AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 49

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: noesha

Loved this one!

omg a nude portrait LOL how is she ever gonna focus





Thanks dear 😊
I know let's see how Zoya will focus 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu123

Wow awesome update 👍🏼
So excited for next part 😳



Thanks dost 😃
Glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Pia

Wonderful updt yaar

Asya realised they r in love wid each other

but d way 2 confession is very long cuz both feel they r not fit 4 other

Asad tried 2 run away from his feelings by staying wid Anita but that didn't worked😆

haw he stayed away from Zoe 4 3 weeks & she was thinking about him😆😳

Liked Maya 4 a change she checked wid Zoe & got 2 know her feelings & back down I think

OMG Asad asked her 2 make his nude portrait lol

Zoe ki wicked demand ka acha jawab mila 🤣

now she agreed lets see what happens nxt😆

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<em>& thanx 4 ur reply on my comnt I m in rush so quoteing 4 that here also

So Rehaan is actually not into Zoe or Khushi just wanted 1 night stand but he's not a playboy like Asad.

He doesn't want Khushi cuz she has gone wid Asad so what I mean I understand his backing from Zoe 4 Asad but Khushi se kya logic plus If that's d thing why was he looking at her when Asad Zoe & Rehan's 1st hilarious official meeting happened that day😆

Confusion confusion or is he also clueless & will end up wid Khushi in d end 😆



Thanks Jas for this lovely comnent
Glad u liked it
Yes, Zoe tried to be smart but Asad is smarter
Let's see how she'll make His nude portrait 😆

Back to Rehaan and Khushi

Rehaan likes Khushi and want to have one night stand with her but He won't even try because Asad had been with her. Rehaan is not a playboy like Asad but just like Asad he doesn't believe in the institution of marriage. Rehaan did love a girl who was raped...and died later. That was the rapist guy whom Samar and has killed and Samar went to jail.

Rehaan still loved that girl only...he is okay to have casual sex but no long term relationship.

Rehaan and Khushi will not end up together in this story...they really don't have any story:(
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ksen

very nice update

loved it
finally asya realised that they love each other
but looks like confession is very far away
wonder what is asad's motive behind
making zoya to do his portrait
so rehaan has made it clear that they are only friends to zoya
waiting for the next part
thanks for the pm



Thanks yaar for this lovely comment.
AsYa are realizing their feelings and yes, confesdion is far away
Rehaan is trying his best to keep his distance from Zoya
Woh Bechara aise hi AsYa Ke beech mein phans gaya hai 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Loved it
Curious to know what happened next
Thanks for pm



Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

Hey ... I loved this chappy a lot😃u knw I thought that asad will misbehave wd her but thank God at least he was own self even though he approached her after three total weeks

Zoya is so confused...plus what's going on in asad's mind yaar... when will he see her scars...I am waiting for tht scene...I m inwardly hoping that scene will give a new direction to asya's love story


Looking forward to next chappy...update soon😊
-aroo



Hi Aroo,

Thanks for reading and comnenting 😃
Glad to know you liked this chapter
Asad's POV will come in the next chapter and why he started talking to her after ignoring for three weeks
Asad will see her scars but there is still some more time for it
And her scars will not give a new dimension to their love story...he will be affected for sure though 😕
Will updated the next part tonight :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima30

Read chapter 8 and 9 together
Loved them!
Asya have got it bad for one another
Looking forward to reading on about the portrait! Lol
Should be very interesting

Thank you for the PM



Hi Fatima, felt good to read your feedback 😃
I was starting to miss you :)
Glad you liked both ch 8 and 9:)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



Hi Aroo,

Thanks for reading and comnenting 😃
Glad to know you liked this chapter
Asad's POV will come in the next chapter and why he started talking to her after ignoring for three weeks
Asad will see her scars but there is still some more time for it
And her scars will not give a new dimension to their love story...he will be affected for sure though 😕
Will updated the next part tonight :)


Hey back😊
Firstly I would love to know your name dear...
Lol with your reply I felt a little scared...I hope he won't ignore her and zoya's fear would come true... I hope I m wrong...
Plus as there is time difference in mine's and your's place can u tell me in how many hours u will update as it's already mid night here
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover



Hey back😊
Firstly I would love to know your name dear...
Lol with your reply I felt a little scared...I hope he won't ignore her and zoya's fear would come true... I hope I m wrong...
Plus as there is time difference in mine's and your's place can u tell me in how many hours u will update as it's already mid night here



Hey Aroo, I'm Pia. I love in Los Angeles so yeah we have a huge time difference. Currently it's 2 in the afternoon and I usually try to update by 7 in the evening.

Well, some misunderstanding is definitely going to happen in future but at the end it will be all good :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
its blowing hot and cold with Asad and Zoya...will tonight be what blows HOT and boils over...

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