad and zoya r going be at each other heads now
So she was pissed so she mural his walls
He has been hunting her attacker and going looney trying to find a man
He seeks the guys help
They try to tell him she wants hi a no a commitment maybe not marriage
But as Usual he thinks he is not enough
So zoya has determined to tame her beast get her man the man she want desire and lust for
The man who has been her rock
But she knows she has a long fight and a hard fight but she is determined
She will watch him date and he has to watch her play his stupid game
Love it he has to be present at all her dates he set up
Nice
Love their comfort level they r at he just jumps in her bed shirtless shoeless and arms open for her
I guess tht is want friends do right
So let's see how zoya plays Asad game and how zoya tame her lion

Hi Anopama. How are you? So glad to see you back.

I couldn't update last night since I took medicine and went to sleep early.

Glad you are enjoying the story. You are right...these two are so comfortable with each other. And such a good friends too...yup let's see how Zoya will take her lion 😆

She will...he's already halfway there 😊

Will update in half an hour :)

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#768

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2
My My

"I think that's the problem. It never does with you."

😲
Why am I not in this story, so I can punch Asad
😳
I like how Zoya repainted Asad's wall
YAS
Armaan Malik
😃
I hope he understands Asad really loves Zoya, so Armaan and Zoya can act in front of Asad
God Bless
🤗

Ha ha you want to enter in the story and punch Asad 😆
Bechara hai woh. I feel sorry for him. He is torturing himself
And Mr. Armaan will be reaching soon 😉

Sorry for not updating last night...will do it now in 30 min:)

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#769

Originally posted by: Applef
Awesome update..
Loved that zoya decided to fight for it..
Asad is so stubborn, confused and scared..
He wants zoya..
But he doesn't wanna commit..
He wants the best for her..
But doesn't think that he is what she wants..
Now armaan gonna be here..
Let's see..
How does asad react around him..

Yes, he is confused about his feelings
Let's see what happens after Armaan makes his entry :)