AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#561

interesting part

asya and rehaan scene was nice

finally zoya realised it is not rehaan for her

good zoya was strong and wanted commitment

wonder what will happen now

thanks for the pm

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Shaila Banu

@Shailu..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#562

U can't stop here 😔
Awesome update
Continue soon

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Jalpa

@kadia717

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Posted: 9 years ago

#563

heya
a very big sry 4 nt rlying in any of ur update...my exams are near..so i m nt getting time to read ur story..i egarly want to ..but cant...so after 16dec, i'll read ur all parts...

i m commenting right now to say a very big thank you for pm me eveyday even i m nt rlying..so thank you so much dear..u r really sweet ...lv u

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#564

Nice part.

They kiss finally..good...

But still they are still there...

I'm glad Zoya got back to her senses..

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jas91

@jas91

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#565

Hugs Pia🤗

I m loving this what a superb part😃

Yeah it left me confused wid Asad's last comnt 😆

but otherwise it was amazing 2 read

I personally loved d confrontation in 1st half😆

there make out undoubtedly was hot

but 4 me d 1st half did beat d making out 1😆

so Zoe in d end realised where its heading & stopped

Asad would b disappointing but wid his last comnt I think he's thinking about what other girls think that they want 2 b more wid him not just a night but Zoe want 4ever.

This is a double meaning dialogue I guess which Zoe meant in other way & Asad took in another

But Rehan's part I m still thinking why was he so interested when Asad told d topic & than discouraging at d same time when Zoe was touching him😆

4 last reply on my comnt I m happy u didn't mind me saying I din't liked d updt that's really kind of u🤗 Love ya 4 being so sweet & understanding😃

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#566

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani
Ooh finally tgey kissed

Yes they did

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#567

Originally posted by: mayurisb80
felt like the whole place just burned up...

Thanks for reading

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: cutie15
Oh god that was so so hot..!
Well asad showed zoya that rehaan doesn't want to marry as well.. he thought zoya would not think about rehaan anymore.. but zoya wants to fight for rehaan.. poor asad..
asad wants zoya so badly but commitment comesin between. . That was a really hot scene between the two...!
Excited for the next part..:)
Loved the update..:)

Zoya is not fighting for Rehaan
She understood neither Rehaan or Asad is the right guy for her

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Pia23

@Pia23

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2
Im speechless

Ha ha and I'm clueless because I have no idea why you are speechless 😆

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#570

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Interesting part..
Though what all happned their..I didn't liked it that much..
Will wait to see what happens next now.
Continue soon.

The end was the highlight of this episode
She asked it's either forever or nothing
He said nothing is for forever
She said then it's nothing

It clearly means that was the end of whatever relatioship they could have happened. They go separate ways.

Hope you like the next chapter better :)