ASYA/Kabhi SS: Bittersweet Revenge Ch.10/Page.14

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sighs. New Drabble. This one won't be long updates like the other ones.
Starting this alongside Kuch Toh Log Kahenge. Another one that has been hidden away in the back of my mind for a year or two. Let me know if you want to read, dropping a quick shitty prologue now! Much love <3

ASYA/KaBhi SS: Bittersweet Revenge


PROLOGUE

Her heels echoed into the distance as her heartbeats matched her steps. She nodded at her driver who came running towards her and clutched the suitcase against him. He opened the car door allowing her to settle inside the car. Her eyes darted towards her phone,

"Welcome to India, Miss Farooqui!"

She removed her Ray Bans and stared out of the window as a smile played on her lips.

Asad anxiously tapped his foot waiting for his guest to arrive. He breathed out as he stood on the balcony and stared into the distant.

"The room looks good big bro!" Ayaan fell back onto the king size bed. "It feels good to see this room open after so long! I don't know why mumani fought with abbu to keep this room shut. If only she agreed sooner, this could have been my room!" He closed his eyes hearing his brother grumble outside. "Bro, she will come soon don't worry!" He jumped up and joined his brother outside. "She isn't going to arrive any sooner by looking at the roads like that" Asad elbowed Ayaan in the stomach before chasing him inside.

"This is all work related!" Asad clarified his feelings.

"When did I say this was heart related?" Ayaan shrugged his shoulders teasingly. Asad fisted his hands, Dilshad burst out laughing outside the door.

"What is happening here? Is she here?" Dilshad asked, Ayaan looked at Asad with a smirk. Everyone looked towards the balcony; Asad's eyes opened wide hearing a car.

"She's here!!"Ayaan jumped excitedly. He looked towards Asad, "Your business partner is here" Ayaan grinned. Asad coughed trying to regain his composure. He glanced at his mother before walking downstairs to greet his guest.

Zoya stepped out of the car and looked at the familiar white mansion. Vivid images of her past and present flashed before her eyes. She held the phone in front of her with her thumb brushing the same spot again and again,

"I'm here Simpleton!" Zoya walked towards the lawn. She has arrived but she hasn't reached her destination. She turned her back towards the mansion and wiped the lone tear escaping her eyes.

"Miss Farooqui, you're finally here!" She heard his voice. She turned on her heels instantly with a smile on her face. She was here. And she wanted revenge.

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radadolcevida thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
interesting one and really intriguing one

You start a lot of stories dear and all of them are wonderful.

Continue soon

PS: love the title very much 😃
Edited by radadolcevida - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting one..
really excited to read more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very Good and an Interesting Start Mojo...
Well going by this...Is Asad Unaware of the REVENGE...?
And Why Zoya wants Revenge & from Whom..?
Questions Questions & Questions...
Well I also have a Question...this is nowhere Related to the plots on which U debated about...still I am looking forward to this One..
Plzz Update this fast and soonnish..
Take Care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sounds interesting. continue soonish
thanks for the pm
😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Wow this is another new one
So zoya comes to India
As a sad business partner
But it seems Asad likes her
But she seems out for revenge
Is it against him and his family
Or is it against mumani
Continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really interesting prologue
And really intriguing too
Really excited for it to know what is it all about
Please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow.. a revenge story is here
my favourite category of story..
feeling very excited to read this one...
so..zoya is here to take revenge...
is it from asad...or someone else..
for what...
lot of questions are arising in mind..
waiting to know the reasons.. and where to this revenge will lead...
continue ASAP.. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ok...I'm hooked
This is tooo good to ignore...
feeling excited!
Asad likes Zoya a lot
But Zoya wants revenge...from whom?

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