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MonnaS

@msingh27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

amazing update..beautiful story..can't wait to see what happens next...is zoya fighting some kind of disease???hope not...

hope our asya resolve whatever the issue is between them.

Thanks much for the PM..Looking forward to the next chapter

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9849565007

@9849565007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Amazing update..Asad hurting ..Zoya too .. waiting for the story to unfold

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asya7

@asya7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Amina...
Awesome Update👍🏼
Very beautifully Written ...!!!
Loved It❤️

thank you very much 😃

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Very nice concept...

read both parts in one go...& I loved it...

continue soon...

Thanks for pm 😊

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asya7

@asya7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: cutie15
Oh god this is so intense.. I loved both the parts..
awesome concept and superb writing. .
Plz plz do pm me the next time you update..
this is amazing..:)
Update soon..:)

Thanks a lot for this lovely comment dear. I will surely pm you the next part. I am sending you a buddy request for this. Please accept it as it will make my job easy😃

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

@MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

So beautiful update

All the emotions r portrayed beautifully

Y DID ASYA GOT SEPARATED

WHAT HAD HAPPENED TO ZOYA

ASYA IN SO MUCH PAIN

LOVED THE WHOLE UPDATE

CONTINUE SOON :-))

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Hugs Titir🤗

Hope u have been fine😊

awe net pack main problem hope u get it sorted soon cuz it's quite frustrating like that

coming 2 updt like always u have done a splendid job at that👏👏

So Zoe managed 2 flee that day awe poor Asad

can perfectly understand him he after 2 long yrs got his love back & lost again widin few minutes

His monologues were wonderfully penned

poor him was so dishearten his pain helplessness could b easily seen

& than he met Zoe again

This time he asked d questions which r paining him from so long & his pain has been amazingly penned

Zoe tried 2 veil her pain from him although she was breaking inside

& her breakdown in d end tells a different tail

Don't tell me Titr she's suffering from some incurable disease & will die

cuz let me warn u I don't like sad stories isliye mujhe pehle hi bta dena if u r going on that road😔

& rest it was an amazing updt Titir I enjoyed it😃

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: asya7
jas🤗
And one for surbhi too🤗
I am fine.it is great to see you back 😃
🤣 i can understand your frustration. But i am really hopeless in this matter 😆
By the way i love it when you scold like that 😉 in fact whever i start a new story i wait when you will comment and scold me for starting a new one 😆 i actually get kinda scred 😆
And trust me, all these stories which i am writing is born in my mind even before joining IF. These has completely filled my mind and the only way of clearing my mind for studies is to pen down all these. If i dont write then i wont get the energy to fight the hords of exams. I cant stop myself from sharing these with you all. And dint worry mom wont bann my writing because she is tge one who supports and understands me the most 😃
I am happy that you are liking it. There is more layers to the story and twists too which will come out soon. Hope you will like it in future too 😳
Dont be upset please. As soon as i get decent number of likes for my updates I will post the next one 😃

Hugs back Titir🤗

Hehe yeah back finally but than caught wid fever lol now I m fine😆

My problem is not ur frequent line of new stories its that whenever u start new story ur focus turns 2 that & updts 4 d previous 1 reduces. It happened wid WOLR & now again u r giving updts 4 this 1 so see. And d other ting is I don't want ur studies 2 get affected now that u told me its like a stress buster 4 u 2 get these out of ur mind on concentrate on ur studies but still. Here ppl couldn't handle 1 story at a time & u start 1 after d other so quickly.

These r my 2 big reasons 2 stop u. U see the continuity breaks of 1 story & when we (i) read it after long time I seldom forgets what happened in d last part so I prefer 1 story at a time once that's finished start new 1.

But sigh u don't listen infact u toh look forfard 2 my scolding😲 isse kehte hai dheedth bache

About ur Mom I know she's supper supportive & d awesomest coolest mom I remember ur very 1st stories note where u mentioned that & also have d hint of it after reading ur last TS 😉😆

Chalo take care will see ya soon 😃

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Awesome update
Their confrontation was nice. Asad wanted to know that the reason but she tackled him beautifully. Curious to know why she did like that. Hope it's not something serious. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm